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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

Comments ( 13 )

Holy shit what a twist! :rainbowderp: Ah... hot as hell sex there. And yeah... makes sense now that I think about it, with the shape-changing.

One typo I found:

Cadance reached down, putting a hand on his chcek, before whispering,

I think that should be 'cheek'.

8484248 I'm happy to hear you liked it! Adding Chrysalis at the end was actually caused by me realizing how weird it was for her to use all of the transformation stuff, when the goal was to forget about a shapechanger.

panting over this fiction

The ending. . . did not see that coming! But in a good way.

The rest of the story was good, too. :moustache:

And the cover image is a bonus; I'm definitely a fan of that artist.

Holy crap that ending was unexpected. Nice twist, though, and a good story to boot.

This was a really good fic, and it definitely ticked a lot off kinks on my list. I'd love to see a second chapter, perhaps with Chrissy just being herself. I'm for sure gonna be keeping an eye on your work!

I remember one with a similar premise, only Cadance used topical anaesthetic to castrate him during a blowjob. That one always pissed me off, because she wasn't putting out at all, and yet she expected him to just deal with it.

cock, squeezing and mmassaging it with Cadance’s smallest

Why are there two m’s? :rainbowhuh:

8794159 Because double clicking a button is one of the easiest typos for me to make. :twilightblush:

8794216
Thought so.
I was thinking you were making the “mmmm” sound.

The twist ending really didn't mesh with the rest of the fic. Were there two Chrysalis? Is he still mind controlled? Is this an epilogue to a bad end version? Is he just willfully ignoring the truth? I am just confused.

9050778 There was one Chrysalis. After the wedding, Chrysalis came back, and after Shining and her confessed love to each other again, Chrysalis... Removed Cadance from the equation so they could be together once again.

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