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Very Sleepy


I am never serious.

Comments ( 46 )

insect?

I think you mean incest

6133748 Thanks, unfortunately this page wasn't part of the stuff I proofread a hundred times.

For a first story, that was pretty damn good. A few spelling and grammar mistakes, true, but nothing too jarring.

Also HAWT.

This was f*cking G-R-E-A-T. Spectacularly hot. Thank you.

Very nice, only mistake I noticed was "loved crazed sister", otherwise excelent work.

6134328 I had plans to write another chapter for now if it turned out people liked this thing. Sunset may or may not be getting more involved.

6134817 I only put this story in the clopfics and humanized ponies group. Someone else must've added it to the others, and I doesn't seem like there's anything I can do about it.

6134295 I don't understand what's wrong with that line.

6134826 should be "love-crazed sister"

EqG Princest? We don't see too much of this and I thank you for this wonderful addition.:pinkiesmile:

However while this may be due to my personal preference, the mentions of all of them happen to have D-cups and Celly's 9 inch dick just come off as too unrealistic for me but it is kinda hot. Unrealistic but hot. Make of that what you will I guess.

Since this is marked incomplete, I hope to see more of this from you.

6134826
Can we please get a bonus chapter where Sunset blackmails Celestia into giving her the fucking of a lifetime?:pinkiehappy: Please?:pinkiesad2:

AWESOME!!! :pinkiehappy:I love it. I wait for the next chapter.

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A #15 · Jun 28th, 2015 · · 1 · The Deal ·

Enjoyable, sexuality is very healty and really make you happier and glowing, no wonder why Luna no longer mind being the victim of Sunset and able even get her aback and tease her too.

Masturbation is also inevitable, if you DON'T do it, you are not human.

Comment posted by Very Sleepy deleted Jun 29th, 2015

Second Chapter is posted, I think you guys will love it, especially if you liked the first chapter.

Also my humorous side took over a bit for this chapter, so I've added a comedy tag to the story.

6146206

If it is I don't want to be right.

Insta faved. Had me aroused the whole time, wonderful work! Thank you for continuing this marvelous story! <3

6146206 Not in the slightest, because you aren't alone.

this needs a sequel
let us see what they do in the summer

Pretty good. but why would sunset talk to celestia about the blackmail when she only told luna, I just dont feel that she would be that forgetful or stupid to make a such a mistake.

6150857 Sunset thought Luna had told Celestia about it, which is a fair assumption because Luna actually had told her about it.

All I could imagine during the part when sunset was looking through the closet waspbs.twimg.com/media/BcxjqmOCUAA-cY1.jpg

6151341 you should continue this so it will include a summers worth of fuckings for sunset.

Wait. She came in both their wombs? Isn't there a chance then that celestia got both sunset and her sister pregnant... wait. if the human celly has a dick then... oh

Please make a sequel(s). I kinda of want to see Principal Celestia go on and bang the HuMane Five and a few other female characters.

and then Sunset became the principal's slutty, cum-hungry sex slave through a rigorous sex training over the summer. the end.

*cough*sequelidea*cough*

6152272 Your comment made me laugh out loud compulsively for the first time in years.

6148014 This should have a sequel I agree, except both principles should have cocks and they can ram them both up Sunsets holes.

“Are you quite finished in there darling? Luna asked impatiently. “The night won’t last forever”

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Meta- and parallels-reference in a single narrative sentence. Simply genius!

Comment posted by The Forgotten One deleted Jan 2nd, 2016

It got better how the heck did it get better.
I mean the first was amazing and this on a scale of 1-10 of awsome is a 100 how do you top this? Honestly how?

Why is this so good .... what the hell 0_o

You know what never mind I'm not gonna question it , take my upvote and addition to a bookshelf. Good story.

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By being full of pure unadulturated winning.

I'm not even a fan of futa Celestia- like at all.
But you
You have made it genuinely enjoyable.

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