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Applejack is awakened by a strange sound in the orchard. Investigating the source of the noise, she discovers Fluttershy singing alone in the moonlight.
Unable to leave and unwilling to reveal her presence, Applejack is mesmerized by the beautiful mare and her heavenly voice.
The next day, she can't stop smiling or humming her nightingale's song. Even her family notices.
Despite her best efforts, Applejack finds her thoughts keep drifting to her yellow Pegasus friend. When Fluttershy finally appears, the sparks begin to fly.
By the end of the day, Applejack begins to question the depths of her feelings for her friend.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

Will all the chapters be this long?

9644805
I'm not sure. I tend to be verbose, Guess I like details.
Did it feel too long?

This story is so well written! I've been writing for a long time and you have so many details that I would never think of when writing! Your writing just pulls me in, keep up the good work!

9706681
Thank you so much for the feedback. I’m so glad to hear the details pull you in. It’s definitely motivating to hear that. Really appreciate you taking the time to share your experience!

It's quite a shame this story has no more chapters, I really enjoyed the read! Very cute and interesting!

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