On one hand, I want to read this. On the other, this is bound to mess with my headcanon of the 'Nightmare' as a seperate entity.

Also, Celestia turns into the equivalent of NMM through whatever Discord does, which seems like a low boundary, but hey, clopfic

I really like this Discord and the Daybreaker that went with him, they feel just right in their roles and make for a very enjoyable reading.

About dame time we got a Discord X Daybraker fic

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I've never read the comics that show Nightmare Star as Celestia's alter ego, but from what little I've seen of it, it doesn't seem to be that much different than Daybreaker. It's basically "evil celestia" at the end of the day, right?

It's not really so much that Discord forces her to transform; he more just pushes the right buttons, and Celestia makes the decision on her own on reaction.

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I'm honestly shocked that there weren't a truckload of these dumped in the week following the episode's premiere. Fimffiction is so strange when it comes to what they consider trendworthy or not.

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Same here. I'm not usually one for writing aggressive and bondage sex, but I didn't really see it going any other way with Celestia's power-hungry alter ego. I still had to make it clear that it was all an act to a certain degree, hence why I had her revert back to Celestia and provide some nurturing aftercare following all of that hostility.

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I have no idea which comics you're talking about tbh. But I mean, I've always viewed 'Nightmare' as a seperate entity. Luna didn't transform into NMM, as much as she showed a moment of weakness and the 'Nightmare' took it to take her over. Nightmare not being a part of Luna but rather a third party.

I think the comics actually confirm this with Nightmare Rarity.

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the FiM wiki mentions that Nightmare Star is an alter-ego of Celestia in the IDW (or whatever company) comics based on the series. I think it's an alternate universe that they visit or something.
http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Princess_Celestia#Nightmare_Star
Ah, it's actually a card in the collectible card game. But the idea was at least popular enough to get some fanart.
Official art, BTW:
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I think it's an alternate universe that they visit or something.

In one comics Celestia and Mane Six ended in some sort of reversed world where good Sombra rule over Equestria and reverse-Celestia and reverse-Luna are both villains. But I'm not sure if reverse-Celestia ever call herself a Nightmare Star and in general she definitely not as cool as Daybreaker.

PS. In reverse-world Chrysalis represent Love (and with her glasses and manestyle she looks like a schoolteacher), Derpy/Muffins - Wisdom. Trixie - IIRC Humility and Flim and Flam represent Piety or something like this :).

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Ah. Well, there you go then. The only alter-ego I knew of before Daybreaker was through some really awesome fanart of her. Didn't really have a headcanon of her personality, but I can't imagine it being much different from Daybreaker's.

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That's better than the reference I've been waiting for someone to make.
This. Girl is on FIRRRRRRRRRRRE

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That's how I do, babe.

8288767 I kind of thought of it as her making a deal, and not realizing how little control she'd have after she let the nightmare into her body. If you look at her doing the deed in the show, she starts summoning a bunch of dark power and then halfway through is suddenly all 'ohcrapwhatisgoingon'.

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i know right. i mean this is an evil celestia. there can do an au fic where discord made her evil when he got freed the first time or have tia put it on for a prank. there is s much you can do with it

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I'm still not sure how the whole "nightmare" thing came to pass. I used to think it was a symbiote creature like Venom, but I've been kind of drifting away from that idea more and more. Starlight's dream kind of showed Celestia as Daybreaker in a way that she didn't need any symbiote taking over her mind; she just needed to lose her cool enough that she snapped and decided to go all evil on everyone (unless that's Starlight's dream not having a clue how alicorn princesses turn evil).

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Plus the fact that this is the 2nd episode we've had where Celestia had a major presence since like, season 1 (or season 5 if you count the brief appearances she had at the 2nd gala). I'd hope the fandom would be excited that the best princess in the show is finally getting the screentime that she's been robbed of after the first season.

I'm surprised the shaking of the castle, along with 'Celestia's unusually-aggressive order for a dungeon, of all things, to be constructed, didn't alert Princess Luna...
What, Night Court was so interesting Luna couldn't check on her sister?

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Your mom sucked in the 90's.
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Luna was too busy decorating the halls with flowers to care.

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Stephen Curry my ass

This story is fanastic; simply glorious! Not only sexy as all hell, but also humorous and relatable as well! You really sold this ship to me, you truly did.

Props to you for giving special attention to Celestia's anus. It was just the right amount of 'screentime' to complete the scene without going overboard -- not that I mind overboard when it comes to the glorious ponut, as my groups would attest, it's just that this story works wonderfully as is. In particular, I enjoyed it when, in the midst of giving sloppy oral, Discord's nose squishes against Celestia's tailhole. Unbelievably hot. Unf.

It is a masterpiece. So enjoyed it.

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I started writing one, completely different premise mind you, but I think I'll leave it for a while so no-one can accuse me of jumping on the bandwagon.

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I don't think there's any such thing is too much time spent describing that little orifice underneath the dock of a horse's tail. It's just too lovely of a thing to leave alone for even a moment.
It's like a pair of lips puckered up in a kiss~

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You mean the Daybreaker bandwagon?
I would say to get that story out soon. This is one bandwagon I wouldn't mind seeing gain some traction. The fandom needs more Daybreaker action IMO.

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I don't think there's any such thing is too much time spent describing that little orifice underneath the dock of a horse's tail. It's just too lovely of a thing to leave alone for even a moment.
It's like a pair of lips puckered up in a kiss~

I think I'm in love! Sounds like you'd enjoy my 'The Glorious Ponut' group.

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I'm loving the sub folders that are up there, very specific to the subject.
I should have checked to see that my story was already in there before accidentally adding it to a second folder. >.> Whoops.

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It's all good. Just removed it from the main folder and left it in the sub folders.

PS: if you'd like to suggest additional sub folders, just PM me. I'm always open to ideas!

High quality sexual content in the featured box on Fimfiction? What? What's not allowed.

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I know, right? And I didn't even use a single meme! I think the endtimes might be upon us.

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Or so she says...

I guess Discord isn't into tyrannical fem-dom as he thought he would be.

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He actually is: it's just that he doesn't want it to become the norm for the rest of his relationship with Celestia. If he wasn't liking it, he would have said so as it was happening (and I wouldn't have written it, because I don't enjoy stories in which the characters aren't 100% consenting to what's going on).

It might have helped if I had incorporated the existence of a safety word in case something got too intense for him.

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Oh, I see; and yeah I don't like practical non-consensual rape fics either.

What safety word would you have used if you happened to come up with it before or during writing the final draft? It probably wouldn't have been, klutzy draconequus.

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I'm actually talking about it with Steel_Quill right now on Skype. I can't decide between "ice cubes" or "refrigerator".
Why those phrases, you might ask?
Because if things get too hot for him to handle, they're his code word that he needs to cool down.

Well this was a lovely read. Im always a fan of dominant ladies in stories. :)

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Haha, both of them are pretty good; but I think my choice would be ice cubes since they're colder than the temperature inside a refrigerator.

I only hope Daybreaker would be merciful enough to accept a condition for a safe word.

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It's something I've only recently developed in the past years. Not sure where it came from, but I've just been becoming more and more infatuated with the idea of a lady who's pulling the reigns in the relationship (I blame all the Zootopia fanart in which Judy is dominating Nick, who looks happy as a clam while underneath her).

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That is something that I can definitely get behind. :)

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Of course she would. The ending of the story implies that Celestia was in control the entire time. She was aware of everything that happened; she just enjoyed getting into character and dropping the need to be a good princess after having to do so all day for so many years without much chance for a break.

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Oh yeah, hehe. Guess I'm a bit clueless and forgetful.

8294834 Hm, yeah, that explains why it didn't take that much effort from Discord to make her let go of her restraint. I can accept that. :)

One thing I was expecting but didn't happen was daybreaker draining Discord's balls completely dry and then just keep going.

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That's a little too far beyond my personal tastes. I just wanted to dip my feet into the BDSM side of the pool, didn't want to cannonball in or anything.

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That's what the cover seems to be depicting.

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I guess I can't tell you not to see it however you're seeing it. But I wrote into the story what I saw happening in the full picture.

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Yeah, at least to me that's what's happening. Discord looks quite in pain.

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To me it looks like a mind-blowing climax. People make all sorts of interesting faces when they hit the orgasmic peak.

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Yeah, you're right. I would just have liked it if you had taken this a little further. Really show how powerful Daybreaker is.

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Well, that ain't my cup of tea, bro.

Would it be inappropriate to reference these songs for this story?

Seriously though, great work here and there should be more of this pairing, and considering I'm someone who generally doesn't read clop stories...

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Yeah, I'm actually shocked there wasn't a huge influx of Daybreaker stories after the episode's premiere. I mean, Nightmare Moon was introduced back in season 1, appeared about once per season (with the exception of season 3 and maybe 4) and people are still making edgy/emo stories about her. Then Celestia gets her own evil version of herself? Barely any stories at all.

It's because she's white, isn't it?

Anyway, I might revisit this idea in the future. I do already have an outline structured, I just have a bunch of other stories for Zootopia and other stuff lined up before I think about coming back to another MLP thing. So, we'll see. I wouldn't get my hopes up though.