• Member Since 6th May, 2015
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LoLo June

A friendly pegasister who loves making friends. I occasionally write stories. *^-^*


Ever since the Gala, Soarin has had a crush on Rainbow Dash, but more recently these feelings had developed into something more. It had been a week since Dash finally joined the Wonderbolts and her first disastrous show. He worked up the courage to tell Dash how he felt, only for her to reject him. These are the months following this event.

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Comments ( 31 )

I'm sort of scared to read this due to that Thunderlane Tag...

Oh well... What's the worst that could happen? :derpytongue2:

MORE PWEASEEEEEE :heart::heart::heart:

I'll most likely continue this in a separate story with a whole plot, if you would like.

Very proud of you, LoLo. <3

7391046 Thank you Nortsy <3

www how sweet.Make sure sequel:rainbowkiss:

I'm new here and I DONT KNOW WHAT TO PRESS SO I COULD READ THIS, SOME HELP PLZ??!!:fluttershbad:

7391679 Just click on the title of the chapter.

oh...thx, wow I'm stupid

You're fine. :rainbowlaugh: :twilightsmile:

lol ok i guess

This was cute! :rainbowkiss: Very well done. :raritystarry:

At first I was like: :fluttershysad: but now I'm like: Awwwwww:rainbowkiss:

Awww!! :rainbowkiss:
PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!!! :pinkiehappy:

I r8 8/8.

I mean... I actually got the feels here. I don't get the feels very often, but you pulled it off.

I kinda wish that I'd read this sooner. This is a great story. =D

I kind of wanted Soarin to move on from Dash near the end. He was just getting over her too. I mean, I'm all for happy endings but this just feels anticlimactic imo.

Great story!!!Continue? I just like doing big letters

Well done, I'm glad I kept this on my read later list. It was exceptionally written, and fairly well paced.

Good show, Lad, jolly good show.

wow that was a cute one shot:twilightsmile:good job keep it up:twilightsmile:

you don't mess with a man's feelings. nice story


Oh my gawd... I ALMOST got scared of men:rainbowlaugh:
1 L0V3 1T!!:heart::heart::pinkiecrazy:

Dear lord Fuzzy. :facehoof:

Adorable story. I really like how you broke it down into the months that followed the rejection so we could see what Soarin was going through. Well done :twilightsmile:

Thank you for the clickbait sex tag cause this story is beautiful

Very nicely done. I'm glad things worked well for these two in the end.

Man, that rejection in the summary hit hard.

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