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Yay Trixie's back!
Loved the role reversal of this chapter, seems Twilight is just as good at being a sub as she is being a dom hm?
YES. IT ISN'T ENDED! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png
Yep, Trixie's back, alright
Now we can just hope Twilight doesn't get so into her temporary role that it all starts over again. The only thing that would be good for would be a possible sequ-
... Y'know, maybe that wouldn't be so bad after all
Anyway, good chapter. Now it's just the matter of making Ponyville accept the real Trixie; should be fun to watch
awesome
"it's always the nerdy ones"
damn dude you went all out O.o but its nice to see trixie is herself again
That was HOT! Seriously, you have no idea. Or maybe you do, since you wrote it and all.....either way, have more of Trixie being awesome for your efforts.
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Oh my, would you look at the time
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I've got other stories to read while I eagerly await your next update. Sadly I cannot simply stay here and endlessly refresh the page till the update occurs, even if you wanted me to. So as Trixie would say,
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wow...
things are really getting interesting!
I'm loving this story with each chapter. Very interesting and good to see Trixie back
Okay. Now that Trixie has gotten some payback on Twilight, it's time to start trying to set things right with everypony else (as well as one dragon.) Here's hoping.
Later that night....
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Trying to decide if it's a reversal or a return. Really, Trixie as her Great and Powerful self I would see more like this, it was a reversal for her to enjoy her submissive side so fully. Hopefully she'll settle down into a switch after tonight mostly. Now that Twi knows herself better, and all that entails, she could get her chance at topping back. Which tends to be why Twixie is my OTP.
Plot high. My favorite fetish
Oh, so the clop returns eh?
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Wait, was the chalk on the floor for the spell a reference to transmutation circles in Full Metal Alchemist (and regular alchemy)?
Is there gonna be a threesome with Applejack, as payback for not including her in the fun with RD? ;)
Yay trixie's back!!! Maid trixie was starting to creep me out just a little bit
>>tarox
Yay Trixie's back!
YAY Trixie!!!
I bet you could make more chapters just with Trixie in charge, that would melt the interwebs!
Alright, people, be honest.
Did anyone else think Trixie was turning into Fluttershy what with the whole maid thing?
awesome chapter had been gone a long time had to read 6 chapters all great i love twilight as a submissive
awesome clop rules
but but lets hope Trixie isnt evil as a Mistress
and and lets hope Twilight doesnt lose herself into this role..
Even better than I had hoped!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Then Celestia shows up to find Twilight in a maids outfit, pleasuring Trixie.
Very well done this is gonna be gud
I'm so happy that Trixie is back.
Looks like Rarity's got another maid outfit to make.
*Splotch, splotch, splotch.*
Awww dang it, Steel, Ah told you not to read this story anymore!
Can'thelpitmustkeepreadingnewchaptercan'tskipmustREAD.
*AJ sighs, looking down at her hooves to the quickly expanding pool of blood originating from Steel's chair.*
Yer a dead man, y'all know that?
Happydeadmanyesveryhappydeadman!
Ah give up...
Ahhh, you're too easy! Let me try!
*Dash walks up beside Steel, and immediately her wings flare up. Both find their eyes locked to the screen.*
BOTH A' Y'ALL'RE PERVERTS!?
Ah expected better a' ya, Dash!
Shutupmustreadcan'tstopreadingSteelthisisgreatwhere'dyoufindthis?
Idon'tknowIwasjustlookingaroundonthesiteandthenIfoundthisandit'sawesomeIknow.
*The two exchange quick streams of words that couldn't be discerned from the mumbles of asylum patients, but they seem to understand each other perfectly. AJ simply sits there, dumbstruck.*
A-Ah can't believe this...well, at least they aren't fallen THAT far...
Bet they're both just waitin' till they're alone...
*She makes a grimace before turning towards the door.*
Nah, Ah'm not gonna sit 'ere and watch mah friend and a weirdo bleed to death from readin' clop. Ah'm outta here...
*The bang of a door echoes through the room, and both Dash and Steel break their stare from the screen to look at the source of the sound.*
Finallyshe'sgoneshecan'tkeeppreciousfromusnow!
Yespreciouspreciousclopcomewemustgo.
YesDashwemustgo.
*Steel lets out a hack of a cough as he lays back in the chair, a dubious smile playing across his face like someone who just hit five pounds of marijuana.*
If...If I smoked...I'd need...five cigarettes right now...
Hooolyyyy Celestia...now THAT...was a read...
*Dash joins in his small coughing fits, leaning against the chair with that same stupid grin pasted on her face.*
Well...hoo boy...I feel...feel uh...
I just feel spent...
I feel FREE...that was a lot of tension we just let go...
We...we gotta do this more...
Never pinned you...for that kinda...mare...
Juuust enjoy the moment...
*They both stare up at the ceiling, smiling.*
Ahem...
*The smiles immediately vanish, but their stares remain transfixed to the ceiling.*
So...that story you just read...
I know that story...did you just wank to it?
*Steel looks over at Dash, and she returns the look. He whispers to her.*
Should we just up and say it...?
Are you insane?! I wouldn't survive LOOKING at her right now, let alone ticking her off!
*They break their small conversation and move their eyes back to the ceiling.*
Nope. We, in fact, did not wank to this story. Nope. Not us.
*Two halos appear above their heads.*
Innocent as newly driven snow.
I think you mean 'pure', but yeah! We're pure! Innocent!
...
Oh...
Well alright then.
That story really is well written though, isn't it?
Oh yeah, fantastic writing. The plot is something you can actually tolerate, in fact, this is the kind of plot you'd see in a lot of fantastic stories. The quality is magnificent, the word choice is varied, and the imagery is...the imagery is-
IN-BUCKING-CREDIBLE.
...Yeah, what she said.
1033774I don't get it. Why are you bleeding?
lol... also... DAMNIT... im reading this then its like... HTTP: 502 error...
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
[Trixie pulls out before Twilight gets her's]
Well that's kind of dickish.
[Trixie grows a dick]
Well Played...
1044794
You dont watch anime do you? Whenever someone in an anime gets highly aroused there nose starts bleeding to extreme points
Well, this turned me on quite a bit. Great job with yet another portion of porn in your story.
“Ah yes... yes! Keep going! T-Trixie... is not letting you, ungh... not l-letting you go... until her--ah!--until her approval i-is... all over your face...” I don't know why but that made me laugh so hard...
I'm sorta wanting Trixie the maid back
role reversal
Let the fun times roll.
you
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Good chapter. It's good that Trixie is getting back on the right track.
Geez, they can't keep their hooves off each other.
I do believe they've fucked everyday since they've became rut-buddies.
Now to see how they make it up to Spike and Dash for what they've done.
Onwards!