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scribe-feather

A frequent pegasus who posts infrequent stories.

scribe-feather Joined 9th Mar, 2014 · Offline

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Mix-up
Mix-up #1 · Feb 16th, 2017 · · ·
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This was a terrific end to the story and I wander if we will see more of her later in an other story. I would have wished that Spitfire and Thunderlane stay the thrall of the spell but I am fine with that.

The pink unicorn paused, blinked, before realizing what he wanted.

I thought that the store owner was peached colored coat not pink?

scribe-feather
scribe-feather #2 · Feb 16th, 2017 · · ·
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7953582
Good catch, I'll be sure to change that when I can.

However I could always argue that it was merely a means to avoid over using the word "peach" since peach could be called a shade of pink in some rare cases.

Mix-up
Mix-up #3 · Feb 16th, 2017 · · ·
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7953659 I you say so

milesprower06
milesprower06 #4 · Feb 18th, 2017 · · ·
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Aww, here I was hoping Thunderlane would keep those desires.

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