Cover image is not mine. Takes place one year before the events of A Rather Large Adventure.
Rewritten and re-edited 1/25/18
Princess Celestia has a secret group of three powerful protectors of Equestria, called the Guardians of the Sun. They are the elite strike force of Equestria, taking on the risks before they become public. Not many ponies know of their existence.
One such threat was a work station in the sky known as Skyworld that was threatening the destruction of all the lands in the southern parts of Equestria. After the Skyworld mission the Guardians of the Sun undertook, one of them, Firestorm, ends up with a rather important piece of technology that could potentially change Equestria as they know it.
So what does he do? With the permission of Princess Celestia, he decides to destroy it before it can do anything significant. But how will he do it?
This has been definitely interesting and hilarious read. At first I thought it wasn’t very comedic nor random, but the second half proved me wrong
To be honest, I had to check a few times if this story wasn’t supposed to have an anthro tag, as words such as ‘arm’ or ‘wrist’ may imply. Biologically speaking, those are correct, but they also have their horse-themed synonyms...
Anyway, I think I’ll definitely check out the main story!
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Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! It made my day seeing your response! It's amazing! This is the way comments are supposed to be done! You're awesome!
Hello!
I have reviewed your story as part of the Reviewer's Cafe. As always, thank you for the time, effort, and hard work you have put into this story's creation, and I hope you find my review to be somewhat helpful.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/308771/reviews?page=8#comment/6289924
If the main OCs in this story and the sequel were voiced, what would they sound like?
Noble would sound like Ewan Mcgregor but without his British accent, Firestorm would sound like Ryan Reynolds, and Freedom Fighter's inner voices would sound like a deep voice for the italicized parts and a normal pitch for the normal bits.
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Erk
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Dgah, whaaa? Vas is das? Erk? What's that?
The cartooniness of how Firestorm went about the task... brilliant!
Just got a chance to check this out, and... that was the funniest thing I've ever read! The cartoonishness of Firestorm and how the whole deal went was brilliant! Great job!
P.S. Why doesn't this story has more likes? WHY!?
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Because not many other people have read it.
This is an unofficial prequel to A Rather Large Adventure. I highly, highly, highly recommend you check it out.
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Ehhh, fuck it. I really need to read a good fanfic again, so why not?
Here is your review.