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Nice refernce to Future Twilight
>Ah well, she mused as she closed her eyes, Future Twilight will take care of it...
I use this line on myself a lot.
Wow, after that, I pictured future twilight having sex with trixie...
great chapter can't w8 for the next chapter
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In the magical land of Equestria, time orgies are commonplace.
Twilight is having amazing sex with a pony who just made her closest and most supportive friend feel like garbage and drove him out of his own home. Does not add up. I mean, I understand it's just a clopfic, but Spike's really getting kicked while he's down in this one.
Ever since I've read his so many days ago, I've been sayin 'future Isaac will take care of it'
The plot and story are good but the clop needs work. It's a bit rushed, and words like sex and pussy are a no, no. Well usually, someone can say pussy if it's supposed to be dirty or kinky. But really, who calls it a sex? More often then not, you shouldn't even mention parts really.
1008928They're wasted. Deal With It.
1008928 i do feel sorry for spike though. Poor guy
Is there really a point to splitting up chapters into clop and sfw versions? You have to bump up the rating to mature anyway, so anyone who vehemently objects to clop is probably going to not see the story in the first place. It's just annoying because I saw 104k words over 34 chapters and got excited but then realised six of the chapters are more or less copies of others. Still, 104k words, I'm happy with that.
Story is great so far. The clop in this chapter is passable but not exceptional.
You should work on your drunken slurring. Every time Twilight or Trixie would say "Thish" or "Shpike", I would see Sean Connery.
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I can tell, you were too lazy to type "wait"!
And the only description I can say for clop is "Brain: Why am I getting an erection!?! Penis: It's still porn, and descriptive, yet still tasteful in presentation and pacing so as to make it more vivid in the mind. Me: Why is my genetalia more sophisticated than me?". that is just my thoughts on it in general. Good fic!
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I couldn't agree more.
Princess molestia approves
CURSE YOU PAST TWILIGHT!
1008928 He's being completely irrational and Twi's drunk.