I'm wondering how well he's doing as a three-dimensional comedian in A Rather Large Adventure. Do my loyal readers actually like him, or do they just think he's annoying? I don't want everyone to have to deal with him for the entire rest of the long, long, long story, and it's been grinding on my mind: how well did I create this character?

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After feedback, I have decided to rewrite the story to make it a better prequel to A Rather Large Adventure. Check it out, man! Please? I worked hard on it.