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An alt for porn commissions.

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I believe the only thing I can say is:


Very fluffing good.


:twilightsmile:

Majin Syeekoh
Moderator

The commission feels strangely incestuous.

That. Was amazing.😵

Fuuuuuuck, that was hot. Love a good erotic spanking.

And an amazing rarepair, too. Makes a lot of sense when you think about it.

Very well done!

--CG

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You have to encourage the smart ones. Otherwise they'll get bored and start using their powers for Evil.

Majin Syeekoh
Moderator

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Ah, yes. The decision between porn and evil is a perilous path to prepare for.

Someone commissioned you... to write an entry to my contest...

Not sure if impressed by laziness or overcome with sadness...

Majin Syeekoh
Moderator

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Be impressed with the sadness.:ajsmug:

I want a sequel where she teaches Dash.

I will fucking pay god damn it.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Normally I don't comment on clopfics, but I have to leave some kind of reaction for the sake of my future self when he reviews all the entrants.

As such, an excellent premise, a fantastically written Cheerilee, an enjoyably insubordinate Spitfire, and great pacing. You followed your own advice in that regard; keeping it steady is demonstrably the key to success. Best of luck in the judging.

Wow. I might have to take notes...

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I'd guess it's more a case of the writer killing two birds with one hand in the bush. And a mighty fine bush it is.

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I do have commission slots open right now.

Such a good fluffing story. Fluffing is my new favorite word! Great job.

Honestly... I liked the steam room scene best! :rainbowlaugh:

Spits you damn tease! I think you blueballed Soarin' and made Rainbow question her sexuality! :rainbowlaugh:

When she turned back to her own locker, Dash was trying to force her wings back down with her hooves, and Soarin’ had found a towel in his locker to wrap around his waist, even though he hadn’t hit the showers yet.

Serious code of conduct violation in:
3...
2...
1...

Wait, she totally did have some gum. She had some breath mints for if she ever got bugs stuck in her teeth. Score! Next time Cheerilee turned her back, all she had to do was reach into her pocket and... “Ah, no, Miss. But I guess that’s why you’re the teacher.”

Upvote, favorite, and follow for that alone.

best clopfic I've heard all month

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