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998337 Yeah, I will have it up by 4 pm today in my time. It's 11am right now. I need to finish the rest of the last part, proof read it, and I am good and I will have it posted in a jiffy.
damn you and your cliffhangers.............
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Just be aware it can take the FiMFiction people a day to get it approved ^^
998515 Yep so expect in in a day, I will let you know which position I am in to be posted.
Let's hope she doesn't do the Trixie equivalent of Pinkamena
but dammit cliffhangers!
well THIS update was suprisingly swift.
why cant all the other stories I'm following update this quickly?
An interesting plan, though I see it having extraordinary potential in back-firing in Twilight's face. This should be good.
Bloody Cliffhangers, leaving me in suspense all the damn time...
Twilight would never believe that the princess would let even one pony suffer “for science”
Oh Twilight.... So naive. :[
Can't wait to find out what will happen with Trixie now. Maybe hot "You cured me but I kinda hate you and still want to shag you"-makeouts?
Damn, Trixe is gonna be in for a shock.
998549 I'm expecting total chaos, madness, destruction and emotional bedlam. Y'know, something that could show up in the actual show.
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Oh my! I sense something over-emotional coming! I mean, just thinking about what can come out of it, I can already feel tears leaking out!
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Good job by the way on the chapter. I hope Trixie gets better!
This.
Is...
AMAZING!
998605 Seems legit
HEh! looking forward
!!! (speechless until I read more)
Cross your fingers everybrony!! Lets hope this works.
Ah, it just feels good to be right about something.
I wonder if the Neighton today is anything like the Neighton in Trixie's memories. It would not be unheard of to completely raze a town to make sure all the germs or whatever caused the disease are killed.
Maybe Twilight and Trixie will end up in a ghost town because it was abandoned after the epidemic?
I'm sure the ponies of Neighton (if it isn't a ghost town) will be happy to see two strange ponies appear out of a flash of light. Especially, one with an erotic maid outfit on.
This, is not going to end emotionally well......
great chapter, damn you cliffhangers
This is going places. ... Across the map, even.
Cliffhanger...........why........why do such things have to exist.......gaaahhh.....oh well just have to wait I guess always glad that the waits are never too long.
As for the chapter itself it shows quite well how Twilight is handling the fact that well to be quite frank...she and trixie are in one hell of a deep hole and......hehe......an all or nothing long shot is all she has to work with. Pretty sure any of the girls would be getting really nervous and desperate if they were in such an situation though I am sure each would handle it differently.....well lets hope that Trixie doesn't stay broke and snaps out of it. Erm.......but I'm sure when she does snap out of it.....it won't be very pretty and Twi better be ready for damage control and catching Trixie as she falls apart with the pain of acceptance of such a horrible past memory.
This is gonna be VERY fun to read *maniacal evil laughter*. Let the confusion commence!
wow, desperate times, desperate measures?! that's going to hurt one way or the others ...
I can almost see the last lines in this fic
Soooo... now that you are cured and all... no hard feelings for screwing you into the floor like a good doormat you were?
(levitating the maid outfit):Not at all sweetie, now wear your uniform for the The Great And Powerful Trixie!
And then they all bucked
998615 Because that's why he's called Cliff Hanger.
998515Not always. My first story took a day, but when I went to post my second story, just to get it off my mind, it took not even an hour. Expected a good amount of time to work on other things and it took less than an hour.
Trixie gonna have to go through some deep stuff next chapter
I Demand Chapters! Chapters of this Fic!
but really, this makes me want to read the next one now so badly.
This is going to be all kinds of harrowing. Good luck Trixie.
Awesome work as all ways ..
Lets hope she wrote all the calculations down right
I feel honored that I guessed Twilight's plan correctly.
Pretty awesome
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Well I did write "can" ^^
1000650True enough. Still though, sometimes I wonder. Half the time it feels like this site is just trolling me.
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998605 Chaos!
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Uh-oh. Twilight, I'm sorry, but you've done enough. This will not end well.
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Thank you for the feedback!
If this was an actual book, I'd probably have written it closer to the form you appear to prefer. However, it is not, and in some ways I have to keep in mind the reality of the situation, that being: While people who pick up a book can generally be expected to stick with it until the end, the average FiMFiction reader can generally not be expected to stay on board if the story has a slow pace or stays in the same general "state" for too long. In that sense, its pace is more akin to a webcomic, because both mediums know that one chapter of "this story doesn't seem to be moving forward" can quickly lead to the work in question being abandoned by the reader altogether.
Therefore, I bank upon a slightly faster and more fluid style of writing, which attempts to show you each stage of the character development, but does not like lingering in any one state for too long a time.
If the comments are at all a good representation of the reader base (and I imagine they either are, or they are slightly biased against me, as disgruntled people tend to have more anima to post than people just wanting to check in with a "Doing good!") then this strategy has seemingly worked out very well.
There will, of course, always be both people who like as well as people who dislike a story, and that is fine. I am sorry to hear you are in the second category; your arguments are indubitably accurate, the pace is indeed quite high, but that is a conscious decision which suits the medium and the chapter-based release form very well. I am not opposed to your views, but I believe I stand to lose far more than I would gain, and this far into the story it is, of course, a moot point ^^
Again, I thank you for the feedback, and perhaps I'll manage to please you with a story in the future ^^
who ordered a magical nuclear bomb twilight style
anyway keep it up
Damn Cliffhangers Can't wait for the next update
baptized in fire
destined to one of two fates
emerging from the flames clean
joining the ashes
one thing is certain
she will know despair
Gates? Chalk circles? Alchemy! Cool.
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That was actually really nice right there.
To quote one of my favorite authors.
"Hope is not a plan."
3299859 To quote a random anchorman.
"F@ck it! We'll do it live!"
Who needs plans she's Twilight Motherf@cking Sparkle!
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What Twilight needs is a Dilithium Crystal, a Flux Capacitor, and twenty gallons of pudding.
Still this fic has hit the feels, and I'm glad that Twilight finally opened her eyes to her monumental act of stupidity.