But seriously, thanks for the enthusiasm. Feedback, and excessive amounts of stimulants, keep this old bastard going. There'll be at least one more chapter. Possibly a spin-off or two as well...
8800108 At most this story needs 7 chapters mostly because of the recurring motif in the ring of samara killing her victims after 7 days of torment however given that this story is heavily sexual the only way he would die is from a heart attack due to orgasming too hard however i REALLY hope things work out well for both button and the as of yet nameless ghost mare admittedly they would make a cute couple given time for button to get used to her
Well I would credit Button and Sweetybell for being proactive in immediately looking for outside to see what's wrong with him. Wonder what she want from him and why have sex with him? Can't wait to see what's next
I'm liking how this is going, hehehe... and like many are saying, I'm hopeful for good things to come out of this Ghostmare x Button, yee... also monsterghost foals.
8800116 Holy shit i know right? But i have hopes that it wont be molestation for long as love will prevail it always does... Love is THE most powerful force in the universe
8800853 Yeah although i enjoy a good clopfic i also like sweet and loving relationships so perhaps the ghost mare could give button some time to get used to her and maybe fall in love with her before things get any more intimate because its clear she certainly has a thing for button
8800919 Mmm, same here, I do enjoy those. I suppose we'll have to wait and see how the author takes this story, perhaps it'll go in a route none of us will expect, we won't know
8800926 Idk what route the author would take because the good ending is where one falls in love with the other(or they both fall for each other) and they live happily(maybe get married and just perhaps have cute little spooky foals{i would love that ending as happy endings are my favorite as it has such a sense of joy and fulfillment}) and the bad ending options are either the relationship falls apart somehow, the relationship is really one keeping the other as a sex slave(unwillingly for button), one of them dies(again in the ghost mare's case) or just a generic tragic ending.... I am really hoping for the good ending especially with an unusual couple like this as i love seeing unusual and or supernatural couples work out well
10/10. I have a soft-spot for porn with a sense of humor, and you've done it quite well. I'm not gonna lie, I was expecting more el primo ghost smut by this stage, but I'm certainly not dissapointed with the story so far. Things are getting very interesting, and I'm hanging on to see where this goes. Wether it ends badly for Button, in true fashion with the original story, or he'll get the ghost waifu of his dreams, or something else entirely, I can't wait for the next chapter. I also have to give you props for making the characters intelligent, and having Sweetie and Button look to others for help from the get-go, as opposed to the usual trope of the main character trying to hide everything until it blows up in his face.
8800943 I think you'd like The House Remebered, by Waxworks (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/384943/the-house-remembered) It's about a ghost mare and a farmer who happens upon her house. The horror element is pretty soft, and there's no sexual content, but the story is excellent. It's quite a satisfying read. Thinking about it, it'd be nice to have an index of spooky ghost waifu stories. I'm sure there are many more that both of us are missing out on.
Where are the Ghostbusters when you need them. If only Peter Venkman, Ray Stantz, Egon Spengler, and Winston Zeddemore were involved in this, they'd know what to do.
8801118 They wont be needed... I sense good in the ghost mare's heart all she must do is show it... Also i have a theory as to why the ghost mare resorted to kidnapping. If she had tried to introduce herself like a living mare she only would have been seen as a malevolent entity and ponies would try to do anything to keep their distance from her and keep her away. So if she wanted a partner she would have to take them by forceif she wanted to meet new ponies
8801028 It's a really fun story, I have to admit. Like, at its core it's a horror story (basically) but throwing in fun, or funny, elements is too good to pass up. Like, sure, I could make it all dour and serious from start to finish, but where's the fun in that?
8802880 I can relate. Whenever I write something, in all but the shortest stories I tend to add in little jokes or comic elements into the story at whim, even though I typically write tragedies. You won't find anything I've written on here for various reasons, but I digress. It spices things up a little, and as long as these elements aren't too frequent then they don't detract from the general narrative, even in the darkest of stories. You seem to have found a nice balance. I have to wonder though, what gave you the inspiration to make a sexy ponefied version of The Ring?
8803269 Can't really say honestly, I just wanted to write something different and The Ring seemed like a good candidate to draw inspiration from. I've been writing on and off for years (started with green-text stories on /b/ in the early-mid 2000s) and sometimes I like to flex my abilities by writing stuff that's off the wall, just to see if I can make it work.
8801395 Well, still poor Button Mash is going to suffer from that mare by being sexually tortured and tormented by her. Even if Button Mash is somehow saved from that ghost mare, he'll never be the same again, and it will be a very long time until he'll ever feel safe again. And that's if he's lucky. How can you sense good in the heart of creature like that who would do something like this to someone, let alone a child? And on top of that, even if the ghost mare is really a good mare that is lonely, how are they going to explain all of this to Button Mash's mother? She'd be horrified to hear what happened to him, and would consider the ghost mare as evil.
If the ghostbusters got involved, they would rope the ghost mare in with the streams of their proton packs, capture her in one of their ghost traps, and store her in their containment unit.
8804881 maybe he wont suffer maybe the ghost mare will give him time to get used to her presence in which case it wouldn't really be torture if he is allowed to get used to her and her desires. also what do you mean not the same? take a look at yourself now and when you were a kid there is a HUGE gulf in between both personalities people change and who knows maybe button will recover and maybe be in even better condition. also i can sense good in her because i KNOW that there is good(or at least the capacity for it) in the heart of every sentient being even undead ones also does age really matter if one partner is literally DEAD? also i know generally the safest way of breaking the news of the spooky relationship to his mom it would be send button to the real world with a bit of her hair as proof she is real and have HIM tell his mother what happened and provided a sweet and loving relationship has formed button could just wait out her mother's panic attack at the news that her son was taken into the spirit world where he had sex with a ghost mare before explaining that he had fallen in love with her and that she was his marefriend with some denial from his mom at first until he comforts her before introducing his mom to his spectral marefriend and after quite a bit of being nervous around the ghostly mare they begin to adjust to her presence and after an adjustment period lasting a few days as they officially come to terms with her being button's marefriend they accept her as a friend... then comes all the normal bits of a relationship aka engagement, marriage and maybe adorable little spooky foals but hey that's just a scenario... A BEST CASE SCENARIO(I'm not sorry for that matpat reference)
8805025 What I mean by "Not the same again", is that he would be psychologically effected by what happened to him. It's the after effect of someone being kidnapped and raped. It can have a long term effect of victims of rape, torture, and abuse. That's what it means.
8805063 Although if he were allowed to fall in love with her before any further sexual activity it wouldnt really be rape as both partners love each other although do you think such love would lessen the psychological impact of the first impression? And possibly aid in what recovery he might need?
8805676 hey dude is it okay if i use/modify characters and events from this story to be referenced in a story i am writing? i plan to use button and the ghost mare as background characters they will be acknowledged and also interacted with by main characters... of course i will need the name of the ghost mare so just message me directly
8808488 I believe that falls under the "one of them dies(again in the ghost mare's case)" category so that was already covered in the good ending category i had them developing a sweet,loving and nurturing relationship,getting married *squee!!* and having adorable spooky foals(button just might make a good father even at his age) or button getting used to her and the two visit each other for sex every so often and the bad ending category involved rejection(unlikely) being kept forcefully as a sex slave, one of them dying by any number of means. The relationship getting worse and worse, or just the relationship falling apart right after it forms
Okay where the fuck did the doctor leave the TARDIS? I want to skip ahead in time to when a few more chapters are out because i am really anxious to see how this all plays out
That was a serious situation until you used the word “ponut” at which point the dramatic tension was lessened by me snickering at the absurd word choice. It’s best to not meme in the middle of a tense situation.
Well, considering it's a "horror" story about tiny pastel equines, I honestly couldn't help myself. While there are some spooky bits, and a bit of tension, a bit of levity was used at my discretion to mix it up. Sorry if it threw you off but that was supposed to be a little funny
If starlight glimmer is going to kill the dam B**h, she is going to use a gun to kill it, always bring a gun at all times when you do some crazy Monster-summing ritual, and what the Hell is a Ponut?
8953116 For the uninitiated, "ponut" is the portmanteau of "pony" and "donut". It's often used to reference a pony anus given the fact that the two look relatively similar.
I needz the next chapter now plz ;-;
8800098
Good lord be patient he only uploaded it not one hour ago
Oh no! Button is getting a face full of... The rim! What ever will he do now.
Snicker
8800105
Like, <15 minutes ago! XD
But seriously, thanks for the enthusiasm. Feedback,
and excessive amounts of stimulants, keep this old bastard going. There'll be at least one more chapter. Possibly a spin-off or two as well...And now Button's mom is gonna lose it cause 1. Her son was kidnapped. 2. Most likely being molested. And 3. He was right and she didn't believe him.
8800108
At most this story needs 7 chapters mostly because of the recurring motif in the ring of samara killing her victims after 7 days of torment however given that this story is heavily sexual the only way he would die is from a heart attack due to orgasming too hard however i REALLY hope things work out well for both button and the as of yet nameless ghost mare admittedly they would make a cute couple given time for button to get used to her
8800105
I know, but it's a good story D: I just want to read all of it now rather than wait for it to be written.
Quick! Somepony get Hoss Delgado! Or the Ghost Busters!
Well I would credit Button and Sweetybell for being proactive in immediately looking for outside to see what's wrong with him. Wonder what she want from him and why have sex with him? Can't wait to see what's next
8800129
Shhhh... Just let it happen... Im sure things will work out well in the end between button and the ghost mare
8800161
I know. I'm just kidding. XD
"Hello" said the spider to the fly
"Would like a seat," :
Noice, lmao. ITS HER PONUT
This is getting pretty interesting.
I want that ponut. This opens the horror clop genre I think.
Good job!!
this is hilarious. reminds me of those horror/porn movies that always are impossible to get off from because they are just too funny
I'm liking how this is going, hehehe... and like many are saying, I'm hopeful for good things to come out of this Ghostmare x Button, yee... also monsterghost foals.
Nice chapter.
8800116
Holy shit i know right? But i have hopes that it wont be molestation for long as love will prevail it always does... Love is THE most powerful force in the universe
8800853
Yeah although i enjoy a good clopfic i also like sweet and loving relationships so perhaps the ghost mare could give button some time to get used to her and maybe fall in love with her before things get any more intimate because its clear she certainly has a thing for button
8800919
Mmm, same here, I do enjoy those. I suppose we'll have to wait and see how the author takes this story, perhaps it'll go in a route none of us will expect, we won't know
8800926
Idk what route the author would take because the good ending is where one falls in love with the other(or they both fall for each other) and they live happily(maybe get married and just perhaps have cute little spooky foals{i would love that ending as happy endings are my favorite as it has such a sense of joy and fulfillment}) and the bad ending options are either the relationship falls apart somehow, the relationship is really one keeping the other as a sex slave(unwillingly for button), one of them dies(again in the ghost mare's case) or just a generic tragic ending.... I am really hoping for the good ending especially with an unusual couple like this as i love seeing unusual and or supernatural couples work out well
10/10. I have a soft-spot for porn with a sense of humor, and you've done it quite well.
I'm not gonna lie, I was expecting more el primo ghost smut by this stage, but I'm certainly not dissapointed with the story so far. Things are getting very interesting, and I'm hanging on to see where this goes. Wether it ends badly for Button, in true fashion with the original story, or he'll get the ghost waifu of his dreams, or something else entirely, I can't wait for the next chapter.
I also have to give you props for making the characters intelligent, and having Sweetie and Button look to others for help from the get-go, as opposed to the usual trope of the main character trying to hide everything until it blows up in his face.
8800943
I think you'd like The House Remebered, by Waxworks (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/384943/the-house-remembered)
It's about a ghost mare and a farmer who happens upon her house. The horror element is pretty soft, and there's no sexual content, but the story is excellent. It's quite a satisfying read.
Thinking about it, it'd be nice to have an index of spooky ghost waifu stories. I'm sure there are many more that both of us are missing out on.
Dis gon b gud
Where are the Ghostbusters when you need them. If only Peter Venkman, Ray Stantz, Egon Spengler, and Winston Zeddemore were involved in this, they'd know what to do.
out of curiosity, i googled 'malum'. i lol'd. good one
8801118
They wont be needed... I sense good in the ghost mare's heart all she must do is show it... Also i have a theory as to why the ghost mare resorted to kidnapping. If she had tried to introduce herself like a living mare she only would have been seen as a malevolent entity and ponies would try to do anything to keep their distance from her and keep her away. So if she wanted a partner she would have to take them by forceif she wanted to meet new ponies
8801028
It's a really fun story, I have to admit. Like, at its core it's a horror story (basically) but throwing in fun, or funny, elements is too good to pass up. Like, sure, I could make it all dour and serious from start to finish, but where's the fun in that?
8802880
I can relate. Whenever I write something, in all but the shortest stories I tend to add in little jokes or comic elements into the story at whim, even though I typically write tragedies. You won't find anything I've written on here for various reasons, but I digress.
It spices things up a little, and as long as these elements aren't too frequent then they don't detract from the general narrative, even in the darkest of stories. You seem to have found a nice balance.
I have to wonder though, what gave you the inspiration to make a sexy ponefied version of The Ring?
8803269
Can't really say honestly, I just wanted to write something different and The Ring seemed like a good candidate to draw inspiration from. I've been writing on and off for years (started with green-text stories on /b/ in the early-mid 2000s) and sometimes I like to flex my abilities by writing stuff that's off the wall, just to see if I can make it work.
8801395
Well, still poor Button Mash is going to suffer from that mare by being sexually tortured and tormented by her. Even if Button Mash is somehow saved from that ghost mare, he'll never be the same again, and it will be a very long time until he'll ever feel safe again. And that's if he's lucky. How can you sense good in the heart of creature like that who would do something like this to someone, let alone a child?
And on top of that, even if the ghost mare is really a good mare that is lonely, how are they going to explain all of this to Button Mash's mother? She'd be horrified to hear what happened to him, and would consider the ghost mare as evil.
If the ghostbusters got involved, they would rope the ghost mare in with the streams of their proton packs, capture her in one of their ghost traps, and store her in their containment unit.
8804881
maybe he wont suffer maybe the ghost mare will give him time to get used to her presence in which case it wouldn't really be torture if he is allowed to get used to her and her desires. also what do you mean not the same? take a look at yourself now and when you were a kid there is a HUGE gulf in between both personalities people change and who knows maybe button will recover and maybe be in even better condition. also i can sense good in her because i KNOW that there is good(or at least the capacity for it) in the heart of every sentient being even undead ones also does age really matter if one partner is literally DEAD? also i know generally the safest way of breaking the news of the spooky relationship to his mom it would be send button to the real world with a bit of her hair as proof she is real and have HIM tell his mother what happened and provided a sweet and loving relationship has formed button could just wait out her mother's panic attack at the news that her son was taken into the spirit world where he had sex with a ghost mare before explaining that he had fallen in love with her and that she was his marefriend with some denial from his mom at first until he comforts her before introducing his mom to his spectral marefriend and after quite a bit of being nervous around the ghostly mare they begin to adjust to her presence and after an adjustment period lasting a few days as they officially come to terms with her being button's marefriend they accept her as a friend... then comes all the normal bits of a relationship aka engagement, marriage and maybe adorable little spooky foals but hey that's just a scenario... A BEST CASE SCENARIO(I'm not sorry for that matpat reference)
8805025
What I mean by "Not the same again", is that he would be psychologically effected by what happened to him. It's the after effect of someone being kidnapped and raped. It can have a long term effect of victims of rape, torture, and abuse. That's what it means.
8805063
Although if he were allowed to fall in love with her before any further sexual activity it wouldnt really be rape as both partners love each other although do you think such love would lessen the psychological impact of the first impression? And possibly aid in what recovery he might need?
^ Me watching the comments and speculations on how this is all going to play out.
8805676
hey dude is it okay if i use/modify characters and events from this story to be referenced in a story i am writing? i plan to use button and the ghost mare as background characters they will be acknowledged and also interacted with by main characters... of course i will need the name of the ghost mare so just message me directly
8808488
I believe that falls under the "one of them dies(again in the ghost mare's case)" category so that was already covered in the good ending category i had them developing a sweet,loving and nurturing relationship,getting married *squee!!* and having adorable spooky foals(button just might make a good father even at his age) or button getting used to her and the two visit each other for sex every so often and the bad ending category involved rejection(unlikely) being kept forcefully as a sex slave, one of them dying by any number of means. The relationship getting worse and worse, or just the relationship falling apart right after it forms
Okay where the fuck did the doctor leave the TARDIS? I want to skip ahead in time to when a few more chapters are out because i am really anxious to see how this all plays out
If I was button, I would wait for that mare with arms opened wide. Embrace your demons.
That was a serious situation until you used the word “ponut” at which point the dramatic tension was lessened by me snickering at the absurd word choice. It’s best to not meme in the middle of a tense situation.
Assuming that wasn’t the point, of course.
8830185
Well, considering it's a "horror" story about tiny pastel equines, I honestly couldn't help myself. While there are some spooky bits, and a bit of tension, a bit of levity was used at my discretion to mix it up. Sorry if it threw you off but that was supposed to be a little funny
Spooky ponuts confirmed.
Oh my GOD.
f... Wh... Fml this story it's just!
“Starlight knows what she’s doin,” said nopony ever who lived to see the light of the next day
8884439
Starlight always knows what she's doing. She just has NO IDEA how to do it right.
If starlight glimmer is going to kill the dam B**h, she is going to use a gun to kill it, always bring a gun at all times when you do some crazy Monster-summing ritual, and what the Hell is a Ponut?
8953116
For the uninitiated, "ponut" is the portmanteau of "pony" and "donut". It's often used to reference a pony anus given the fact that the two look relatively similar.
8800129
Or the Winchesters.
Go toward the light Ca-, I mean, Button Mash!