This takes place around the middle of season 8, after School Daze but before School Raze.
The School of Friendship has been a great success for the mane six and all the students. It had a rocky start and was risked for getting unaccredited, but the group pulled through and over time, more ponies supported the school.
However, when the young six found something in the school they never thought they’d see, a normal day that should be filled with giggles and fun lessons took a turn for a more uneasy environment and suspicion arose between the peers.
It seems that somepony was trying to destroy their hard work and their fun paradise of friendship and diversity. The only thing missing, is the one thing everycreature was asking:
“Who did it?”
Edit on 7/4/2018: Got into popular stories! Thanks guys!
Good story, but I do have one teeny-tiny l'il nitpick.
And that is that Ocellus is female, not male.
Other than that, great story.
Did I not edit it? I thought I did
“Snadbar”
OH MY GOSH! WHO’S THIS NEW CHARACTER?
But seriously, great story. Few errors, but doesn’t really matter. Just make sure to check your work once you’re done and remember that Ocellus is female. During one part it says ‘he’ when describing her.
Other than that, great story.
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Ah, I figured it out- Maybe I published too quickly when I edited it, you guys already seen the wrong version. So sorry for confusing you all! It should be fixed now, just read again.
And you can probably say it’s an unintentional Minecraft mod reference??? Maybe???
(There’s actually a thing in the sky factory mod called Snad, basically fake sand)
This makes zero sense
For one thing, if someone found a bomb in the school, The school would be evacuated immediately, And not only that, But school would’ve been cancelled
I feel like that one episode of Static Shock was relevant in the climax. What was it called? Sins of the Father?
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No clue what that is but okay!
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cartoon show in the early 2000s
Great story. The only problem is that the young six shouldn't be calling themselves that. In reality yes we real people call them that, but they don't call themselves the young six in universe.
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Right.... Thanks for the feedback though! Also read my sequel :3
Nathan Hon awesome story and keep up the good work
I like this story, even though I simp on Neighsay, here some of my things to say to Chancellor Neighsay to have a great day!
You are the garbage, if you were like Gargamel, I would have called you Garbage Smell.
Bruh, are you Vincenzo Cassano?
And you ARE the master of magical locks.
Well...That's impolite, FYI.