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All Art Is Quite Useless
When I'm not writing stories, I'm writing essays. My keyboard sees fairly frequent use. University student, high functioning Rainbow Dash enthusiast, and satirical activist.
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Oooh... I'm starting to form a picture in my mind. Nice.
You got AJ's colour wrong, it's the same as Fluttershy's. Still, story's going strong.
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Thanks for catching that man. I wrote this in like four hours so I'm not surprised there's a mistake or two. Glad you're enjoying it so far!
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Gonna read soon but Im way too lazy rn.
Wool. Also, you missed the closing quotation marks at the end of one of AJ's sentences.
Overall, it was fun. Quite the thrilling ride you have here. I do wish we had got to see a bit more of the Castle's thoughts leading up to the grand finale as well as a stronger delivery of its grand plan to make it seem less like a moustache-twirling villain.
Nevertheless, it was an enjoyable read.
So, did Twilight just kill Spikezilla with her spell? Also, thie whole thing felt a bit rushed. It's not bad but I feel like each of the chapters could have been a bit more fleshed out.
Since there's no explicit sexual content in here (it's mostly implications and T rated) you could do remove the tag without a problem.
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I think I stuck it on just to be safe, but if you think that's the case I'll do just that. Cheers!
AAIQU
Poor Starlight.
Ah, i see where we're going.
Rarity can't be generous if she has nothing to give, she won't have anything to give if she can't make money to get more. Gg element
Wait, how does the element of kindness figure that death is a kindness to a animal that isn't suffering (just struggling with one less limb)?
Though I figure the snake being nearby was kindness to the snake, for he craved chicken.
I was almost hoping kindness gets in a loop of doing good that hurts others and struggling to fix the hurt caused, up till one half of each conflict wasn't in need anymore.
His morals conflict with it? This coming from the castle who reduced an innocent mare into a pile of gore?
[Ment to put this earlier]