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Heh, at least while on a guilttrip ^^
1024382 Just so long as Twilight doesn't feel so guilty that it breaks HER psyche.
Another splendid chapter. I love the role reversal here.
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You're a pretty funny guy ^^
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If you think Trixie can't find a way to start setting things right that includes payback, you are sorely underestimating her :p
Okay, if this is a clop-fic, I really don't wanna read it. Can anybody that's read it tell me whether or not it's a clop-fic.
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It's not if you read the chapters which are marked "non-clop version" instead of the ones marked "clop version". It cans ee why that'd cause confusion, though.
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Well, Trixie still has a day. And she has plans :3
man damn good work there Unahim ! *3 thumbs up for you* or was is hooves ?
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Well, it's a bit hard to do a thumb up with hooves, no? :p
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It's a fine line to walk indeed, and something I considered many a times in writing. But is a truth that there are many shy characters in books and literature, and it is too easy to put upon Fluttershy the stamp of "shy", and thus deny her the characterisation which makes her more than just a one word label. For one, the two are nothing alike in motivations, skills, mannerisms and code of conduct, and whereas Fluttershy's shyness is more or less a permanent feature, in maid Trixie it's only a passing state. You can see it somewhat like this: First she isn't shy because the role hasn't been assimilated yet, then when it is assimilated it is shy because she is of limited knowledge and experience (as she more or less forgets her previous role), but after the library scene and the party you can already see it growing less pronounced.
I think that, had I kept her in that role for much longer, she'd eventually have ended up quite a polite and classy act, but in no way shy, as a problem dealing with others ill besuits her mistress's needs. The only one she'd always stay "shy" towards is Twilight, as she held for her not only a love in that state but also a deep reverence. Perhaps the fact that you see her interact with Twilight 90% of the time therefore somewhat gave the wrong impression, hmmm... a thing to consider there, indeed.
So yeah, in conclusion: shy =! Fluttershy
God darnet i knew it i would hate my self for reading this fic when i there still incomplete (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻
Any way the fic is good and i cant wait to read the next chapter.
I also never thought that i would hate twilight in a fan fic but you made it better so its kay.
I Just hope for a happy ending so i just hope nothing goes wrong.
Also a question for you Unahim.
Do you have any plans on writing some thing more of a standard ship fic in the future?
and if so witch of them are you planing to ship?
I do like this story and all its good but the clop is just a tad to so much for me In this fic at least.
But your a great story writer and it would be interesting to see a more normal ship fic from you
Glad that Trixies back and all but I'm kinda worried about Dash. Not to mention Spike. There's gonna be a whole lot of apologizing and maybe a bit of yelling I think.
I feel like a hypocrite for enjoying THIS part so much. Ah, well, guilt's a state of mind.
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Don't really have plans for anything like that at the moment. One of my ideas involves a bit of a romantic relation between Twilight and Fluttershy, but the core idea there is psychological horror, so not really your usual shipfic, either ^^ And at any rate, that one will have to happen after my next project, which I foresee being a rather large one.
Lol, Reversal has 3554 words of clop, nice
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Thanks for pointing out the mistake!
I shouldn't be laughing his hard at something like this.
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Do you hear the voices too?
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There's enough to cry about in the world, mate, laugh when you can :p
Trixie's... Penis?
wut?
EDIT: Oh right...
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