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In Twilights mind, Celestia is the ideal pony, flawless in every aspect. And she is lucky enough to be with her, not as a student like she used to, but as a lover. She certainly never expected Celestia of all ponies to cave in and doubt herself
Thanks to Curify for helping me with this story!
Special thanks to pixelbit5 for editing this story
Cover art: https://www.deviantart.com/plainoasis/art/Twilestia-664268873
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Very sweet and heartwarming. It's interesting to see Celestia, rather than Twilight, be the one with confidence issues.
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Thank you <3
That was what I was going for, glad it worked out ^^
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I should probably apologize for completely leaving you hanging x)
Really cute short story with very good wording and description. I especially liked the part where the sun was being raised. My only slight problems are that the story felt a little slow and some of the dialogue was a bit weak, but it's pretty much cancelled out by the insane level of the narration. Also, there's a slight misspelling.
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Fixed.
The dialogue was actually a tad bit worse still originally x)
But yeah, I was pretty much focused on experimenting with thethe narration, while I kinda had to force much of the dialogue out of me lol.
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I can see that. But if you ask me, the dialogue is even more important than the narration. If you've never read it, I suggest you read How To Write A Damn Good Novel. I've learned a lot from it. I kinda used the dialogue tricks the book taught in the latest chapter of my story, but I don't think I did it very well.
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^^
No I do understand that dialogue generally is probably a bit more important, but this is what I intended to do with this story in particular.
Improving one step at a time :p
The student has become the master
. Cute story.