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Stormbringer


I write romance with intimacies, not clop. To my readers, I quote The Bard: “We who prologue-like your humble patience pray, Gently to hear, kindly to judge, our play.” (Henry V)

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During a trip to visit with her family in Canterlot, Princess Twilight Sparkle sees a picture on the wall at the Royal Guard Headquarters. The picture and the caption blows her mind.

Twilight Velvet tells her daughter about a past that she hadn’t hidden but never had brought up before.

The things about her mother, Twilight never expected. Including who she is really married to and how her father fits into this. Since everypony is coming clean about themselves, Twilight introduces her marefriend of 3 years… Applejack.

The Sex and Gore labels are for mild implied sex and brief gore.

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Comments ( 29 )

The tags are a nightmare. Clean 'em up.

But the premise is interesting.

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But it covers all of that. I hope you like the story anyway.

I quite enjoyed this story. I very much like things that delve into the Ψ, and I look forward to the next part.

As soon as she asked the princess to call her that instead my mind exploded, lol
That’s when everything made sense
You are clever

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I was trying to achieve that. It was enough of hint with them living in Vanhoover and not having a father at home. And failing the entry exam. But it was left vague. I am glad my efforts were worth it. Thanks. :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, I got confused too. I was like "wtf is going on?" then it revealed this entire prologue is about Twilight VELVET! Oh, that was clever!

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I was figuring it was a alternate timeline where everything fell into place like this lol

Feels like I’m commenting a lot on this, seeing all my messages this close together. Lol

I like this story. It’s different than others I’m used to as I wish to see where this goes from here, plus I’m really curious as to what happened to Dream.
I have my theory’s but I’d still like to read it.

Now... my biggest issue with this is that I can find no reason that Twilight shouldn’t have known about Dream.
In my opinion Twilight should have always have known about her. Not her job in the guard because it could have been like with her mother, she knew Velvet was in the guard but didn’t know more.
Idk, it just feels odd knowing that Dream is a huge part of the Twilight family and yet she was kept more or less away

But still, you may go into why that is though, If you continue that is, and I’ll be waiting when you do.

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Thanks for your words. After all the views and the relatively small dislikes, I do plan to go ahead with another that will answer some or all of the questions. And about TV's past, my father was in WWII and Korean War. He almost never talked about anything about that. I was a Navy Corpsman in Desert Storm and I understand. So perhaps the past had to be worked through.

As far as Dream Walker, there could be many valid reasons TS hadn't been let in on. After all, Celestia would have known about all this. But the younger Twilight was an excitable and perhaps slightly emotional unstable and she hadn't been ready for such a revelation. We will see...

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Alright, alright, I see that about TS, that’s true about her.
And I don’t have an issue with TS not knowing about the military career of her parents. It’s just her not haveing the chance to know Dream before now,
but keep in mind... I don’t know what happened to Dream yet. I guess I’m just curious as to why TS hasn’t asked why she hasn’t met or heard of her before now.
Oh well, looks like I’ll get answers soon. :twilightblush:

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Yes, if you see my latest blog, I have decided to do a 2nd part to the story.

All this time i was "where is the alternate universe tag" then the ending, :rainbowlaugh:

Well hope we will see more of this world sooner or later.


Just bugged by the fact that Twilight (younger) wasnt taught to control her abilities, instead left alone even thought obviously in that state its extremely dangerous for everyone around her when under stress. And the Twilight we know and love is prone to stressing out. xD

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As you read, the Ψ abilities of Alicorns is much more than the common pony. Twilight may not have had that great of Ψ abilities growing up, not her special talent. Even as an Alicorn she isn't as Ψ powerful as her mother or Dream Walker.

Yes it is still iffy, but Twi has matured since Lesson Zero.

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Yeah that would explain it, but now that shes capable of using said powers i imagine she will have to be trained. Dont want her to blow AJs brains out with her lust do we. :twilightblush:

And man was Lesson Zero long ago, still was a good episode. And Twilight certainly came a long way from then.

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Blow her brains out? Nah! Make her a love/lust slave????

Something to think about. :twilightsmile::applejackconfused:

I really enjoyed this story, keep up the good work!! :twilightsmile:

Then Twilight leapt on her lover’s chest. Her muzzle at AJ’s nether regions and her own marehood above AJ’s muzzle.

Just feel I should point out, this probably exceeds the 'T' rating on the story. :twilightsmile:

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On the line I might say, not quite over. Nothing too explicit. I've ventured into the M area with some of my other stories. But there is the suggestion of what will happen. But without getting into the act.

But hey! Thanks for reading and caring enough to comment. Thanks! :twilightsmile: :ajsmug:

great job my friend. cant wait for more

Salty yet sweet. Kinda like a Payday, minus the nuts.

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