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The mental image of Trixie leaping at the chance to write down some fireworks schematics was adorable
It's nice to see that Twilight eventually managed to help Trixie with the library. I was worried Trixie was gonna work to exhaustion and end up collapsing or something
lets see where this gose
anyway keep up
Yeah things seems to be going along very well... Too well... My prediction is shit's gonna hit the fan soon... Probably Spike's fault or something. But i can fairly say... At the speed of posting, i'm not gonna get bored for a while! This is gonna be FUN !
Hm..Twilight is getting well into her S roll... she even ignored Trixies real problem so she can continue her plan even thou she knows its wrong.
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I know. However, I think Twilight wants to get Trixie accustomed to the working of the Library and being around the other residents of Ponyville. Plus, Twilight has to figure out how to cure the 'disease'. Besides, I think Twilight is enjoying the role of being 'Mistress', with Trixie as her 'Maid' a little too much at the moment.
Well done Trixie! Cool chapter.
Its weird seeing trixie not being trixie. I think old trixie should be proud of new trixie and old me likes new trixie
Great job! I have also finished the first chapter to my story, if you care to read it! http://www.fimfiction.net/story/38510/One-Life%2C-Two-People
There is no need to go easy on the comments, I need all the help I can get. Keep up the good work!
From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha
be careful if twilight keeps this up she's going mindbreak trixie..........and while that would a kinky and interesting read i dont think its the goal other then that loving the story
Oh this is gonna be fun. Just wait until Spike hears all the rumors about Trixie, doing his job, better than he did it, and in a sexy maid outfit no less. Yeah..... the midden is gonna hit the windmill pretty soon. I'm so excited........though that might just be the mental image of Trixie is a sexy maid outfit......not really sure at this point....
God dammit. Because of this I now have a french maid and mistress fetish.
I blame the sexy maid trixie picture
I really hope Twilight doesnt bring this maid thing too far...
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I like emotional rollercoasters.
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Well, just in case they don't enjoy it at all ^^
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Thanks, I definitely will!
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Yeah, she's not evil, just misunderstood ;_;
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What's a dream jump? Like going into someone's dreams?
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Heh, Twilight's not unkind, just a bit hazy on priorities, perhaps.
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It's going to the mooooonnnnaaaahhhh! Or not, we'll see ^^
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That damn dragon, always making trouble, even when he isn't.
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Her what role? I agree with the rest, though ^^
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It's not as cool as you.
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I'm afraid old Trixie would probably think new Trixie is a wimp, causing new Trixie to cry, and then new Twi would have to kick old Trixie's ass.
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I shall read it as soon as I have the time ^^
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That would be unfortunate indeed.
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I'm sure nobody's sure by this point.
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Everything is proceeding according to plan...
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Ah'm not saying anything.
937767 Precisely what i mean! Always plotting something *hurrr hurrr hurrr*! it would be funny to see his reaction if he caught Trixie and Twilight actually in the middle of doing it ! Anyway looking forward for the nex one of this!
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Future twilight should tell old trixie that new twilight will be kicking her ass
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I think her actions and words should speak for themselves. One of my fics after this one is finished is a dark psychological horror involving Fluttershy and dreams, though ^^
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Well, I'm unlikely to do that, the joke would be too similar to last time :p
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Now it's just getting silly ^^
aww no clop
well its nice that Trixie is trying though that makes it so sweet ..
937951 True that! Truth be told i like to participate in the development of stories. So I like to give my ideas to people. But then there's those times where you just can't write anything cause you can't think of anything about that topic! Currently I am at one of those times. I hate that feeling. It's like I'm never going to finish it. Also there are some really good ideas here! I can't stress enough how original these are! Really looking forward for more.
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It's a possibility, everyone who knows my previous (extremely dark) work will know I don't shy away from catastrophical endings, but is that what I'm shooting for here, I wonder? You'll have to wait and see :p
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There's a clop update tomorrow.
937767am....am i piking up trace amounts of sarcasm......................very well while i shall in fact be waiting to see how this progress even more eagerly just so you know you just dropped me from 7.8/10 waiting for new chapter patiently to 2/10 pissed it isnt out all ready are you happy now
I love this story
this story blew my mind
good job
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This looks like S&M (sadomasochism) play between Twilight and Trixie.
And the story rolls on, with me running on the top of it down a sheer cliff of emotion, sometimes getting stuck in tar pits called 'sexy scenes' :V.
Well, I'm enjoying it thus far!
Trixie is seeming like less of a lover and more of a slave at this point. Twilight is abusing her mental illness and pretty much uses Trixie.
I'm starting to doubt the integrity of their relationship. Either it's sex or Trixie being a slave, and I don't like it.
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That is exactly what I have been thinking for the last couple of chapters. I feel that, at some point in the future, Trixie is going to catch on to this and feel very hurt about Twilight using her like that. There are so many other methods that Twi' could use to get the result that she is looking for, BUT, they would not make for such a good story.
Man twilight has taking full advantage and also is going over board.
1. Trixie knows how to act around other ponies
2. Trixie is obviously a sex slave to twilight
3. Trixie is just a down right slave
4. Trixie has changed so much sense the second or third day twilight just let her stop being your slave like really I doubt your really in love with her anymore because your basically asking Trixie to do EVERYTHING and you just are acting
And finally 5. your taking this maid and mistress thing to far like if I were in control of the story I would have stopped the maid and mistress thing already and gone on with more things like getting AJ and RD to accept Trixie and stuff
Just my thoughts
But I still like the story nonetheless
The writing is done well, the grammar is good, I should love this but the core of it has just weirded me out too much. When I'm reading it, I find myself anxiously waiting for the end, not absorbing the story. I'm sorry, I can't keep reading this.
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How's the underlined bit any different than what she does with Spike? I mean if anything Trixie has it easier, since she has magic to help things along. Where as Spike does the work of several stallions, magically sends and receives things from Celestia (that have to be forcefully ejected from his stomache. And when Celestia sent all those friendship letters to help beat Discord, showed it causes physical distress), and he has to ontop of all of that write all of Twilight's dictations, schedules, and 5X schedules for the schedules. All of that without the aid of unicorn magic.
So I doubt Twilight sees anything wrong with treating her that way if noones complained about her doing that to a child all of his life (minus the sex). And Celestia acted okay with Twilight treating Spike the way she does. So her doing the same thing to a pony probably has no negative implications to her as it would a sane pony.
5947403 Technically, there is a difference. Spike did those tasks because he wanted to. His mental state wasn't altered in anyway.
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Not really. If you think about it, he was raised to do that. That's how he was brought up and raised. He wasn't given a different path in life, or schooling to learn differently. He was and has always been Twilight's "number one assistant". But unlike Trixie who gets sex and has magic. He has no magic, and gets paid in food and shelter. By the pony who brought him up and raised him in a lifestyle that's extremely unfair and probably illegal if it was some stranger. [Crusader age, the work of several adults, works on Twilight's schedule, and on his off time does manual labor for Rares [sometimes even incuding being stabbed with numerous needles.].
Trixie’s basically a slave, yes, but she’s found happiness and love so what’s it to anyone?