• Member Since 15th Dec, 2016
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Nathan Hon


Hi, I am Nathan, and being a fan of My little pony for 3 years, I decided to dive deeper into the community and check out fan fictions.Hope you enjoy my stories! :)

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One day, Tempest came to Ponyville from a far away home, just for a tiny surprise visit for one of her first friends, Twilight Sparkle. To her, she was a savior; Being one of the only ones to have trusted her, forgiven her for everything, and treating her as an equal.

With this valuable chance, Twilight wanted to clear a question out of her mind: 'What happened?'

Inspired by The Sentence. Check it out!

(Note: This story takes place around a year after the events of the movie. Everything you need to know prior to this story will be explained. Oh, and there may or may not be cheesy scenes between the two, so if you're a Twilight x Tempest ship hater, brace yourselves!:derpytongue2:)

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Comments ( 6 )

It started out good but once it got to the confession it all felt so rushed and was really hard to read. Enjoyed it none the less.

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Was it rushed? I dunno😂 Oh and what do you mean it’s hard to read? I’m confused

Good story overall. One of the things I didn't like so much, though, was putting actions in asterisk (the stars). But apart from that, it was good! :derpytongue2:

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So is it recommended that I mention the action out of the dialogue?

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Yeah, preferably. I think it just looks better with the actions out dialogue. :3

Aw lovey feel sorry for tempest backstory

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