Two Fer

Golden Harvest found out she was getting married after a party. Problem is, her soon to be has a twin, and which one is him is anypony's guess.

Even the Twin's themselves.

Teen rating for mild language, and a couple implications.

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This story makes no sense, and was written in about two hours. Rushed, unedited, and probably bad.
Written for the Season 9 Bingo Writing Contest with only three days before the deadline.

Cover art done in 30 minutes via MS Paint, the best art platform there is. Random vectors are by people on Derpibooru. Rest of image is from It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia.

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LtMajorDude

LtMajorDude #1 · Apr 4th, 2019 · 1 · ·

I've seen worse. Sonic_RainbowDash2005

Acoustic Pulse

Acoustic Pulse #2 · Apr 4th, 2019 · · ·

Good to see you're still breathin', Rob.

ROBCakeran53

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ROBCakeran53 #3 · Apr 4th, 2019 · 3 · ·

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I don't think this story counts as breathing. More like a dry heave.

Acoustic Pulse

Acoustic Pulse #4 · Apr 4th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Both stallions began sweating. “O-oh, you can’t really do that.” Flam said.
“Right, right, don’t we have a say in this?” Flim pulled again at his tie.
Neighsay left the gavel hovering, “Oh? Can’t I? I think I just did.”
“Well, we can’t get hitched, you see.”
“Yeah, yeah, not both of us at least.”
“And why, pray tell, is that?”
Flam swallowed hard. “Because one of us is already married, just we don’t know who.”
“Or with whom.” Flam added.
Silence rang.
A blue hoof shot up in the air. “Trixie volunteers!”
“Sold!” The gavel finally slammed down. “Twin stallions to the blue mare in the back! You three have one month to pay Golden Harvest back for her debt. Court is dismissed.” Another gavel swing, and Chancellor Neighsay stood and walked out.

This was funny as hell. SOLD!

Acoustic Pulse

Acoustic Pulse #5 · Apr 4th, 2019 · · ·

9546882
Come now, don't be so down on yourself.

Romantic Bliss

Romantic Bliss #6 · Apr 4th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Lolllll

Ri2

Ri2 #7 · Apr 4th, 2019 · 2 · ·

...WHAT JUST HAPPENED?!

Do Flim and Flam even know their names?!

chief maximus

chief maximus #8 · Apr 4th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Teen rating for mild language, and a couple implications.

Well she wouldn't say no, she would never say no, because of the implication.

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #9 · Apr 5th, 2019 · 2 · ·

It’s a good thing this wasn’t a Phoenix Wright homage, barring Payne any prosecutor from that series would have killed at least one of the brothers...and possibly the judge.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #10 · Apr 5th, 2019 · 2 · ·

...love was a farce in the vein hopes that you didn’t die alone.

Arterial hopes, however, were generally much more optimistic.

Delightful, dizzying madness throughout. Thank you for a wonderful bit of narrative disorientation.

9547024
Of course they do! Flim and Flam.

Now, which name goes to which brother, that's rather more complicated.

ROBCakeran53

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ROBCakeran53 #11 · Apr 5th, 2019 · 2 · ·

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Glad you enjoyed it!

Marcellus Jones

Marcellus Jones #12 · Apr 13th, 2019 · · ·

“Sold!” The gavel finally slammed down. “Twin stallions to the blue mare in the back! You three have one month to pay Golden Harvest back for her debt. Court is dismissed.” Another gavel swing, and Chancellor Neighsay stood and walked out.

Case dismissed. Love this story, it was really funny.

flutterboot