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Barley Citrus


I write about the countless coital encounters between humanoid horsies, anthropomorphous equines and at least passably bipedal pony people... Also, I really fuckin like Equestria Girls my dudes.

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Huh... I was NOT expecting Twilight to be that chill... But I'm not complaining, I get enough drama bombs on the Raritwi ship as is. Also I got my very much wanted reunion scene! 😊

The awkward is strong with this chapter, and Sunset is probably gonna have mixed feelings about this threesome thing. Like Rarity shuts her down but Rainbow gets a free invite harsh😂.... and suddenly I'm wondering what Fluttershy and Pinkie are up to 😂

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To be fair, if Rarity had actually fucked Sunset, Twi would've been more upset
She's exaggerating how chill she is with it to diffuse the tension because she doesn't like how worried Rarity is

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I'll at least say, don't expect much from Fluttershy or Pinkie
This story is really just about a specific few characters

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Well, I mean, if Sunset *wanted*, this would actually free her up for/make the split less awkward regarding Applejack, so....

I don't think they're going to be able to go back to being exclusive after this.

Congrats. You're more or less one of the very few to make me kinda enjoy futa.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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I'm glad
There's definitely a shortage of quality futa

Can I ask what makes it more enjoyable for you?
What do you like about the way I write it?

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It felt natural.

Which is really weird as I dislike when it's "born with" but am ok with "magically done".

Also helps that's its written super fucking hot.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Hnnng, my heart :heart:
and muh dick

Holy shit I loved this. I'm so happy for Rainbow Dash :heart:

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Agreed. Honestly this is one of a few futa works I'll keep up with, which can be counted with less than one hand.

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I'm glad you liked it
I'd love to hear what made you really love it?
What stood out to you?

I’m actually wondering how Sunset is taking this, considering. And if she and AJ are gonna end up a thing. And what poor Flutters and Pinkie are gonna think if/when they find out!

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Well the sequel is going to focus on Sunset
So buckle in for the ride

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Just wanted to let you know
If you've already read the final chapter:: Coming Together
I have altered the ending (roughly the last 500 words of it)
Consider rereading at least that part of it for the canon ending

Or if you haven't finished reading it yet, then enjoy

What are Fluttershy and pinkie up to hmmm?

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We'll see a bit of Pinkie in the next story
But don't expect much of either of them in this series
They're just not the focus is all

Was sunset angry with dash for the threesome remark or something...i cant really tell what the context is supposed to be?

Comment posted by Harriet_Farrar deleted May 8th, 2020

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Yeah, she's mad that Rainbow is asking her permission when they aren't even in a relationship
Because she would've jumped at the chance for a threesome and yet Rainbow just said maybe
So she feels kind of insulted

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Oh, that makes more sense, thanks for simplifying it, I can't wait to see how sunsets and rainbows thing progresses with the next chapter, also you have done a fantastic job of writing one of the cutest RD's that I've read so far

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