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So, it's over then?
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This story was great.
I'm watching forward to whatever you do next.
Great ending, kinda sad to see this one go away. But great ending and looking forward to seeing more of your stuff. still += great couple
Awwwwwww best fic is best
There should be a Trixie Moustace emote for moments like this. Since I don't have an emote for this, I'll have to use a picture so The Great and Powerful Trixie can show off her Great and Powerful Swag:
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Wonderful story even if I am sad to see it end. For now or for good I don't know, you did make it a toss up on that regard so fingers crossed.
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*Of Maids and Mistresses is now Complete!!
wait.........
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Now THAT, my friends, is how you tell a good story. Now shut up and take my money.
That was awesome!
That was Beautiful!
That was truly a wonderful series. Very well executed. Thank you for writing this fic.
I knew the proposal was coming and that didnt make it any less adawwable
Gotta say this story became quite a lot more than what I was originally expecting and I loved every minute of it. Sad to see that its now over but all that really means is we all get to eagerly await your next project, should you choose to write something else.(pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasekeepwritingplease)
I would stomp clap so loudly if I was there.
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Tee hee. Admit it, you two~ She knows!
Not going to lie, I cried tears of joy when Trixie popped the question. Thank you for the ride of laughter, tears and Love. I hope to see more work like this. It's a shame to see this story over. Again, thanks.
derphooves15
I cant think of anything so just settle for this
Well, now I have to read other stories to occupy my boring life. Anyways, great story, I always get happy and sad at the same time when long stories end cause it's like a big adventure for me at least. Can't wait to see some other stories from you, mr. Unahim :)
P.S. Who else thinks a short sequel would be jawesome? A little snippet of the life of twilight and trixie after the wedding, sounds great.
Well.
This story was more than a little fucking creepy.
Still good on the dark humor though, so I liked it. Good job.
that is a sweet ending
aww I cried many manly tears
so what are your wedding plans twi
oh you know cake dancing the norm
what about us?
ya know sugercube we will have a wedding soon
Whoa, this leaves me speechless. That was...soo... AWESOME! I give you my biggest tippings of my hat sir. You have definitely deserved it, and I will be watching you for new, and more admirable, stories to come. Thank you for this wonderful story you have shown to everypony!cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-trcheerful.png
From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha
This was certainly a grand endeavor. A beautiful story, full of both darkness and joy to an impressive extent. It is sad that its over but worth every second.
The ending:
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It's done?
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Do it again, DO IT AGAIN!
Beautiful ending.
That was a B E A utiful ending.
Glad you decided to not just leave the AppleDash in the middle :)
Very well don e can't wait to see your future endeavors, you have done well with those two and I could see future installments of their life together. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Bravo my friend bravo
I seriously went "EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!"
Saravicimo :)
1221733 I couldn't agree more
A good ending to a fun story.
Did notice a couple of typos:
“Oh hey, it’s Trixie!” Pinke yelled
as she pointe at
Derp, forgot to comment.
So, it was an interesting ride, and the ending was to be expected (not saying that's bad) but, there's the but...
I feel as if Trixie's proposal was rather... weak. Perhaps I'm just spoiled from several other Trixie/somepony that usually end up with her spinning a grand tale as one of her shows that concludes with the proposal (but still somewhat related to the show itself), or... I don't know.
I felt as if the proposal itself was rather unlike Trixie, and I'm talking about her being a performer. Not her usual demeanor. Still, it was a good story.
5/5 mustaches for you
but why must it end
...Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie in toe. Ponytoe.
Amazing story, and an amazing ending!
Sequel for the obvious AppleDash?
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only thing now to do
* tell mom, dad and brother i am going to marry
* tell celestia that friendship reports shall be shunned until after the honeymooner
* introducing trixie to the family
*tell family that i'm a fillyfooler
* burn this list and wait for the next chapter
*(unreadable because paper is burning)
Finished reading the story last night.
Well done. Well done.
Probably one of the best Twixie stories out there. Quiet a lot of clop but then again, this was promised to us
I was quiet concerned about Trixies (and Twilights) mental health after the whole almost rape thing. Luckily Twilight did the right thing. And she still can play the Mistress from time to time.
I hope you will continue this story sometime. We still need to see more Appledash and how Celestia gets the news.
Greetings Unahim,
I wanted to thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this story.
Just reached the last chapter, and I can safely say it was a beautiful and amazing ride, and nothing short of pure pleasure to read.
There was a few aspects that raised some concerns, but they were easy enough to cast aside.
For one, I was worried about the sexual levels of the story, given I am not particularly fond of such a subject. Although it seemed a tad too prominent at times, it ended up not having any negative impacts on the experience, which was mainly what many of my fears were about.
The presence of censored chapters was also very thoughtful of you, and I appreciate the gesture tremendously.
I like to think of myself as being relatively open minded, but it would have probably proved quite the challenge to stay with the story had those not been present.
The other aspect was mainly story related. More specifically, the levels to which the story descended to.
The rather awful behavior of a certain purple mare made it quite hard at times to keep going.
But now that the journey is at it's end, I know you needed to go where you went. Heck I am grateful you did so.
It all became so, so clear when chapter 21 hit. And did it hit hard.
It took all the will I could muster not to join the mare in tears, has the reality of her actions hit her. All those feelings of animosity and disgust you had been building up to that point made that scene a painful and powerful experience.
Then you think it's over.
Everything lead up to that point. The big reveal, the focal point of the story. And you kinda let yourself forget about the other mare. That is, until chapter 25 happens.
No amount of willpower would have prevented the emotional train that hit me as the events of that chapter unfolded.
Those feelings of compassion, care, sympathy, understanding ... everything came crashing down, as I followed the blue mare in her short, yet much welcomed, journey to reconnect with her true self.
After that, the only path left to travel was the road to the end...
Quite the happy one too. The cliche "happy ever after", if you will. But I don't really mind. It was a good place to wrap things up, and it mixed well with the story leading up to it.
Whether or not you decide to continue where you left off, it's up to you entirely.
One thing I know for certain. As I read the final words of chapter 33, I found myself with a smile on my face, happiness in mind, and a gratitude within my heart that I now find hard to put to words.
It was everything I could have hoped for, and more.
I hope you don't mind me sharing my thoughts with you. They're nothing if not truthful.
I leave you now with a final thank you.
Thank you for taking the time to write a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it, so we could all enjoy it. Thank you for the consideration you showed to both sides of the same coin.
Thank you for going to the depths you did, and thank you for the journey back from them. Thank you for all the emotions, both good and bad.
For all that and much more, thank you.
A friend,
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+10 for writing style, easily the best backstory and characterization of Trixie since Of Mares And Magic, solid Applejack writing and a wonderful ending, -3 for easily the worst Twilight I've ever seen in a fic of this calibre. Final score: 7/10. and a half/
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Do you have the link to that story? [Of Mares and Magic].
A great ending to an amazing story, I applaud you 25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcz617rSy01r38j04o1_500.gif
Sooo many feels! this was a great story. a little shaky towards the middle with psycho twi but definitely made up for it at the end.
Well done!
that was the best magic trick of all time Trixie.
I will hunt you down and Alan Wake the shit outta you if you do not continue this.
2782190 meh. It's over. A sequel could work but any continuation of this directly would just be pandering.
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