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Whoa, defiantly something I've been looking forward to but still, Twilight is taking it a lot harder then I thought she would. Props on making her throw up, would not have thought to cause physical symptoms to emotional distress.
Much better.
Finally, Twilight came to her senses. How in the hay is she gonna fix this mess now?
Holy shit.
This is good.
I mean this is really fucking GOOD.
Don't stop what you're doing man.
Good chapter looking forward to the next one
The emotion..
Wonderful job!
Thank you!
this is a turn in the right direction.
Very nice wakeup call for Twilight...
Too bad it took something of that magnitude to make her realize that AJ was right.
Yay finally some regret!
You really had me worried that this will turn into one of those depressing stories where somepony just goes rogue and abuses the crud out of another.
Cheers for the twist (hopefully for the better and with more fun stuff)
You dun fucked up, Twi
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At that point, nothing LESS would have worked.
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Dialogue beats are everywhere in good fics if you look hard enough - a scratch of the hoof, pawing at the ground, raised eyebrow, etc.
It's just that they're usually temporary
Twilight be over the edge
Man, this is some buckin' amazing writing. Keep it up dude, can't wait ta see how this all goes :D
"Well, Fluttershy is too scared of big parties like this--remember the one I held for you? She didn’t come then either" wait a second... *watches episode one* Fluttershy was there.
Feels, man. Feels.
...And realization dawns. Good chapter! Very interested to see where things go from here. (Not to mention, what about RD?)
May I say that that there is not enough adjectives in the English language to describe how incredibly powerful this scene is. This is truly some of the most passionate writing I have ever come across.
Edit: I would also like to say that this was even more powerful to me due to the fact that "Master of Puppets" (cello version done by Apocalyptica.) came up right where Trixie was about to give herself to the colts...
964570 easy by dropping a grand piano on herself
I like the way twilight came to her senses while trixie remains oblivious to it much better like how the scene played out
anyway keep it up
I was waiting for something like this to happen, Aaaaand there it is.
Now the oh so fun task of fixing her fuck-up can truly begin.
Cry, Twilight, cry and weep! It's your fault! Make it right again!
I absolutely love this chapter!
*reads description*
oh...oh god.
Trixie was show-offy and all but.....
i got to read this.
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Penguin laugh? I might need a bit of clarification.
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Ah well, I was bound to drop the ball at some time! She is now caring for a sick bunny instead ^^
And thus, the tragic event that snaps Twilight out of her power trip and makes her realize what she has done. If Twilight wants to 'fix' this problem, I believe the first thing she is going to need to do is throw away/destroy those maid outfits. She also owe Applejack and Rainbow Dash VERY HUGE apologies.
Excellent job in the stories flow so far. I can't wait to see what you are going to do next.
What a play. Well done good sir.
Well...that killed the mood.
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And I only fave'd this today, my feels don't know what to do!
At last the little unicorn snaps out of it and sees the error in her ways, now lets see how she is going to deprogram Trixie as we know that the girl needs to loose the maid issue. But if that gets removed will that showmare persona kick back in or did it disappear......if not Twi now got two things to deprogram from poor Trixie. I wish you luck Twi and for the love of Faust NO MORE OUTFITS!!!!
964904 And cannon has been restored! =D *insert fluttershy angels singing here*
Why Twilight why???? Siriusly i wanted to see how Trixi will shatters to nothing less ^^
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Honesty. The Truth is the greatest weapon you will never see. Everyone has it, everyone hides it, even from themselves. Especially from themselves. No one will ever want to agree with the one who wields it, no one will ever want to believe what that person has to say, because it means admitting the Truth to themselves, destroying everything they know and understand, all based on a bed of little lies to create an illusion of self-assurance and confidence... or the reverse in others.
That's why no one ever says, "Wow AJ, thank you for your wonderful insight and advice." It's always, "AJ, I'm so sorry. You were right all along." Too often have I heard similar to the latter.
SHE FINALLY REALISED!
964888 If you like what this story has to offer, as well as the fappy material, you're in for a treat.
And this chapter...I was actually WANTING Twilight to show up, just to save Trixie from that situation. Glad it happened, and everything that occurred after that was just emotional icing on the cake.
Well. Fucking. Done. I am reading this story all the way through to the end, but it feels like we're on the downhill track back to the start. Kind of sad, really...this marks the half-way point, I'd say.
We still have Dash's conflict to look forward to though! OH GOD that's going to be amazing!
THAT EPIC WHIP LASH OF TRUTH! This was a great day. MAY THE SUFFERING END for the time being of course. This is gonna be awesome.
Better. Much better...
This was sort of what I was waiting for, but still not QUITE there yet.
Wow Twilight, you were supposed to be the smart one and you only figured it out now.
And I hope those bastards are in the hospital!
Sad that something like this had to happen for Twilight to see what she's done is wrong. Now our little Twily's got a lot of fixing to do. I hope she can keep her friends and be a better pony after all this.
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So many feels...
Great story, and awesome character development. Hope to see more!
this story is amazing. keep going! :derpytongue:
Twilight, I think it's time you tell Trixie a story.
964541 dunno if "much better" fits as alone comment, but yeah, the story getting much better. adter twilight realised her fall.
i hope AJ and RD could help her and trixie out of the hole, both of them stuck in ... (or all 3, because ... i dont know, but raping rainbow dash really wasn't the smartest move)
i'm looking forward for more (to read, not pain, agony and sadness)
Thanks for the many positive comments on the latest chapter so far! ^^
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I'm glad this chapter is finally out. People were constantly a bit miffed about Twilight's wickedness, and I just wanted to yell "Just wait for it!" a few times, but couldn't do so for fear of spoilers :o At least that's not a problem anymore.
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I do have plans for RD, in due time ^^
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Oh, in what way?
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Oooo... you eh... you may want to, you know... stop reading while you're ahead? *meep*
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Truer words have never been spoken. (and that's quite ironic ^^)
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Those two are actually name-inserts of two of my friends, it's a bit of a joke towards them ^^ They were very upset by your comment :(
So many feels.
Make more feels!
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Took long enough for her to realize.
I wonder how Twilight's gonna restore Trixie's original personality. Let Trixie be the mistress with herself as the maid? Ask her to put on a ridiculously over the top magic show?
ANYTHING COULD HAPPEN
Bravo, bravo!!!
I'm glad I had faith in you, Unahim, despite the fact you created one of the darkest ponyfics about gardening I've ever read(actually one of the darkest period). Your writing style made me think you had it in you to write a story with more redeeming qualities and I was not disappointed.
I personally didn't find the Rainbow Dash scene to be true rape in its original version, but the rewrite makes it much clearer that Dash was willing if not yet ready to accept what it meant for her. But mostly I wanted to say good on you for not having Celestia or the like come in and force Twilight to snap out of it. Having Twilight come to the realization herself is much more powerful and makes her next actions part of her free will and thus actual character growth instead of some lame forced lesson.
This chapter receives 5/5 moustaches!
So sad
Yet so funny at times
I like this! Keep up the awesome work!
I can't wait to see how Twilight will unmake her mistakes and try to give Trixie a will back of her own.
I've read sad fics, horror fics, romance fics, but none that have such a perfect balance of all three. This has no equal on FF.. maybe not even EqD.
I haven't read even a novel in ages that has awoken the blend of hatred, anger, sadness and pity that this fic has presented me with.
So good work, Unahim. I would buy this in book form without a second thought.
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The Penguin, from Batman.
Well, can't say I didn't expect this to happen eventually.
It was only a matter of time for this to eventually rear it's fugly head. Here we see how much Applejack was right and how she deserves the title of "most mature friend" of the mane 6. It's going to take a LOOOOOOONG time for Trixie to be de-maid as the new persona has now become her own persona. Twilight Sparkle, you realized too late, you silly filly.