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Incredible. And hot. The interplay between Shining, Cadance, and Rarity is incredible, and I love the exploration of their dynamics. It's like you wrote this just for me.
I really liked what the ending did for the story. It's nice to see that the 'no jealousy' part explored with something that isn't sex related -- like, pointing out that while the sex is great and fulfilling, there are other equally rewarding paths to happiness. And also just emphasizing that Twilight genuinely isn't jealous about this situation is such a nice thing.
Porn does this thing, sometimes, of making porn-logic permeate the entire universe. By those rules it would have been that Twilight wasn't jealous because she was also finding other partners, or having a wild self-love session. Instead she was doing something else she found emotionally rewarding, and that formed a basis of comparison for the sex. When I see porn that ties the idea of gratification into things that aren't sex, it grounds the sex more into reality and gives it more context. Makes it feel more three dimensional.
It's why I really like a good romance with incidental clop scenes a lot more than a lot of straight clopfiction, I think. It's really nice to see those elements packed here into such a small space.
I don't really know how to explain it better. I guess if I ever get around to writing a clopfic myself, I'll probably have to get back to you on that one.
LOL at the short description and chapter title. Well done, sir.
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Having not even read the story yet, the analysis you put forth is pretty damn well said as an ideology that stands in its own right.
If you ever get around to writing a clopfic, I'd certainly be interested in seeing what you come up with.
I'm also an editor too, so if you need that as well, I'm all eyes.
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Seconded: This feels very fitting, thematically.
Yes, Flurry. They're experimenting!
Earning their Ph.D's in the durability and elasticity of pony flesh, it seems!
This was great, very few writers I've seen have been able to write rougher sex without coming across as abusive and immoral. Shiny and Cady come across as loving and kinky, and Rarity is a treat too getting into her character for their playing.
Not mention Twilight being axactly the type of aunt I'd expect her to be, Hasbro really had the right idea having her open a school in the upcoming season. I wonder if she's considering a foal of her own since she likes being an aunt so much, could she be considering asking Shining to be a surrogate for Rarity in the future? We'll have to imagine I suppose.
Very amazing.
The good cop/bad cop thing Cadence and Shining had going throughout the session was just perfect. Rings true.
I enjoyed the premise of the story, but there were times in the story that I felt that the narration lost track of the action and/or experienced critical disconnects between the anatomy, their positions, and the actions they took from one moment to the next.
we need a return visit
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I enjoyed this for the character bits even if I'm not personally into the really rough sex. And Twilight at the end was such a lovely moment, teaching Flurry about pendulums on a swing.
The name calling brute of a male murdered any interest in this fic for me. This is why I ship Rarilight, not Shining Rarilight.
I would have loved this if it werent for all the name calling.
Aw that seen on the end was adorable