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938106
Completely agree!
938695
Euh, maybe? :p
938830
Me too *wink*
939779
Thanks!
940896
Well, think about it like this: If the problem doesn't make you feel uneasy, then why would you feel happy at the solution? Because you feel like that, it'll be all the sweeter when the problem is solved. If it gets solved, not saying anything yet :p
940898
Hmmm, maybe a bit.
I agree about the brainwashy feel, but at the same time it definitely seems as though Twilight has a plan, which will presumably commence once her friends are more accepting, and can actually help her help Trixie... maybe.
Just as a side-note, I find it interesting to read through the non-clop versions and see what details you kept, and those that were slightly altered to keep them non-cloppy (clop readers will know what I mean when I say this chapter's finishing kiss is a great example ).
Anyway, loving it so far and can't wait for more!
So let me get this straight
They hold Dash down
Ignore her protests
Touch her sexually without permission
But oh, no, it's okay because she's in the closet and she liked it, really she did!
*shakes head*
So the next chapter is about the two of them being exiled from Equestria to the Ever-Free Forest for being rapists, right?
902074
Technically, it's not the fault of someone who unknowingly gives an idea. It's the fault of whoever -did- it. It's a pretty far stretch to believe mentioning an Ursa could lead to being forced to deal with one. So it's the Two Stooges' faults, not Trixie or Spike's. o-o
Can't wait for the next chapter, it's killing me!!!
941976
Don't want to overuse it ^^
942042
Glad to hear it!
942073
She definitely is.
942076
I never claimed it was "ok", this fic has more than one questionable element in it by now. However, as long as Dash doesn't press charges, precious little will happen. I'd file it under "technically" rape, at least at the start, though by the middle section she could've easily ran away.
942089
I agree, I didn't word it very well.
942191
->->
942302
Thanks!
942414
Well, that's what alcohol does to you. Plenty of drunken people having sex all over the world without "any signs" manifesting. And Trixie did admit she fancied Twilight in chapter 1, by the way.
942444
This story is a testament to it!
942496
Freaking out is good in my book ^^
942515
Pointless though it may be.
942533
I'm not sure I'll keep updating that long, but neat!
942535
Damn, that's my fourth murder already...
942586
You tell me :p
942587
She would make a rather dapper villain, here she's more like a very, very misguided heroine though.
942646
Not planning to make it much darker than this, heh.
942674
Well, she just thought this would work on Dash exceptionally well.
942782 ugh, again??? How many times do i have to tell you???
942813
Some people never learn :(
942833 its ok, just please try not to kill someone again. I dont want you to get complaints again
942840
There will be futa action again at some point, that I can say ^^
942845
Yeah, she is a sexual deviant, more or less. All I can say about the problem is that the story will have an end state, we'll just have to see what kind of ending it is ^^
942847
But I killed the witnesses this time...
942850
Yeah, but it's based on the real-life french maid.
Hm..not sure what to make of this, loved all the previous chapters, but this..Twilight keeps degrading Trixie even thou she knows /real/ Trixie, also decides to have her devoted lover have sex with another person/pony, is she trying to make poor Trixie into slutty mcslut whore? Will read clop version later to see full event thou, I could be wrong.
Hoping there will be more ?real? love for Twilight and Trixie in future.
942959
Well, a deep valley makes the surrounding mountains seem higher. A period of hunger makes food taste sweeter. So a dark moment in the story can make the brights shine brighter ^^
942932 good thinking, always a step ahead
What is this sorcery a twixie fic that actually updates and for what i can see really often as well!
I'm so going to read this fic only once its done tho i have made the mistake of starting to read a fic wile its still being written.
And then have the author disappear from the face of the earth and leaving the fic on like the biggest cliff hanger in the world.
So i must now ask do you have a estimate on when this fic will be completed or how many more chapters your planing to make?
943064
She lacks a certain amount of... perspective.
943067
No, thank you for reading ^^
943093
She must see the light!
943153
She never said -how- she was supposed to do it, though! You dirty mind, you!
943164
Eh, it's hard to say... I'm trying to update daily, and even at the slowest it shouldn't drop behind once a week. I think we're about 66% through, but who knows?
943405
Ah fair enough i will drop by a little now and then prob like 3 times + per day.
Cause this fic have sparked my interests and i cant wait to actually read it
I haven't really read a fiction like this before , I also like how the story is actually a story instead of a random blob of sex scenes and it doesn't start off with "And then Twilight met Trixie and she was so hot so they fucked in the alley with bananas."
943504
Yeah, I've done gore before, and that, too, I did with a story. I don't boy into the "lol, it's clop/gore, it doesn't need a story" thing.
943737
I would say a wild "getting ahead of the granting of permission" ^^ But yeah, Twilight is supposed to be suspect at the moment.
943831
Only in porn?
942076 Its not rape if you like it.
Just a question how is this fic with the clop parts i have read Romance Reports.
And its still one of the best ship / clop fics i have ever read it had sex scenes but it where still a solid story.
But the sex got really really detailed at some parts of the story witch didn't really disturb me but it made me feel really dirty
how is this story in that regard? I will prob still read it none the less i just want to know before hand :P
942782
Don't take what Device says too harshly about rape. If I remember correctly, he flipped out on himself for writing 'technical' rape in a fantastic story where none of the usual issues that make rape so horrible were present, and took his own stories down because of it. If anything, that's insulting to actual victims, something I find personally offensive given how terrible the actual crime is rather than a fantasy coupling.
Watching Twilight's descent as much as Trixie's development at this point.
>>Campisi
" Watching Twilight's descent as much as Trixie's development at this point. "
Same here!
Ya know, normally I dont like the fics that have Trixie being a bitch, or being someones bitch.
Having said that, I like this story. I'm not sure if I should be disturbed by this or not.
Keep up the good work!
944185 PFF HAHAHA ADDABOY!
Where did you get this picture anyways?
O__O
...... ME GUSTA!
An unconventional way to make an argument but very effective I dare say. Bravo my friend!
943881
Well, I guess that's debatable ^^
943914
I am quite graphic in my descriptions. The good thing is, there's a non-graphic "censored" version of every graphic chapter. I think certain character developments are portrayed better in the graphic scenes, but the censored versions do keep you up to speed.
943917
My friend, my other popular fic, Cheerilee's Garden, is widely considered to be one of the most gruesome and twisted things to have ever been written in this fandom. There is no thing people could say about this story here which would be harsher than certain comments on Cheerilee's Garden, trust me :p (although 95% of comments are extraordinary positive, there's always that 5% insisting I'm a demented freak. To the credit of this great fandom, most of them come back to apologise, though.)
944068
Working as intended!
944185
Is this an actual scene from the show? Looks suggestive indeed, heh.
944292
Dude, it's one of my favourite words! :p
944432
Haha, good that you pointed that out! I'm usually pretty on-guard about these kinds of things, but I guess I was... distracted.
944514
Thanks for the praise, I'll try to keep at it ^^
944730
Thanks!
945170
That's alright, not every story can be for everyone, and perhaps future chapters will be able to rekindle your enthusiasm ^^
945236
Yay~
945802
No, she's simply in the closet and afraid to come out.
The spacing isn't really a conscious decision on my part, the only thing I do is tell myself "Don't put the clop scenes too close together" and past that the amount of chapters between each one is sorta just up to chance.
And yeah, Trixie and Twilight are troopers alright, but if Twilight can survive an anvil and a loaded cart falling straight on her head, she can survive three days of sexiness ^^
946002
Oh ok i will be reading the clop chapters cause i prefer to read the story the way it where intended.
Besides once again i have read romance reports so i don't think it will effect me much.
Im looking forward to this fic being completed
937767 really you used to the moon for that you deserve a boot to the head and
Okay, this fic has officially gone in a weird direction. Romantic Twixie with some mild S&M, sure. Trixie's turnaround personality and sob story background, ehhh...
Twilight, with advanced plotting, pinning her friend down with her crotch? I don't buy it.
946068
I hope I can do so in an expedient manner, then!
946819
Yes! Now I finally have two boots
946945
Silly filly, you don't need to buy it, it's free! ;)
947053 que fraying pan to the face and 1 grand piano in the air about to drop anyway keep it up OR DIE IN HELL
Taste the Rainbow.