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I am deeply intrigued, and I really can't wait for the next chapter... I wonder what Twilight's going to do?
Also, it seems RD wasn't the only one in a metaphorical closet.
I mean, I'm pretty sure I just read that AJ was disappointed that Twi and Trixie didn't try her, too, after they had Dash.
EDIT:
I just realized, I'm the first person to respond to the chapter. Whoo! This is my third time managing such a feat in all my reading here on fimfiction.
And: I read all the way through the chapter first.
"I can go back home"
"go back home"
"Go Back"
Twilight's going to use Ritual Magic to either go back in time to right her wrong. or she's going to use Time Magic to rewind the damage done to Trixie's mind. or she's going to go back in time to when Trixie was but a filly. i'm getting eager for the next chapter.
987608 I can't wait either. Also, I don't think it was her being a closet case either. Like Twilight said, AJ looked at it only as a competition and nothing else, probably not even as sexual.
Anyways, 987634 I don't know about Ritual Magic: For the Unicorn with the Time to Cast, but Omnus Grey’s Travels of Equestria and a Historical Atlas of Equestria means she wants to travel. Trixie got where she was, put on the mask and everything, because of her past. I don't think she is going to travel back in time. She either already knows the spell and doesn't need the first book, or would go to Canterlot and get it. I think Twilight is going to force Trixie back to her original home to face her past, so she doesn't have to hide behind a mask anymore.
987608
Well, yeah, but she's not in the closet, she's quite open about it ^^ The way I see it, Ponyville has a ridiculous mare/colt ratio compared to the other cities, which may have lead to some... open-mindedness.
Also, grats :p
987634
Only time will tell.
Okay, most of this was serious, but I couldn't help but giggle at the idea of Rainbow Dash and Applejack turning lesbian threesomes into a competition.
Omnus Travels across Equestria...hmm.
That is definitely a reference.
Also, Applejack is getting curious...should she explore her curiosity?
987661
Well, that works.
Also: possible Mare/Mare Breeding spell leads to a little baby Twixie?
That would be a beautiful end to the fic, once we get there.
so much possible adorability there...
Man...TwilightXTrixie is tied for my favorite pairing, so I've read a TOOON of Twixie fics....but NONE like this guy right here. This is really something, let me tell you.
Every day you don't update, I make an Applebloom cry!
Or maybe it's entirely possible that I'm lying and I want you to take your time and write quality chapters instead of many chapters. :D
For a second I thought it said 'Omnius' Travels: Equestria', and I went "whaaaaaa..."
-Glassed
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I wish I could take credit, but I just randomly picked a name, honestly :p
Interesting.
I think Twilight is going to take Trixie back to her childhood home, but I don't know what the Ritual book is for.
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That was the biggest coincidence ever.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2034/Omnius%27-Travels%3A-Equestria
987662 i think there is a story about it alredy...
Owtch oo Twilight this is risky owowow
So... they're gonna travel somewhere? I'm really bad at guessing what's gonna happen next in stories.
Cure the disease, kill the patient.
I know the perfect man for this job.
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Meet him below
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Good Chapter
my best inference is Twilight Sparkle is gonna bring Trixie to her home town and bring her parents back from the dead.
I sense a plan beginning to form here
I got a laugh out of how hurt AJ was that she wasn't invited to Twilight and Trixie's threesome, I guess it's not just the nerdy ones after all.
It feels very appropriate now that Twilight realizes their supposed roles have been reversed, that even though she is the "mistress" that she now has the greater responsibility to Trixie to keep up her role, even though she no longer wants to. I think a lot of commentators unjustly caste Twilight in the villain role (maybe even myself a little), when it seems now that all she did was let the "genie" out of the bottle. The need to fill a role seems deeply ingrained into Trixie's psyche, and Twilight's attempts to "fix" her (misguided and self-serving as they might have been) has only made her object of Trixie's newest fixation.
Now I'm curious to find out just how Twilight thinks she's going to fix all this from three seemingly random books. Can't wait to find out what else is in store.
I wonder if it would be a good idea for Twilight and AJ to tell Trixie what they are going to try?
On the one hand Maid-Trixie could break at the prospect of not being Twilight's maid anymore.
On the other hand, a restored Trixie might take the whole "Twilight used me as a household devise and a sex toy"-thing equally badly.
And that is why I prefer computers. Those can alway be brought to a stable point, even if that point is inside a closing scrap metal press.
I think your writing of Applejack's accent is a little overdone. Other than that, excellent chapter, I am thoroughly intrigued.
I feel bad for saying this, but I want Twilight's plan to fail, the best pony deserves a loyal maid.
988080
Wait a minute... were you just implying that you prefer Internet pornography to real sex? Because that is what it comes across as.
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I think you're right, I'll rewrite it a bit. Last chapter I used her in, I took away about 60% of the accent I wrote for her before posting, but omitted to do that this time ^^
"Ah can go back home, an’ tomorrow we can-”
Hm......
I see two possibilities from what that means.
1: Twilight is going to be taking a trip through time.
2: Twilight will be taking Trixie to a place that Trixie formerly called home.
Such as her parent's house or the orphanage. Though I do have my doubts on this theory.
I mean... While it is in some way a good idea to remind Trixie of who she was, it would also
bring about some truly terrible memories.
Was that barking pony an allusion (reference) to a certain barking pony stuck in a psychiatric ward?? Really??
988279 Who is that talking about? I've seen several references, but I still don't know where that pony is originally from...
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Go look up Taming of the Screw, and then you'll see what i meant with the "Really??"
It wasn't the contents of the books that mattered.
It was that they were heavy enough to do some damage to Twilight when she dropped one of them onto herself (not accidental in the slightest).
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Go watch the episode "Read it and Weep". She runs out into the night when RD tries to steal the book from the hospital.
Ohhhh yeaaaaaaa!!! Now I remember!
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Thanks, I have it on my read later queue, but having reached 900 items.... Yeah.
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Thanks, I've only watched up through episode 2x04 Luna Eclipsed... I figured to have this kind of wide spread usage it must've been in an episode or a massively popular fanfic.
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Um, there is more to a relationship that sex, you know. Even if the stories on this side indicate otherwise, which they don't.
No, I'd prefer people to get their psychological problems sorted out before they thrust them upon others in a relationship. It is kind of awkward to suddenly realize that the girl you fell in love with needs help from a headshrink. And I don't mean funny-crazy, but crying-all-night, cutting-yourself, threatening-suicide crazy.
Because that leaves you to ditch the whole thing and feel like an asshole or to realize that you can't really help her and feel like an asshole either way.
Like I said, I think Twilight is beating herself up to much over this. The episode about Fluffy merely shows that she has unresolved problems too. Like a whole heap of them.
I laughed at Twilight having a license as a psychological counselor. I bet she did that to try and resolve her own issues, but rule No 1 in counseling: You can't help yourself, because lying to yourself is the problem.
988145
Nothin' wrong with that either. Everyone's got their fetishes.
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Much too heavy on the accent there. Change repetitions of "I" to "Ah", such as "Ah'll go to the marketplace", some consarnits, ah reckons, things along those lines should be the extent of it. Living in the the South as I do, I can tell you the only people who speak any heavier than that are in the DEEP South, where the roads become dirt. >_>
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Twas a joke. I have written sex scenes before. I have also studied psychology before. And not just the Freudian kind, either.
Ah, but if they didn't have problems, then they would be a lot less interesting. Not all problems are immediately noticeable.
Mental problems never just go away, though. You have to deal with them for the rest of your life. You have to adapt to them. I, and many other writers who are at least better than a good portion of the pack, know this personally. We are a slight bit less sane than the general population.
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I don't even live in an English speaking nation, your accents get the better of me, I'm afraid :p I'll fix it later, I've managed to bust up my left shoulder, and typing is painful at the moment ^^
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Sane is overrated.
988575
I was merely joking to him. No harm was intended.
A fellow Southerner, I see. Pray tell, what state? I am an Alabama guy, but there seem to be very few people from my state here.
I am a lot closer to that place, but no one in my state has that accent.
twilight is about to screw the time space continuum and yay twilight fainted quick give me a marker (sorry for the joke)
anyway keep it up
988596
See, that is one of my problems: I easily get worked up about stuff, because my humor is screwed on at a slightly odd angle.
988651
Tis alright. I am not worried by that. I am the same way, sometimes. But, I am a comedian with insight, and a love of philosophy. I am also nice guy, so I completely understand when my jokes don't hit their mark quite dead-on.
Equestria's Bucked...if whoever mentioned time travel is right, than everyone's screwed
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Georgia.
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My sister was born in Georgia. Just right next door to my state.
Twilight's going to use the books to create a mind scape of Trixies original home and have Trixie re live her childhood to come to terms with the bad parts. Just like in Silent Hill. What could possibly go wrong!
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Me~ Is she-
Moonfire~ I think she is
Me~ meanwhile, on Google images:
try to guess these correctly
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989218 Actually, it would be more like Amnesia: Dark Descent for Trixie
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I can't consider Amnesia scary because of Pewdiepie. He made the game funny to me and now whenever I see the Bro I bust up laughing.
989439 How about F.E.A.R. (First Encounter Assault Reconnaissance)?
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Yeah that one scared me. That girl is creepy as all hell.
987608
Closet? What Closet?
She made it rather blunt she was open to the idea.