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While dealing with the emotional fallout from almost losing to King Sombra, Twilight takes a moment to reflect. Celestia follows her out on the balcony.

Unable to hold back her feelings, Twilight begs a favor for when she will actually take over for Celestia in the future. The shock of the request leads them both to share more than they had intended or expected.

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A very believable take on how they feel for each other. I like how you portrayed them both.

9594481
Thank you so much for the feedback. It is nice to hear that it is believable.

I approve.

9595636
Glad to hear it! Thanks

Wow, that's good. You really nailed that angsty vibe in a very believable way. Great story!

9597308
Thank you. It definitely felt angsty to me too.

The only thing this story needed was MOAR! :twilightblush:

Well... I cried.
This was really well written and I loved how the characters were portrayed. Twiletia is always fluffles up my heart!

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Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback and emotional response! They ruffle my heart too. Cheers!

Please! Please make a sequel to this!

So beautiful. Loves the escalation of the emotions. But God I wanna see what happens after all this!! After getting so hyped with their feelings, it feels like the best part is missing! T_T

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