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Who knows what the future will bring ;)
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Indeed.
Dammit twilight your destroying Trixie!!!
It looks like Twilight has a tough job ahead of her. She is going to have to teach Trixie to be able to function without a mask and bring out the happy and filly that is buried deep, deep, DEEP down inside of her. When you have worn a mask for so long, it is so hard to get it of.
ooo Thats good keep it up
you got good writing skills
Well written indeed
But damn... I'm a sucker for stuff like this...
>good romance
>sad tale
>Twixie
A+
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Trixie please dont cry ;_;
Such an excellent development in character and a unique background story. Have all of my cupcakes for an update well done!
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A) Holy Luna, do you write fast! Not complaining by the way, love this story!
B) The gears in my head are turning, and all signs are pointing to Twilight abusing this to a breaking point, effecitvely ruining Trixie or at the very least ending their relationship...and I sorely hope I'm wrong. Twixie is my second favorite ship.
I guess this can go two ways...
1. Twilight takes this way too far and ends up breaking Trixie's mind or something,
or,
2. Twilight uses the new information from Trixie's story to try and genuinely help her.
Should be interesting either way, but I'm really hoping for option 2
Also Trixie's story was very moving
FUUUUUU!!! and this is sad
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In a way, for sure.
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Indeed, she has her work cut out for her.
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Thanks, I try to improve a bit every time I write ^^
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trust me, I cry readily too ;(
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Great stories have their price ;_;
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Alright, awesome! Who's up for a cupcake eating contest?
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A) While I can write extremely fast when I'm in a very driven period, everything up to this point was already written before I posted the first update.
B) I think she's at a higher risk of ruining Trixie than she is of ending the relationship, as by this point I'm not sure Trixie could even end it of her own accord.
you sate my Twixie hunger, my friend.
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Manequin's Magical Mageporium presents: Mental Glue! For all these mindfucks gone wrong ;)
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Yup, this update alone felt like reason enough for me to add the sad tag at the start.
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Feast well, my friend.
This Story is going from Funny to Cloppy to Sad to Hopeful.
One Second I am arused the other you make me feel so damn sorry for Trixie.
Keep the good work up!
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Come on trixie, don't be afraid to take your mask off. This was a really good chapter and twilight has a very, VERY hard job in the future
The sheer emotion put into this is insane! This story has gotten a whoke new turn! Poor Trixie the loss of her parents was an awful thing yet i can't keep from getting glad it happened. Because if it hadn't she probably wouldn't be in this situation. I hope this all turn for the better. Then again there's the evil me who hopes that everything goes bad and trixies loses her relashionship or something. But the good side was never able to understand him... Love this story! Keep it up!
From the start i was under the feeling that it was going too well and that Twilight will end up just using Trixie for her own good, while claiming its for Trixies.
Looks like i was right.
Hope they find a proper fix for it tho, just using trixie isnt cool and this story just leaves me with a uneasy feeling like a brainwashing fic. (since that is pretty much what Twilight is doing, and now she knows it too).
And who said porn couldn't be emotional or have a story?
Unahim, you've put many porn stories and movies to right bloody shame with this. The characterization is marvelous and taken at the correct speed, the romance is...well, it jumps straight to the horny bits THEN gets cuddly, but it feels, I dunno, right when it happens. You bring the scenes the perverts came for with excellent detail, and leave the rest of us with a story that would easily be held in the spotlight with pride.
Keep doing what you do, and we'll keep eating it up.
This is a truly good story. This is why I give mature ratings a chance. I sometimes get stories like this. Ones that are actually a story about what the mares do about the problem, not what they do to each other. Great story, I shall continue in the, well, later morning. Right now, my head is yelling at me from favoring work on my projects and reading, over sleep.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png
>clop
>sad
>ohgodwhatandotherincrediblestories
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that is the saddest made up past i ever readbravo bravo.
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Twilight is the bad guy in this?!?!?!?!?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
I'm...I'm really sorry Unahim, but I just can't get into this story. I mean, your writing is good! Real good! It's just I can't accept the idea of Twilight being some sick sexual devaint. I truly am sorry though, and I hope you except this moustache, , as my form of an apology.
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i feel so sad. I will never look at Trixie the same way agin.
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Without a doubt, I should know, considering that until recently I wore a mask to keep my real crazy self (or what I'm assuming is my real crazy self) out of sight. Learning to not care what others think about me helped, as did the ponies.
This is getting interesting. I have to wonder how Twilight intends to bring out that little filly deep inside Trixie.
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Well, it should be noted that what Trixie described happening in the story was brainwashing. The little filly brainwashed herself into becoming someone different, someone who she wasn't really just so she wouldn't be alone and by herself. Its no surprise in my mind that it may possibly take some brainwashing to get rid of the brainwashing.
The difference is intent. if Twilight truly does wish to help Trixie, than the brainwashing will be done in a manner to help her. If Twilight goes the darker route, than we'll see the G&P T vanish forever, replaced by Trixie the Maid.
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Give it time, it may turn out differently. I always try to give stories a chance.
YOU ! YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO MAKE FEEL THIS WAY FOR TRIXIE!!! ....
So much sadness... And this is the first real believable explanation on Trixie's persona that I have seen... sniff...
At least Twilight will "fix" her...
I just recently started reading this, and when the buck dose spike come back in??????
Oh my Celestia, that was so heart-breaking.
I sure hope Trixie is going to be treated lovingly in the aspect of her trauma.
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Counted have worded it better myself.
I love reading different background stories for different characters. That was a really good one, one of the best that I have read. Keep up hte great writing! I shall carry on reading!
Good job on a unique twist on Trixie's backstory... I'm impressed!
........................ SO SAD.............
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what are you doing here
Wow.....poor Trixie...I already had a change of heart for her but after reading this chapter I couldn't help but shed a tear for her.
Wow... I... I need a moment... ( distant, manly and girly weeping)
Sniff... I'm good now...
That story... It didn't help that I was listening to "relaxing" violin music at the time
Goddamnit, why did that have to critical hit me in the feels right after I finished watching Wife of a Time-traveler? Now I've cried twic in one day..
What a lovely past.
Echos, into today.
I MUST say, the background you've established for Trixie with this chapter...was as believable as it was emotional... which made it unbelievably good.
You are an amazing and inspirational writer. Don't ever doubt that.
Straight to the heart, man
This was just as powerful the second time as it was the first time I read this over a year ago.
Poor Trixie...
Very nice work, well done.
Trixie is right, that is a sad story.....
I hope that filly finally found the "home" she needed...
Hey, at least Trixie found love...love in the arms of a neurotic sexual deviant, but love’s love.: