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I am an aspiring writer, romance enthusiast, and a horrible over emotional mess. If you're here I hope you like homosexual stallions. If you enjoy my work and want to support me I have a Ko-Fi!
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This was a surprise owo
Fancy Pants looks like a butler.
this was unexpected...a written by you. glad to see you're getting back into writing (even though it was a commission)
fancy and blue don't switch roles *gasp*
the age difference between them is interesting to me. i wonder how blueblood would feel dating a stallion younger than him (like at the age of sixteen.) don't if your bf (Vclaw) has told you about my story or not? it's called love between brothers (a spike x dusk shine) even though it has r63 name this dusk is his own character and backstory. main focus is about spike and dusk's relationship, twilight is secondary to it along with the mane six.
with blue (he appears later in the story) has a bat pony daughter named pearly white. you're probably thinking "What the hell...how did that happen?" or "the idea sounds intriguing." in this part after what happen at the gala (in S1) ponies see him a disgrace except for fancy pants(sorry he's straight in this fic and with fleur de lis. but keeps herself at a distance and is wary of him) & hoity toity. while walking the streets of canterlot meets a mare named carmelina (who an earth pony that makes flowers) charmed he asks her out. later become engaged his parents don't approve of this marriage but blueblood doesn't relent and marries her. they have a child she tells him even though her mother was an earth pony on father's side is of ancient bat pony and gispy blood. this doesn't matter to him at all.
at blue's family estate one day while rocking her baby to sleep & dies holding her (she was drinking poisoned tea!) blueblood finds her dead...it was snowing. believing his parents had something to do it throws them in court of course there's no proof. during the night blue disowns his family (including all the money he has) takes his daughter away to the deceased wife father's castle away from canterlot. he keeps his daughter in a tower but she's given a luxurious room with books, toys & an education with tutors (whom he pays keep silent about his daughter) since blueblood ran away his parents died, leaving him as the only heir to the family name! crazy things happen at this gala...his daughter falls in love with Edmond(spike & dusk's child!) he's a Kirin pony-dragon hybrid foal.
the young stallion in question is first base (fan made by the fandom to make flash sentry have more of a character! in my story he's a Pegasus instead of an earth pony.) base knows dusk shine isn't his brother,cause he told him one night after saving his life while getting his cutie mark. they are good friends. flash sentry has been kept in the dark about everything (their parents are a piece of work...the dad mostly!) btw the fic takes place set after S4 but going into five, six about to season 7 with celestia advice & everything being non cannon! lastly there are three sequels, a side story & an untitled idea.
p.s: those stories will not getting posted because i'm currently involved with my first writing account on ff (fanfiction) & yt channel off the ground.
if wanna know where I got the inspiration Edmond being a kirin. here...check this guy out https://www.fimfiction.net/story/108647/the-witching-hour enjoy:)
I'm not gonna lie. Fancy Pants is a very fun character to write when it comes to M/M smut. Of course, it seems like you have a much easier time writing out his character than I do. His mannerisms and dialogue in your stories are much better written than in my own, apprehensively speaking. Of course, you have a lot more experience writing the two, so what do I know?
All I'll say is that this fic is just as arousing as it is sweet. I don't know how you're able to do it in less than 5K words while sounding natural, but you manage it flawlessly! I really hope you keep up the good work, babe. ;)
Good read
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And not a very good one.
I've had this fic of yours on my radar for some time. I've put off reading for a bit because of time constraints. Having read it now, I regret not making the time sooner to read it!
I want to pay special attention, much like Fancy Pants did to our good Prince Blueblood, to the utter passion, tenderness, and love put into the prose of this piece. Honestly, for all of those qualities, it is like ordering the most coveted cut of meat, passing it into the hands of the most adept chef, and eating it in the most idyllic setting.
For instance, like, Prince Blueblood being pouty and grumpy after an entire day of work, and being somewhat icy to his loving partner allowed for a stellar display of chemistry and familiarity. It's clear from this that they not only know each part of each other but love every bit deeply. The description of that massage put my aches to rest and stirred a warmth in my chest that is getting me through the snowy weather. And oh my goodness! The venting of his day as Fancy caressed his lover's body was as informed as it was genuine feeling. Like, I could see myself having these conversations with my girlfriend, though neither of us are nearly so lucky as to be royalty. Still, the point remains that the acts between Fancy and Blueblood spoke to experience and to a well-traveled passion. Truly, this story was written in practiced calligraphy with golden ink, in a revered love language. This is the height of romance, but now I would like to speak to the pornographic aspect!
First of all, oh my GOSH is it so hot that there's an age gap between Fancy and the Prince! I've always admired these in couples, and have one in my own now, but seeing it in writing, and persistent reference to it by calling Fancy an old man sent shivers down my spine! More than this, one of my favorite parts of this was the communication during sex. Prince Blueblood was open about his not wanting to bottom, and Fancy graciously offered to in his stead. Beyond that, the description of Fancy adjusting and straining ever so slightly to fit his lover was incredible! A lot of clop fics would omit this kind of detail for expediency, but including it here only adds to the quality and authenticity of the overall piece!
Not only have I savored this work for the gleaming sheen that radiates off of it, but I simply must read your other works. You are impeccable with the command of your words, and I cannot wait to read more from you! Stunning, amazing work!