I've gotten most of the story written out already, so at least for a while I will attempt to update daily, to give me the time to do a last check-up on a chapter before I release it, as well as giving me some time to finish the story.

you have my attention

While i can undrestand twilight thinking Trixie got the colts to bring an ursa to town i still dont like it. Spike was the one that got them to do it by proclaming "unless an ursa comes waltsing down the streat for Trixie to wanquish im not gona belive a word she says and neather shouold you" (don't quote me on that im not 100% sure thats his exact words.)

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I really like how this chapter went, I can see a lot of promise and potential for this story.
In short: I'm watching you

Interesting...

We're watching you.

This has promise, great promise for a fullfilling storyline.

Trixie isn't my favorite pony, but it is about time that the fact of her getting the raw deal once the Ursa was summoned wasn't glossed over. I bet Ponyville paid for any damages it caused to the other homes. I'm also sure Snips/Snail didn't face any kind of punishment.

Story sounds interesting. Start reading.

First sentence: Twilight is trying to buy the harvested skin of a sapient creature.

...

Mmmmaybe I should read this later.

Y U MAKE FLUTTERS CRY!?

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This is Equestria, I'm sure it was shed and sold to the shop by the dryad.

Trixie, Y U playng shitty spells in the capital of unicorns?

After reading the first chapter...
I must say, somehow this concept is so heartwarming and cute!

awwe ok Im listening

905751 Yeah. She lost her wagon, everything inside of it... not to mention she fought the damned thing! Those two should've been sent to... I dunno, but they should've been given more than some damned mustaches!

Watching, reading.

Hmn, not a bad start, will read more.

Hmmm.

Intriguing.

I think the reason I like Trixie's tales is similar to the goal the producer of the Metal Gear Solid series had. He said the series' question was, "What happens to the action hero after the action movie is over?" Here, I find the question is asked, "What happened to the antagonist of the day bioengineered to part of an aesop after the day is over?"

Why must you make me sad???

DIs...may be good.

Removed from Read Later section. Moved to Favorites. And I while I dislike Twixie shipping, this seems like it could be genuinely good. So take the Big Three; watch, like, fave.

Why do I feel like this won't end well for Twilight?

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902036, that puppy is fluffy. Have a sad Woona.
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Thank Faust, somebody who realises that was a show. Where EVERYPONY laughed. And she had her damn home destroyed .

Absolutely brilliant.

I can't wait to keep reading!

Nice first chapter. Great way to start out what I am sure is going to be an epic story!

WOW this is already a great start
This is already a great book
One of the best I've read since "a Twixie love story"

Normally, I save my comments until I've read the end or I've seen an error of some sort, but this introduction, was absolutely amasing. I look forward to the next few days of reading this...

A story about trixie where she isnt a total jerk?
Welp eyes i hope you dont like blinking that much.

Trixie, "pay attention to me"
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I did not tear up.... I did not tear up... I did not tear up...

I teared up

Hmm I cracked open some treasure. Time to loot it.

Wonderfully written introductory chapter.

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Good story well written thus far but, this is just me, I hate Trixie. But i will continue to read this story to see what going to happen.

I am glad you pointed out that Snips and Snails were the ones responsible for the incident and Trixie lost everything and being villainized. She wasn't bad or evil, just a jerk. Huge difference. I don't think it was originally intended by the writers and was the result of constraints, limits or requirements put on them.

I've read this kind of story before (Trixie's Getting Back On Her Hooves) and it was wonderful. I don't mean to call you unoriginal, just pointing out this has been done before and I will have a bit of a bias when reading this story. I hope you make your tale unique in some way that makes it worth reading.

I have enjoyed this so far and I am eagerly looking forward to gobbling up this story when I have the time.

No one. Not a single person commented on the mr. Magorium's Wonder Emporium reference. It's frustrating.

I warn all readers coming to this story. It is not your average twixie story. There are bumps and divots along this path that would never be seen in the show. That being said, this is one of my favorite stories to date, and i promise that it has a happy ending

Twilight frowned slightly. She just hoped everything would work out once they were in Ponyville...

Hah! Funny.