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Trixie is getting better, I am happy
So is that it? If it is that's probably the greatest ending I have ever read
Five mustaches!!!
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Bravo, Unahim. Bravo.
This
Is the
Greatest
story
EVER.
I just wish other clopfics had this much depth to them. Instead of being.... Ya know... clopfics
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I'm happy you're happy ^^
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No, we're not there yet ^^ What of Rainbow Dash? What of Spike? How will every day life look like for Twilight and Trixie now? Does Trixie go back to being a showmare, and, if so, does she need to travel around again?
These questions, and more, I plan to answer before the end ^^
This could definitely be seen as the end of the "Trixie is mentally ill." story arc, though.
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What movie is that gif from again? I adore it. The gif, I mean.
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Speaking of which, we haven't had clop in, like... 27k words? Good lord, better get back to that before I am accused of false advertising *winks*
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Tears!
This gave me feels and nearly drove me to tears, and it is rare something makes me cry. You should feel proud because of that
.... alright, who's cutting onions?
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The GIF is from Citizen Kane.
Goddamnit.
Manly. Fucking. Tears.
Well, well written. Emotional impact of a sledgehammer topped with a C4-charge of love. Fantastic.
€dit: Fanboy-rambling aside: I would LOVE to see what AJ will have to say to this. And most importantly what Trixie will say to Twilight's "maid-approach". It was, after all, not commented on by the REAL Trixie up until now.
Still hoping for the hate-love-makeouts here.
Good old fasion ending. You can called it here and noone will complain. But I think you have more in storage. Anyway, Great work!
Trixie's getting better? Well, I happy now.
and here i decided to finally read this story that had backed up on the tabs and follow it and lo and behold it updated =)
Yeah happiness
perfect. Trixie is now Trixie again. yay! i doubt this is the end, it feels like you'll be showing us when they return to ponyville, or at least years down the road like after they get married. ya know a sort of epilogue.
Bravo good sir, bravo. Mistakes have been made, apologies given, memories restored, and through all of it I was completely riveted. I'm sure I've said this before, but since it's still true, I'll say it again: I can't wait to see what happens next.
/manly_tears_1
"Manly tears" is on
“Twilight,” Trixie suddenly interrupted her, to the purple unicorn’s great surprise, “shut up and kiss Trixie.”
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Oh frabjous day! Her poor psyche is coming back together. Good on you Twi.
The ghosts were a bit much tho'
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Who says they were real?
Beautiful.
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'Sniff' damn it! Now you made get sappy!
wow.... i,m surprised really. i was a little ( if not alot) worried on how you would take care of this part of this story... but those worries were for naught. it was truly a great chapter not rushed..not teeth grindingly slow. just the perfect pacing.
i will put this chapter on my top 5 favorite chapters and yourself among my top 6 favorite authors
great respect from Denmark
kharnes out.
wow... that was sad.
Well written, but (as with the rest of the story) it happened a bit too fast. Still a damn good read though. Now Twilight just has to watch for relapse (please Celestia for the sake of this story being longer, let Trixie relapse)
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I wonder if there are any guests back at the library for when they return.
I have no shame in crying because of something as emotional as this I'm happy for Trixie as she's feeling better and I'm wondering what's going to happen now
"Twilight...shut up and kiss Trixie."
I love the way so much dramatic and character weight swings around on this short sentence. Nicely done!
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Her mind was playing Trixies on her. a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/s/csi3plz.png?1 a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/s/csi4plz.png?1
cool story brah
Stop making me weep damnit!!!
Win, that is all.
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dammit, trixies parents made me cry
this fic is amazing and i cant wait for the next chapter
1012156 The clop isn't necassary at this point in the story. I think you need to publish a version without the clop chapters as even an option so that all the people without the mature box ticked can see it. On a side note, "Pulvis et umbra summus" is a good sentence to include in this story as its meaning is touched on a lot, in the terms of the memories and past Trixie's. Its latin and it means "We are but dust and shadows"
Bravo ! great ending for a great story ! or wasn't this the last chapter `?
Woo, she finally got better!
1012057 I don't know about you, but I didn't see Completed at the bottom of the series.
1012229 I have a feeling this Trixie will be interested in getting a couple of slutty maid outfits in Twilight's size.
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Now with that being said, excellent chapter. Now onward to the next chapter(s), please.
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It's never explicitly necessary, but it's a literary vehicle for character growth and interaction in this fic ^^ I wouldn't mind putting up a submission with only the non-clop chapters, but I believe that breaks FiMFiction rules. I mean, even taking down a story, rewriting it and then reposting it is forbidden because of the extra attention that'd generate, and in this case you can either see it as rewriting only some chapters, or not rewriting anything at all ^^
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Nope, not the last chapter ^^ But the ending of a story arc, perhaps?
1012136 well 1 great story 2 great chapter and 3 you could start a new story as a sequel as the next arc but just keep it up and keep writing
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yeah still what to know how Twilight gonna help RD after she raped here ...
Awesome work.. One of the best
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One of these days I'm renaming myself to Una-"RD wasn't Raped"-him.
But still, they do need to make some form of amends there.
if this is the end of this story i have to say, while it certainly wasn't the longest, i can say it is certainly the best i have ever read, I thank you for writing this story, thank you from the depths of my heart for this story, it has made me cry, smile and laugh, it also made me nervous in times of suspence, but all the same I thank you for every second
esta historia es hermosa
WILL THERE BE A NEW TRIO IN PONYVILLE?! WHAT WILL TRIXIE SAY WHEN SHE'S BACK AT PONYVILLE!? WILL SHE BUCK THINGS UP AGAIN? OR WILL THE NEW FOUND FRIENDSHIPS BE MAINTAINED AND NEW ONES CREATED?! FIND OUT IN THE NEXT EXCITING EPISODE OOOOOFFF "OF MAIDS AND MISTRESSES"!
Sir, I hope your out of feel seeking missiles because I'm running out of manly tears...
On the other hand I can always just by some more from Mann Co.
"Manly tears are kredit to team!"