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This was the best thing I’ve read in a while. It had everything:.. just everything! THANK YOU
Absolutely loved this, was well written, vividly descriptive and had all the little kinks and filth I especially enjoy in it. Was extremely hot and dirty, thanks for writing it!
I guess this story is probably a one parter and complete enough, but boy I'd love it if more of this "train" of events were to continue, perhaps with Luna, Cadance? But yeah, great story! Followed.
This is some good smut! I think you did an especially good job of showing Celestia’s transition from princess to slut and back.
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Of course, thank ya for reading!
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Luna is too much of a prude and would take some serious convincing. For Cadance it's just called... a work day :P
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Glad you enjoyed! Always happy to provide for my audience!
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Yea celestia is my favorite sub. You had elements of her liking it but feeling the humiliation which is a Delicate mix! And the details of her nose and musk and scents which isn’t always Included. Everything I could ask for
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I could imagine Luna being a little backwater instead of prude. Easily moldable if you just tell her what she wants to hear. "Is it really tradition to put it in my, black hole as you call it? Is that really a celebration of the night?" Something according to this maybe?
What a fun story.
This was a pretty good story, decent characterization, concept and plot.
I found the sex itself to be a little uninspired, though. Aside from the watersports, which isn’t really my thing anyway, there wasn’t much variety or surprise when it came to how the sex was done. One creampie in each hole, no more, no less, eating out one mare, all in spitroast position with no change. None of that is bad per se … but I’d expect more from such a huge gangbang. We didn’t even get the full 6 guards present at the time, much less any reinforcements. She’d only fucked four of them before the story cuts away from it. Oh, lol, and at no point did any of them bother to so much as touch her tits…
Still, though, it was an enjoyable enough story, even if it maybe didn’t live up to its full potential.