Twilight learns something that she feels could change the relationship she has with her wife, but Celestia might have a lesson to teach her.
Cover art by MagnaLuna. Reading by Lotus Moon.
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I've always wanted a daughter. #realtalk
Aww, that's seriously cute.
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Most people I know who talk about wanting kids usually say they want a son, so hurrah for wanting different. It also reminds me of an Arcade Fire song that my tired brain is pretty sure is the one I linked.
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) but Twilestia is a ship I like I don't get to write in my main stuff (the Celestia there is straight) and I knew I just had to write them at some point since I do have ideas! Oddly enough every ship I write but one tends to stay in one genre when it comes to ideas, and the Twilestia ideas are all fluffy, wholesome ideas meant to brighten someone's day.
Thank you! Since this is just for fun fluff, it doesn't have all the fun stuff in prose I usually like to do and wild characterizations - so sadly, nothing like that (not even worldbuilding
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Yes. That is a thing, a good thing that I like. 👍
Really sweet, and packs a lot of future worldbuilding in such a small wordcount.
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t h a n k s :D
i must worldbuild or else i'll die
reading this half asleep
then again i always feel half-asleep
woooo noice
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Probable?
our?
just secret without the "ly"?
Missing a "
Celestia seeing all of Equestria as her children is a concept i love, And having Twilestia in this just makes it better.
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Thank you for spotting these, I've fixed them all.
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It is not, actually! The Celestia in the 'verse is straight too.
I like the use of alliteration and metaphors.
Saw your recent blog post on no one reading your work, so I figured I'd go through and read something by you. Now that I've read this, I'll be looking forward to the next thing I read by you.
A cute story that does an excellent job at highlighting the relationship between Twilight and Celestia, their concerns, and other aspects of their character in the story's context. Some of the sentences are kind of difficult to read, and there are a few grammar mistakes. For example:
Affected would be the correct word here, as it's acting as a verb in this instance, specifically how their lives are impacted by this concern. Just a minor example, but good for future reference. As for awkward wording, the first paragraph, specifically how it refers to Twilight's bangs, would be one example where it feels like something's missing. However, that's something a few changes or additions could easily fix.
Anyway, the story was enjoyable despite some tiny mistakes, hence why it's deserving of an upvote. I'm glad I took the time to read this story, and you definitely have a good grasp on the characters and relationships. Best of luck on your future projects!
This is adorable
I honestly expected a more magically elaborate answer but this is good, simple is good
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This one hasn't gotten much attention in a while, so this was a pleasant surprise. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I don't usually write fluff, but when I do I try and give it a good go and a plot.
Also, nice, I finally got a Scarlett comment.
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He he
Twilestia is a great ship and a rare one too
This was really nice
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Rare? it has one of the biggest groups!
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Yes but
I didn't know that so finding it, until this moment, has been very hard
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Enjoy all that Twilight/Celestia reading backload then 👀
I hope you like more of my stories too <:
I'm guessing it's because Celestia views every pony in all of Equestria as her children?
Twilight is seemingly under the impression that Celestia doesn't know how babies are made. She is well aware you don't have the right equipment for that job.
I just hope you don't have to pay the child support.
Cute story.
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Reverse child support. All of their subjects pay taxes! Hooray!