aaaaw! this is so sweet i love it! its good to know a bit more about her now... also laruam... how do you pronounce that? im pretty sure given my slight knowledge of foreign pronunciation that loqueris is pronounced lokeris but as for what i think button should do? JUST DO IT BUTTON! SHE'S LITERALLY OFFERING HERSELF TO YOU! DONT PASS UP AN OPPORTUNITY LIKE THAT! YOU WOULD BE A FOOL TO PASS IT UP!
What a yay tease! I need my ghost-mare clop now, dammit! Button better pound her meaty lips (or her delicious ponut) right this instant. I will revoke his stallion-card otherwise.
Seriously, though, I am loving this! I find myself really enjoying this spooky mare--as well as her glorious behind--and can't wait to read more about her!
I've played too many Spike Chunsoft games to overlook a detail like this.
Now this is some of the finest el primo ghost smut. I also love how the cliffhanger hinges on wether or not he'll nut. Both the plot and Laraum's plot are going in some interesting directions.
8824161 I would assume lore-umn, lore-aum, laar-umn, or laar-aum. Personally, I like the first one the most so I'm just using that.
8824359 ponut=pony asshole 8824363 actually i got clues to how it could be pronounced after i looked up the translation for her name when my latin senses were tingling so i plugged "laruam loqueris" into google translate and got "specter talk" or more accurately "ghost talk" and i noticed that it mostly autocorrected to "lariam" leading me to believe her first name could be pronounced that way ..."laruam loqueris" its a pretty name i like it... and as i said before to button... go for it dude she literally WANTS you to fuck her silly and she even said that she had no intention of hurting you... and you have already gotten acquainted to her at least...
but first i found this on derpibooru this shows a little more of what she looks like and is it me or does her cutie mark vaguely resemble her anus as described in chapter 2? (and i mean VAGUELY resembles) https://derpibooru.org/1677713?q=oc%3Alaruam
i hope that button can figure out how to save the painting onto a computer so in case something happened to the painting that world would essentially have a backup version(or he could just ask the mayor if he could have it) also i would LOVE to see his mom lose her shit when she meets laruam for the first time... oh and if somepony ever makes a comedy version of this... whenever laruam comes out of the well THIS sound needs to play
So now that Button Mash knows who that mare is, why doesn't he offer to help her, and try to find out what became of her friend (would-have-been-husband), Switch? I mean he could try to help her out to help her cross-over, instead of having sex with her, and developing possible Stockholm syndrome. Still a good read.
Her cutie mark is the "diamond ring effect" found around solar eclipses.
There might be a few pics of her up on Derpi now if you look for her by name
Probably be a minimum of two weeks before I get the final installment of this fic out. The ending is gonna be a doozy so just hold onto your butts. I don't want to rush it or anything so please be patient.
YES! Oooh yeeeessss! You don't know how much I am loving this!
8824140 I like how you think That'd be a lovely ending... also a scene came to mind for that but I think I'll keep it a secret for now until the very ending comes out, then post it in the comments, hehehe.
8825257 I know its an eclipse but given that the vision button had of her ass in chapter 2 was described as looking like an eclipse i cant help but feel like her cutie mark has a double meaning. Also calm down admiral ackbar... The only way it could ever be "a trap" is if she either unintentionaly succ's his soul out through his dick somehow or button has a heart attack from his most intense orgasm ever... I look at every detail and honestly if she was intent on killing him she should have done it ages ago... If she was intent on raping him she wouldnt have let go of him to go cry on the other side of the well... Besides i dont see any practical motive for killing him or breaking his heart(ir him breaking her heart which could lead to a bad ending) after literally offering him her pussy and saying "take me"
8825216 How would you describe that as stockholm syndrome? Perhaps its just button learning that lauram isnt as bad as he thought and realizes that not only did she do this because she thought he was her long lost coltfriend but she just wanted to be loved
I swear to faust if the story ends with button and laruam having fun on nightmare night as a sweet and loving couple i will squee so goddamn hard... It would be so fucking cute to see laruam spooking the fillies and colts on that night and maybe for humor have somepony like sweetie belle just yell out "oh hi laruam!" Followed by button, laruam, sweetie belle and a few other ponies bursting into laughter
8825886 note the lack of anal vore in the tags for kinks... i dont think its happening although im quite sure laruam wants button to stick it in her ass at some point
8826057 Well i have done scenebuilds of button and laruam and in one of them they are kisding and in another just hugging but in that one both ponies have a golden horseshoe(pony version of a wedding band) but the derpibooru one was made for this story
8826105 Now that is dedication. It also explains the lovely cover image. 8826067 Man, you are really into this story. You're giving the author a run for his money.
8826176 That i am... After he completes this story he has already given me permission to use laruam and button as a couple in a story i am writing they arent even mentioned in my story til some of the later chapters
8826257 I...guess... I mean the focus of my story is my oc falling in love with chrysalis(after running across her by accident on a geological survey mission i might add) laruam and button will rarely interact with the main characters of my story oh and i incorperate ALL of my favorite couples to my story at least once INCLUDING a new entry on my list of favorite couples (gallus x sandbar)
8826349 ah but that's what authors do... they fire misdirection torpedoes EVERYWHERE to keep you speculating or thinking something else will happen i practically have a radar sense for those little bastards(misdirection torpedoes)
8826269 That sounds very involved, unless you don't have that many favorite couples.
8826291 I've never really been a fan of Gmod stuff, but those are quite nice. I used to know a guy who would do stuff like that in Gmod all the time, and he'd get really involved in it. Doesn't Button's mom already have a canonical name? I think she does, but I can't remember what it was.
8826438 actually i have A LOT of couples in this story of mine like at LEAST 12 also thanks for the praise for my scenebuilds as far as i know button's mom has no cannon name she was in one episode briefly in a spa scene and she didn't even have a speaking role... as for my pics of laruam and button... i just realized that not only does age not matter because laruam is dead(button is like 15 in the pics i made) but also given that wedding vows involve "till death do you part" this marriage would be the only one to actually last to the end of time as laruam is already dead and button could just join her again after he inevitably falls to the reaper's scythe so his death would just be a minor inconvenience and he could come back as a ghost(his unfinished business would be loving laruam and given that one cant really "finish" loving someone he would just stick around forever)
8826442 Oh, wow. I guess that'd make sense, since it seems to be a romance based on the description you gave me. Also, I don't know this for sure, but isn't Chrysalis gone now or something? I completely dropped off the show and fandom after the end of season three, and I've only just recently got back into the swing of things, so I'm fuzzy on everything after that point. Don't some of the non-speaking role ponies have official names though? I swear I could remember her having a name.
8826593 Actually chrysalis had an involvment in season 5 finale in an alternate timeline, she played a HEAVY part in the season 6 finale and from what i heard she is returning this season
8826619 Well, that just goes to show how much I've been paying attention for the last four years. I probably should take the time to catch up at some point.
8830219 Last time I saw someone use that in a story, more than one commenter stated they didn't care for it. I guess it's partly that it's more of a meme than a proper word, but also an out-of-universe meme that some people can't imagine anypony actually saying. Either that, or they think it's a stupid word.
...You are forgiven for reasons of comedy however. Comedy is a genre that generally gets more of a pass, or so I think.
8833013 Don't worry, it's in the pipe. Got all the deets scribbled down and everything! Just got two more fics in the pipe to get proofed and posted before I start on this beast. I don't wanna bungle it up
8833025 by all means take as much time as you need... as for me I am rewriting/refining the written chapters of my unpublished story(there are still quite a few chapters not yet written and one that isn't even "published" yet as I started refining the story halfway through writing it I am also updating it with season 8 info{ my story has chapter 3 around when twilight is building her school so some cannon events will be included}
8833654 Ikr we will have to wait though... But yeah i TOTALLY see button mash button smashing laruam's pussy(im not sorry for that joke) but i do hope things work out well for laruam and button(they make a cute couple) i kinda want to know how the public would react to him proposing to her or marrying her... That would be interesting especially at his young age...talk about young love!
Huh. That's a twist I didn't expect .-. So then, now the only questions I have are who done the painting and why is she a part of it?
..... AND THEY HAVE HALF FOAL HALF GHOST BABIES, THE END!
8824138
This will be touched on in the final chapter so stick around!!!
aaaaw! this is so sweet i love it! its good to know a bit more about her now... also laruam... how do you pronounce that? im pretty sure given my slight knowledge of foreign pronunciation that loqueris is pronounced lokeris but as for what i think button should do? JUST DO IT BUTTON! SHE'S LITERALLY OFFERING HERSELF TO YOU! DONT PASS UP AN OPPORTUNITY LIKE THAT! YOU WOULD BE A FOOL TO PASS IT UP!
Sometimes I feel I've got to run away, I've got to... damn the chapter title. That was my favorite song!
Why the heck do I always run into a tragic love story?
What a yay tease! I need my ghost-mare clop now, dammit! Button better pound her meaty lips (or her delicious ponut) right this instant. I will revoke his stallion-card otherwise.
Seriously, though, I am loving this! I find myself really enjoying this spooky mare--as well as her glorious behind--and can't wait to read more about her!
What's a Ponuts and how can it be spooky?
I've played too many Spike Chunsoft games to overlook a detail like this.
Now this is some of the finest el primo ghost smut. I also love how the cliffhanger hinges on wether or not he'll nut.
Both the plot and Laraum's plot are going in some interesting directions.
8824161
I would assume lore-umn, lore-aum, laar-umn, or laar-aum.
Personally, I like the first one the most so I'm just using that.
Ur mom gay and no "you"!!!
8824359
ponut=pony asshole
8824363
actually i got clues to how it could be pronounced after i looked up the translation for her name when my latin senses were tingling so i plugged "laruam loqueris" into google translate and got "specter talk" or more accurately "ghost talk" and i noticed that it mostly autocorrected to "lariam" leading me to believe her first name could be pronounced that way ..."laruam loqueris" its a pretty name i like it... and as i said before to button... go for it dude she literally WANTS you to fuck her silly and she even said that she had no intention of hurting you... and you have already gotten acquainted to her at least...
Hold up imma make some button x laruam fanart in gmod real quick
Fun read so far I hope the horror isn't over yet.
my moneys on: everypony's watching on the other side of the painting
but first i found this on derpibooru this shows a little more of what she looks like and is it me or does her cutie mark vaguely resemble her anus as described in chapter 2? (and i mean VAGUELY resembles) https://derpibooru.org/1677713?q=oc%3Alaruam
8824669
And what a fuckin show That'll be, eh?
i hope that button can figure out how to save the painting onto a computer so in case something happened to the painting that world would essentially have a backup version(or he could just ask the mayor if he could have it) also i would LOVE to see his mom lose her shit when she meets laruam for the first time... oh and if somepony ever makes a comedy version of this... whenever laruam comes out of the well THIS sound needs to play
So now that Button Mash knows who that mare is, why doesn't he offer to help her, and try to find out what became of her friend (would-have-been-husband), Switch? I mean he could try to help her out to help her cross-over, instead of having sex with her, and developing possible Stockholm syndrome.
Still a good read.
8824589
But what if it's a trap? She is some kind of spooky ghost horse!!!
Ok, so a few things.
Her cutie mark is the "diamond ring effect" found around solar eclipses.
There might be a few pics of her up on Derpi now if you look for her by name
Probably be a minimum of two weeks before I get the final installment of this fic out. The ending is gonna be a doozy so just hold onto your butts. I don't want to rush it or anything so please be patient.
YES! Oooh yeeeessss! You don't know how much I am loving this!
8824140
I like how you think That'd be a lovely ending... also a scene came to mind for that but I think I'll keep it a secret for now until the very ending comes out, then post it in the comments, hehehe.
Good show! I look forward to more, author!
8825257
I know its an eclipse but given that the vision button had of her ass in chapter 2 was described as looking like an eclipse i cant help but feel like her cutie mark has a double meaning. Also calm down admiral ackbar... The only way it could ever be "a trap" is if she either unintentionaly succ's his soul out through his dick somehow or button has a heart attack from his most intense orgasm ever... I look at every detail and honestly if she was intent on killing him she should have done it ages ago... If she was intent on raping him she wouldnt have let go of him to go cry on the other side of the well... Besides i dont see any practical motive for killing him or breaking his heart(ir him breaking her heart which could lead to a bad ending) after literally offering him her pussy and saying "take me"
8825216
How would you describe that as stockholm syndrome? Perhaps its just button learning that lauram isnt as bad as he thought and realizes that not only did she do this because she thought he was her long lost coltfriend but she just wanted to be loved
I swear to faust if the story ends with button and laruam having fun on nightmare night as a sweet and loving couple i will squee so goddamn hard... It would be so fucking cute to see laruam spooking the fillies and colts on that night and maybe for humor have somepony like sweetie belle just yell out "oh hi laruam!" Followed by button, laruam, sweetie belle and a few other ponies bursting into laughter
Oh my god, this is going to end in anal vore isn't it?
God damnit
8825886
note the lack of anal vore in the tags for kinks... i dont think its happening although im quite sure laruam wants button to stick it in her ass at some point
8825886
Ok, ok, it definitely won't be ending in that >_>
8824739
Hot damn, there's already fanart of this?
How long until someone draws up some el primo ghost waifu porn of her?
8826057
Well i have done scenebuilds of button and laruam and in one of them they are kisding and in another just hugging but in that one both ponies have a golden horseshoe(pony version of a wedding band) but the derpibooru one was made for this story
8826057
It's not uncommon for me to commission art for characters from my books/fics. I know quite a few really nice, very talented, artists.
8826105
Now that is dedication. It also explains the lovely cover image.
8826067
Man, you are really into this story. You're giving the author a run for his money.
8826176
That i am... After he completes this story he has already given me permission to use laruam and button as a couple in a story i am writing they arent even mentioned in my story til some of the later chapters
8826188
Very nice.
Will your story feature spooky ghost waifus?
8826257
I...guess... I mean the focus of my story is my oc falling in love with chrysalis(after running across her by accident on a geological survey mission i might add) laruam and button will rarely interact with the main characters of my story oh and i incorperate ALL of my favorite couples to my story at least once INCLUDING a new entry on my list of favorite couples (gallus x sandbar)
8826105
check out these scenebuilds i did http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198064020919/screenshot/938312396422324860
and this one http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198064020919/screenshot/938312396422338096 i used the pony playermodel 2 addon to make both ponies because the actual button mash models were less than satisfactory so i made my own and aged him up a few years also this one when button's mom meets laruam for the first time(my idea of how it might go) http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198064020919/screenshot/938312396422515992 also we need to come up with a solid name for button's mom other than just "button's mom"
8826291
That's actually pretty damn cute
8826296
thank you! also i drew her cutie mark in Microsoft paint and its not bad for MS paint isn't it? also i forgot to upload this one http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198064020919/screenshot/938312396422566921
8825504
As Some Leech (the author) said to someone else previously:
8826349
ah but that's what authors do... they fire misdirection torpedoes EVERYWHERE to keep you speculating or thinking something else will happen i practically have a radar sense for those little bastards(misdirection torpedoes)
8826370
Well, we'll see what comes about.
8826269
That sounds very involved, unless you don't have that many favorite couples.
8826291
I've never really been a fan of Gmod stuff, but those are quite nice. I used to know a guy who would do stuff like that in Gmod all the time, and he'd get really involved in it.
Doesn't Button's mom already have a canonical name? I think she does, but I can't remember what it was.
8826438
actually i have A LOT of couples in this story of mine like at LEAST 12
also thanks for the praise for my scenebuilds as far as i know button's mom has no cannon name she was in one episode briefly in a spa scene and she didn't even have a speaking role... as for my pics of laruam and button... i just realized that not only does age not matter because laruam is dead(button is like 15 in the pics i made) but also given that wedding vows involve "till death do you part" this marriage would be the only one to actually last to the end of time as laruam is already dead and button could just join her again after he inevitably falls to the reaper's scythe so his death would just be a minor inconvenience and he could come back as a ghost(his unfinished business would be loving laruam and given that one cant really "finish" loving someone he would just stick around forever)
8826442
Oh, wow. I guess that'd make sense, since it seems to be a romance based on the description you gave me.
Also, I don't know this for sure, but isn't Chrysalis gone now or something? I completely dropped off the show and fandom after the end of season three, and I've only just recently got back into the swing of things, so I'm fuzzy on everything after that point.
Don't some of the non-speaking role ponies have official names though? I swear I could remember her having a name.
8826593
Actually chrysalis had an involvment in season 5 finale in an alternate timeline, she played a HEAVY part in the season 6 finale and from what i heard she is returning this season
8826619
Well, that just goes to show how much I've been paying attention for the last four years.
I probably should take the time to catch up at some point.
8830219
Last time I saw someone use that in a story, more than one commenter stated they didn't care for it. I guess it's partly that it's more of a meme than a proper word, but also an out-of-universe meme that some people can't imagine anypony actually saying. Either that, or they think it's a stupid word.
...You are forgiven for reasons of comedy however. Comedy is a genre that generally gets more of a pass, or so I think.
wew, cant wait for more! :3
8833013
Don't worry, it's in the pipe. Got all the deets scribbled down and everything! Just got two more fics in the pipe to get proofed and posted before I start on this beast. I don't wanna bungle it up
8833025
by all means take as much time as you need... as for me I am rewriting/refining the written chapters of my unpublished story(there are still quite a few chapters not yet written and one that isn't even "published" yet as I started refining the story halfway through writing it I am also updating it with season 8 info{ my story has chapter 3 around when twilight is building her school so some cannon events will be included}
8833025
WEW
will look forward to it :3
8833654
Ikr we will have to wait though... But yeah i TOTALLY see button mash button smashing laruam's pussy(im not sorry for that joke) but i do hope things work out well for laruam and button(they make a cute couple) i kinda want to know how the public would react to him proposing to her or marrying her... That would be interesting especially at his young age...talk about young love!