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oooh suspense
Spike is 100% trustable, of course dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_lazy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilightclopple.png
Interesting. What could be so special about that gemstone? Questions, questions, questions...
Oh well, all will be revealed in time, as authors usually say. Good chapter dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
GOD DAMN IT WHY YOU CONFUSE ME SO?! What's the gem for...
Great chapter. Can't wait for more
I am fairly certain I know what its for.
Ooh, now that was an interesting exchange. I like where this is going.
Hey Spike, doesn't it look tasty? How about one little lick, no one will know.
OK. Who doesn't know what Trixie plan to do with the contents of that box? If you do, don't spoil it for the one who haven't figured it out.
When are we going to get to the 'dinner party' already?
I bet the gem will be used to turn Twilight into a robot so that they can cross dimensions...But that's just speculation
Anywhom, good chapter, this story is just...Awesome
God I love this story so much. It's a shame it looks like it's coming to an end soon . Oh well, there still looks to be plenty of fun ahead and it's been a fantastic tale up to this point. I predict many feels will be had and it will be glorious.
There should be a sequel! An adventure sequel! Wherein Twilight and Trixie do something adventurous! With magic!
how sweet :D
I think I know what the gem is, and I have a feeling it has something to do with the word "Marriage"...just a hunch
And again, another marvelous chapter has been wrote, keeping my enthusiasm in this series. Congratulations to you Unahim, you are my favourite writer, of all times.
I will expect your next chapter patiently.
Spike'll make the loveliest handbag if he eats that. /Trixie totally meant to imply this between the lines
I saw the title, read the description and I was like 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Oh my, that little gem he's holding right now... I knew that would be coming from a troperific standpoint but still, oh... my.
Spike is pretty oblivious to not have heard of trixie and twilight''s exploits.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
Okay, trixie still taking in the third person despite her "healing" is starting to worry me.
1073644 If you don't mind me asking, how did you get those emoticons? They're adorable.
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Next ^^
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It's just a habit, like Luna talking in the royal "we" after her return.
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Probably off-site image files.
1074162 It's and addon for chrome or firefox, and here is the link YES! THE LINK! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilightclopple.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_pea.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_pea.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_pea.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
1073970 Not oblivious...sheltered. If all he's doing is staying in Fluttershy's cottage, I don't think can find out anything. It's not like ponies are running over to tell him anything. And I'm sure Fluttershy is very discreet with anything she tells him.
1074236Hmm.... makes sense.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_lazy.png
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I'd think it's rather obvious. Think about it in the grand concept that love is. =3
Its a wedding band.
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So many predictions running through my mind.
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Or is it?
The bank scene was a great revelation. It pretty fascinating seeing Trixie rediscover things about herself that could have changed the course of her life years ago had she known about them. Her examination of her surroundings while she was waiting for the box were fun to read. This sort of unusual situation is what sometimes makes drama much more strange and interesting. It's not hard at all to figure out what kind of gemstone she has in that box, though. And Spike will keep it safe for Twilight's sake.
I was hoping for some more intimacy between my two favorite characters in this chapter, but I guess it all has to start somewhere. She hasn't said anything genuinely kind to him, she hasn't apologized, and they're only getting along out of their love for Twilight rather than any desire to reconcile, but she has entrusted him with something important. Hopefully this means Trixie has taken the first step to becoming Spike's "cool aunt". (Although I'm an advocate for Spike and Twilight having a friendship, not a mother/son relationship; it's what Lauren Faust intended, and in the show, Twilight only occasionally steps into the mother role, she doesn't live it.)
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WHERE IS YOUR SPOILER TAG ?
funny chapter!
I've seen some movies...I can almost see the case it's in.
On another note, it's been three chapters. Clop time!
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Definitely related to marriage, I can feel it.
I would say the gem is an engagement ring :3
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And remember: there are no brakes on the rape train.
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I KNOW RIGHT?
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hmm...
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Erm.. in your comment?
Why do people always bring marriage into stuff like this? Relationships have a higher chance of staying healthy if marriage is not involved.
I was extecting a little more of fighting between Spike and Trixie, or at least with Spike showing a little more of anger and yelling, I know this is your story but the drama situations tent to be solved in a ratter easy way, the same happended with rainbow. Btw Trixie never apologised with Spike beside she said "look I don't like you" and then I was like "oh boy here it comes the fight"..... but then nothing. if I was Spike i will never accept anything from her regardless of their intentions. She doesn't act like she care about his felling either.
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Because society.
I actually like how Spike and Trixie didn't actually fight.. it was like 'I want to, but.. this doesn't seem to work... and it's sort of too much bother..'. Pretty realistic.
OMG oh boy can't wait to know what happens next and what is in the box. the suspence is going to kill me
The rape gem?
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Society is fucked in so many ways that it's beyond saving
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I tend to find that in reality, all-out shout fights are pretty rare. Especially if several days have passed since the incident, you'll usually only find a cold, silent resentment, at most. That's why in this fic, that's about the extent of what happens as well, although Trixie did get slammed into a wall in one instance, and only pulled out of a nose dive in the second instance due to the little box ^^
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Just random thoughts about marriage that may or may not have any bearing on the story:
To me, personally, the idea of marriage does not appeal. I find it doesn't add anything to a relationship except for invisible strings, while in my opinion your love for each other should be the only thing keeping you together, not the technical difficulties going with a divorce. That said, I don't think people who like to be married are morons; if it makes you happy, then why not? In a story, though, my personal opinion isn't always all that relevant. The question is what the -characters- think about the situation. From the season 2 finale, it seems like all of the mane 6, at least, see marriage as a grand and joyous occasion. Therefore, if I ever were to write about a marriage situation involving any of them, their views would at the very least have to be more moderate than mine are, if I were to do their canon personalities justice.
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I agree with both those sentiments (personally, I feel that marriage should be done only for legal or financial benefits, rather than getting erroneously conflated with love.).
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U mad, brony?
Methinks that, society being as flawed as the people who comprise it, your expectations are unrealistic. People generally are fucked up, often in non-obvious and convoluted ways. Consequently, so is society. Accept it and move on, eh?
1078378 maibe but from my point of view it is like Trixie give that box to Spike that way he can prove to her that she can trust him. Shouldn't be Trixie the one to earn Spike's trust before?
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No, you got it wrong. The fact that she gives him the box is proof that she trusts him. It's too valuable to serve as a test.
1078979 Oh ok now I got it, she thust him, but the question still is Shouldn't she be the one to earn Spike's trust?
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Perhaps, but do you think trust can be earned in one conversation? I don't think so, and Trixie realises this as well. She wasn't there to instantly fix her relationship with him, she was there to give him a message. "I've changed. I trust you. Watch me, and reach your own decision." True trust can only be earned with actions, after all.
1079049 Thank god! I am so glad to hear that! for one second I thought the problem was solved in just one chapter, and then she go and have and orgy with .
I agree with you trust can't be earned in one conversation, it takes time. Now I'm looking forward to see that happens.
First comes love, then comes marriage.. er wait.. First comes , love. Then comes mass pony orgy, then comes marriage? or then comes twilight >.>
questions, questions.
I think she's planning something... Something... Sinister...
"Lulamoon" was popping into my head for days. Now I know why.
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Sometimes I wonder what people who've never read Cheerilee's Garden think when they see comments like this :p It must appear to be quite random to them ^^