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The cover, oh dear. Well, guess I'll have to try it...sometime later...possibly.
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I wish I had a friendlier-looking picture of maid Trixie, but I do not :(
edit: I've since taken a liking to the current image, after having looked at it so many times during the past month ^^
Poor twilight looking like a mess in public
Let's face it: Trixie's a whore.
And I think I'm about to really like where this is going. Not that I don't already like where this is going...
912983 I got no problems with it, it's just 'oh dear' is the exact reaction I had :V. Hell, this story IS...kind of relatable to the picture, so why not have it, right?
Another good chapter!
Also I liked the picture :3
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Well that was interesting. *Sigh* Looks like Twilight and Trixie are in for a bumpy ride.
WOO! FIRST! And Trixie, you get through this
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I could look for you.
another great chapter keep it up
Hmm... Applejack and Rainbow Dash are at Twilight's house. Not separate, but together. I am start to see success in the story. Great job on the story by the way. I just got done plotting my story, so I should start writing it in about a few days because I am busy today and tomorrow. My goal is to try to get the first chapter in by, at most, the end of July, and from that point on it should be smooth sailing. Keep up the good work, and I await the next chapter of your story.
From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha
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That bad mane day.
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Starting to pick up speed, we are.
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Alright, it's good for now then ^^
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They already rode bumpily *wink wink, nudge nudge*
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That's the most likely version, yeah.
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We can only hope our loves reaches her :(
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Well, if you find something, tell me, but no need to look for it ^^
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Will do!
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Well, don't pin me down on AppleDash just yet ^^ And looking forward to it!
913586 LOL Yeah, I know can't expect to be an AppleDash ship. I just need something to bring my hopes up!
I will find whatever I can that will seem like they are together, then I will get shot down, and it won't be as bad.
you know I heard from a person that everyone no matter what they did deserves a second chance for whatever they donedl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_2.png
everyone deserves a second chance
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I see wat u did thar.
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Nonsense.
I think her uniform color goes nicely with this fic. http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/169/4/d/the_great_and_powerful_trixie_by_niutea-d53w4he.png
Owloysius? It's Owlowicious.
Anyway, nice chapter and I want to see Rarity's reaction to Trixie showing up!
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Ah, I see it more as french maid, and I don't really like the drawing style on it ^^ Thanks for the try, though.
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"After the owl's first appearance on the show, Lauren Faust clarified on her deviantART page comment section that his name is spelled "Owlowiscious", though "it probably should have been Owloysius", which is closer to the real name "Aloysius". On Twitter, Jayson Thiessen used "Owlowiscious" in November 2011 and Cathy Weseluck used "Owlicious" in June 2012. The spelling "Owloysius" is used in the tags and description of a clip from Owl's Well That Ends Well on Hasbro's mylittlepony YouTube channel and in a question on Hasbro's My Little Pony Facebook page. In the 2012 trading cards, the owl's own card uses "Owlowiscious" and lists it as a trademark, while the Golden Oaks Library card uses "Owloysius". "
I tend to go by Faust's word if there isn't a very strong official opinion.
Nice chapter dude, have a moustache spike
Yet again, you don't disappoint. Glad you updated, I just got a chance to read it. The only part I wasn't too happy with was the confrontation with RD and AJ, but I'm sure it'll turn out well later.
Trixie's doing a wonderful job of aggravating everyone she comes into contact with
Although AJ and RD were really asking for it.
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Nice! I've always wanted one of those.
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Yes, we can only hope so! Though I won't promise that it'll be rainbows and sunshine up to that point :p
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Indeed, but you can assume Trixie did her fair share of it before Twilight arrived as well :p
“Alright,” Twilight said as she took a step backwards and prepared to start the return trip, “I guess I can leave it up to you then. Please tell Spike I’m not mad at him, he can take all the time he needs, and Trixie and I will be waiting for him at the library. Now if you’ll excuse me I... I really need to shower.”
"Of course, Twilight," Fluttershy said, looking somewhat uncomfortable, "but, um... I think my hoof is stuck to your coat. What did you two DO last night?"
wow Twilight needs a shower
You do raise a good point Trixie never really did anything wrong her bragging just rubbed everyone the wrong way
912983 look guys, I really love Unahim and he just needs some time to write more.
“We don’t take kindly to yer kind around here,” Applejack added.
Now calm down Skeeter, she ain't hurtin' nopony!
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Besides, we already know Hasbro can't decide on a spelling worth a damn. See: Cadence/Cadance/Candace/Mary Sue
Thank you for spelling it correctly. I was loving this story already, and the seeing it spelled like it should be (the play on Aloysius is fairly obvious) pleases me immensely.
I really feel Fluttershy has no right to say whether or not Twilight can take Spike. Hell I'm surprised Twilight didn't outright Buck her in the face for trying. I know I would if someone wouldn't let me have my child.
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http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-g7ojAzvVaXY/ToOV5rgPPTI/AAAAAAAAM5U/-7VFjSmjJks/s1600/64512+-+Japanese+maid+pixiv+reverse_weeaboo+shrug+shrugpony+twilight_sparkle.png
“Yes, fine, but-” Trixie tried again, but Twilight had already vanished out of the door. “But you look like you haven’t combed your mane in a week, and you smell like sex and... Trixie,” she finally concluded with a sigh. She shrugged.
At least they wouldn’t have to worry about how and when to make their relationship public.
lol...
So far, so good
913005 okay totally off topic but why do u have pickachu dressed as a naruto character
Apple Jack, Rainbow Dash, just love and tolerate Trixie.
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I was going to ask the same thing.
Another great chapter. You make Fluttershy seem so wise and sage-like. I love it! Keep up the great writing!
When fluttershy said "rather be spreading your legs for this Trixie character." I died laughing in shock
Hot damn! Fluttershy knows how to throw the smackdown when she needs to! Lol
I believe that Trixie is genuine, while the flimflam brothers might be her uncles ( I am serious) they both try to only use competitiveness against those they need to, but sometimes that fails and they fall on their faces, but so do we all
This felt forced. I realize it was necessary for the plot to advance, but it's off-putting to see Twi flinging the 'L-word' around all willy-nilly. Honestly, it feels shallow. Trixie and Twilight just had sex and all of the sudden they're in love. If you had given a whole spiel about how Twilight had spent months trying to find Trixie to apologize and that she secretly harbored immense regret over the loss of the only other mare who liked magic as much as she did, then I would be more inclined to believe it. But until then, I can't help but feel like this is the aftermath of a drunken one night stand—a fling that will likely be regretted in the not-so-distant future. Who knows? Maybe that feeling will go away.
On a side note, I can't help but feel that Trixie isn't genuine with her emotions. I dunno why... it's just something about the way she acted with RD and AJ. I'd hate to see Twi get hurt.
*scratches head about that found out line*
2326286 agreed. Twilight has one thing they never will and that's trust.
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[ya'll = you will; y'all = you all, the southerner's plural you.. Other than y'all and y're [you're]. Whenever you use "ya" [singular] use it for contractions as you would the word you (you'd = ya'd, you'll = ya'll, ect.)]
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Although consistency is the key. Stick to either You / Ya, Ah/ I. Stick to it ^_^.
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Ah
[Ah is a strong phonetic I. Cap it, and use it as you'd use I.]
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Rest of my error fixes on the southern dialect will be simply stating what needs to go where if it pops up. But this chapters comment gives the why.
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Forgot to re-read this 30 odd weeks ago when IRL popped up. Now I got some free time to give this a go.