O3O

nah i liked the sweet ending more
good work

8871205
There are a few ideas rattling around for these two in the future so I hope you stick around. If nothing else they might make an appearance again around Halloween time!!!

I honestly expected her to keep Button as a boy toy or something. That said, not disappointed in either ending, though I think I prefer this one as it's the more 'realistic' scenario since every villain seems to get imprisoned.

8871238
SPOILERS M8!

8871256
Aight, my mistake mate. Dunno how I forgot :/ that usually doesn't happen

If I may?; wouldn’t it make more sense to have the bad ending first, then good?

8871420
It's a CYOA ending. Choose whichever you'd prefer!

8871256
Well that certainly happened i hope Button is able to beat her... Somehow

Good ending: sweet and heartfelt.

Bad ending: Equestria is screwed.

8871216given the ending of the good ending saying and i quote "but that's a story for another time" that practically DEMANDS a sequel... cant wait for you to get inspired from something perhaps my story can be of inspiration when button and laruam are introduced in my story? it will definitely be in one o the chapters i haven't "published" yet

tbh, combine the beginning of this but change up the everything after with the happy ending anddatsweetghostimpregnation and we're golden but nicely done, regardless.

Whoo!

8871741
A rather prudent observation and one that people should not fail to miss...

8872181
I do like the idea of an ending where Evil Lauram is turned good through the Magic of Friendship (with Benefits)

Considering how this was built up, I was expecting something sexy for the ending. Both endings were, in my opinion, incredibly un-sexy.

https://youtu.be/17KmNrG9pE4

8872352
This was one of those things where, regardless of which direction I took it, somebody would be unhappy.
Heartwarming and kinda "awwwww" ending?
Smutty evil and cliche ending?
Cheesy "friendship through fuckery?"
etc etc etc

I really do appreciate the feedback though and am always trying to grow as an author. I will say that I'm sure there will be more between these two in the future at some point.

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I was just expecting some kinky ghost sex. The way it was being built up I was expecting some AV or hyper ponuts or supernatural/magic aided pleasuring. None of that happened.

“I mean, yea it’s a little weird,” Sweetie Belle said as she leaned in to inspect the painting, “but what thing? It’s just a well in a creepy forest.”

I got to right here and this story did something hundreds of scary stories haven't... gave me the chills. Full body. I've written and read the best and worst, and this, after three pages, gets a fav based solely on the descriptive narrative of a painting.

*serious applause*
Wow!

Both endings had merit.
I'd think one with a combination of both would have sufficed.

Overall a great story that turned good.
👍🏽

8882195
Thanks dude, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! It was fun as hell to write creepy stuff again. ^^

For she comes to suck his very soul, among other things.

You are a horrible person and I love you

8897916
So I can watch that haunted VHS.

8899683
...... so .... I watch a scene from the ring were the girl comes out of the TV.... god that's fucking creepy

I liked the good ending more, but I was hoping for more sexytimes as a payoff. Especially because all the buttfun that was going on earlier was starting to get good. Nonetheless, it was a surprisingly good story with a lot more to it than I expected.

Haven't seen anything remotely this good in a while!
Also that plot twist tho.

In english?

8953140
"In English" what?

The story is written in english, yes!

No, in English means, it's a expression for explain it without fancy words or long exclamations.

Laruam endings:
Good: cannon
Bad: non-cannon
After all, I would be friends with Laruam than trap her with that cursed painting, if she was revived into a normal Pony and breaking the curse with the painting then I will break the painting and no pony would be cursed again, and she can live freely so she could be introduced to the items of 2017.

So i choose the good ending.

Oh and by the way do you have a OC picture about laruam?

8953266
There's some work of her on Derpi! Feel free to find her up there! (Can't post NSFW links on FIM Fiction)

What is your derpibooru name?

8953287
Some_Leech

I like the sweet ending better.

More. Honestly think it would have been better if it had been much longer, with it being scary for a lot longer, but it was enjoyable. Also more sex would always be nice lol.

The Rim
The Rim 2: The rimining
The Rimming
Loved your story!

Meth😩, can't argue with that, unless it's a bad comment.

whew

Damn. Those endings though.

Most excellent.

9046360
I like the sound of that.

That was good! Both endings were good for their own reasons but I like the good ending. This needs a sequel!

So she still "wants" button, Ieam why bother with someone who won't benefit you, unless there's something more. Hmmmh button Los his virginity to a super lnatural phenomenon and that thing is in love with him

All and all a lovely book. I expected the bad ending with button dying but I was even happier with the ending.

The bad and good ending was basically structured around the loyalty of a character named switch
if switch was loyal, the mare ends up being buttons mistress
If switch cheated on her, button would have a "haunting " lover

All in all beautiful story and I loved it

Surprised sweetie didn't get jealous

9729651
Glad you enjoyed it! ^^

9731129
An artist known as badumsquish? He draws cute, weird, sexy things; monster ponies; and on an unrelated note is very, very gay.

9227033
no disrespect but why does your profile pci looks like a female uncorn version of button

10058280
Get your eyes checked, son, the colour is VERY different.

10083393
I am sorry if i come off as rude i just enjoy the content you push out and thrust upon us mortals.

setconditionalbranch.if:switchloyalty="true" Call Event: Good Ending
setconditionalbranch.if:switchloyalty="false" Call Event: Game Over