The Curse of being Immortal

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OmniFox

OmniFox #1 · Feb 27th, 2018 · · ·

Ever heard of barrel sex?

BadTouch

BadTouch #2 · Feb 27th, 2018 · 7 · 1 ·

Everybody loves to cuck Shining Armor.
So thanks for that.

Lore Horse

Lore Horse #3 · Feb 27th, 2018 · · ·

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Your profile picture makes that comment hilarious.

Dexstar

Dexstar #4 · Feb 28th, 2018 · · ·

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I have a strange feeling don't want to

Lucky Rose

Lucky Rose #5 · Mar 1st, 2018 · · ·

Great story. Sequel please

Knight N Gale

Knight N Gale #6 · Mar 1st, 2018 · · ·

I think after the contest, you should flesh this out into a multi chapter story. It just feels really rushed is all

Midnight Quill

Midnight Quill #7 · Mar 1st, 2018 · · ·

“I still want you! I’m craving for somepony to hold me tight, to whisper sweet nothings in my ear, to just fuck me!”
This was the sentence that got me ^^

I have to say, the premise of the first scene was quite different than what I had been expecting. I think this would have made for an excellent sad/romance story, with all this talk about immortality and the death of loved ones. Still, it's a nice entry to the contest and I wish you good luck!

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