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Very Sleepy


I am never serious.

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"reads the spoiler tag"
Should i risk it? hmm.....

Beach trip, high school students, clothed males and naked females. This really sounds like a lot of hentai I watched.

I have yet to read this but you used Uotapos' art as cover... You have my interest! And considering all the tags, this can only possibly end in one way...

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I pretty much love everything Uotapo draws. It's really a step above most of the artwork I see nowadays.

I thought I knew what I was getting into when I read this, but the bikini-cutting part made me feel sick. I wasn't expecting to actually read about a sexual predator- from their perspective- and it just felt so rapey, ugh :pinkiesick:

Also- if a girl wakes up and finds herself suddenly naked, she most likely isn't going to scream. She's going to keep very, very quiet, try to cover herself up, and find a friend.
This fic swings between comedy to sexual assault back to comedy, it's kinda frustrating

Okay, dude, I like this idea and I'll definitely read it, but will Clothing Control or Braeburn ever get new chapters?

My guess is Rainbow and Pinkie

Apparently males are all fuckin retarded, the stuff they are doing is downright creepy

Damnit all this sex and nuditity is distracting me from solving the mystery.
I have a few ideas, but nothing concrete.

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Seems kinda obvious by the end. Not many other options that are seriously hinted at.
It could be a red herring, of course, but there's a number of 'clues' if you can call them that

Odd you didn't make this a squeal to your other Equestria Girls story

If I had to wager a guess I think that Rarity is involved somehow, after all she's the one who made the bikini's in the first place and she doesn't seem too concerned about her passion being assaulted, and there was no unique variation between the girl's outfits so I think she whipped them up quick-ish and was ready for them to be destroyed. Plus she managed to convince everyone to wear them by saying that they're in season.

I'm wonderfing if someone enchanted the island to let everyone get so...touchy feely. Not sure i like it. Feels creepy.

is this going to be finished soon? I would like to see the end of this.

Can't wait for the epic finale. Loving this tale!

Didn't happen the way I expected it but I was wondering by how long the guys were going to keep their shorts. Not for very long apparently...

Two questions.
One, will the third chapter be coming soon?
Two, do you have any other planned CMNF stories?

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I kind of lost my drive for this story, guessing I made the mystery a bit to hard. But I do love the CMNF stuff and I'm willing to write more of it if I ever come up with an interesting and original enough idea for it.

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Interesting and original idea, huh? Okay if I throw a few suggestions?

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Well, here's a couple.
Cafe fundraiser: the girls set out to do to a fundraiser via a roller cafe, and have a big opening special. The problem is, due to some sort of accident, the main part of the uniform and their ordinary clothes are rendered unwearable just before opening, with no time to find another solution. Which means they've got the choice of letting the fundraiser fail, or running the cafe in just rollerskates and knee/elbow pads. For whatever reason, they go through with it.

Water Park Mishap: as some sort of prize, everyone from CHS and Crystal Prep get a water park to themselves for a day. However, while the girls are showering before putting on their swimsuits in the park locker room, a miscommunication results in the parks cleaning service clearing away all their clothes and swimsuits, leaving them the choice of hiding in the locker room the entire day or going out to enjoy the park naked.

Making School Bare-able: a direct sequel to "Twilight's Nude Party Experience", covering more of what happens at CHS as a result of the events there...and how the effect ends up spreading to Crystal Prep. (Basically expanding the last chapter of that story into a full story.)

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I actually had been thinking of expanding on the Twilight's party fic for a while now and dragging in the Crystal Prep girls as well. Got stuck thinking up an entertaining way to do it though.

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Here's an easy and entertaining way to do it. I've seen a lot of stories have a 'student exchange' between Crystal Prep and CHS pushed by the Shadowbolts post the Friendship Games, resulting in some of the Shadowbolts at CHS and some of the HuMane 7 at Crystal Prep. Have the Shadowbolts introduced to it by being 'thrown in the deep end' as it were by experiencing a day at CHS post the change, and Crystal Prep being exposed to the idea by having whatever girls - or guys - end up there sharing pictures.

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It's too bad you aren't too much inclined to complete this story; however, that can't stop me from still hoping for an update!

>>Tatsurou
Hey, if you don't mind, I'd be happy to write those stories for you! :D

Just stumbled across this one, and was quite surprised to learn the same author of Pet Play Life. Pity it's been shelved, was a fun read.

Guys I think I know who did it 🕵.
YOU DO (all Ponys):pinkiegasp::rainbowderp::raritydespair::applejackunsure::fluttercry::twilightoops::moustache::derpyderp1:

Are there any plans to post the final chapter? I may have an idea on who, what, where, why and how it's done.

I just wanted to say that "both Porn Hub and Porn Discovery Family" may be one of the funniest lines I've seen on any porn fic on the site.

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I agree. The two of them were talking about pranks from the beginning, the one pair of scissors found was rainbow-colored, and those two were the only ones we'd seen going out of bounds of the official beach. I'd call that a pretty strong case.

when is there going to be more?

Comment posted by spider mane 616 deleted Nov 11th, 2020

well one thing is for sure flash sentry is going to DIE! If you better sleep with one eye open because the grim reaper has arrived and that grim reaper is me

I'm gonna kill myself. Because I'm desperate for nudity.

Bruh not gonna be that person and say finish it cause everyone else already said it for me
Anyway bet rainbow and pinkie did it 100%
You said there would be clues, that with the prank thing, and the fact that everyone assumed it was the boys means it wasn’t
Plus rainbow and pinkie acted so boldly it’s almost like they wanted it
And planned it.....

Also story may or may not be dead
But author is not
So if you chill might actually get another chapter
The more begging often turns authors off from writing/get stressed
And I definitely want more so y’all shut up so I can get a chance at getting it
;)

Can't wait for more. Please tell me there will be more.

Is there a chance you're gonna continue with this story?

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