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It look like Trixie is a good showmare...too good. She apparently doesn't just play the role, she becomes it. Plus the fact that she loves Twilight doesn't hurt..
hahhah the mistress bit is certainly making my day.......well at least she's taking to her roles quickly.......i'd love to see celly's expression at how her "faithful student" gets action...........>.>.......then again she must have gotten the maid idea from a past experience......
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This might work as a coverart, only problem is that its human.http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/065ab4e675d0c7935c510547b8ca85ef/141345%20-%20artist%3Ajohn_joseco%20humanized%20maid%20The_Great_And_Powerful_Trixie%20Trixie%20twilight_sparkle.jpg
tch, im tempted to at least do a sketch for cover art but too much going on..........
Oh dear, how are Twilight's friends going to react?
She's taking to the maid role surprisingly well
I'm interested to see what the rest of the mane 6 will think
I hate trixie sooo much, but after this I kinda like her a bit more now. Trying to change her actions for the mare she loves, it's adorable ^_^
Why can't I remove this smile from my face, its like... stuck...
I'm loving the psychological aspect here.
Trixie update!? My afternoon is now complete.
922450 why would you hate Trixie i can understand dissliking her but why hate?
1.she is a showoff? well her work was a magic show should she say shes nothing special and they can all move along cause there is nothing amazing to see?
2.she got the colts to bring an ursa to town? no spike told the colts he won't belive them until he see trixie defeat an ursa that made them bring it.
she even tried to do somthing when the Ursa attacked. yes it failed misserably but she tried.
Yes she was an ass towards them in the challenges but anything else? i can see why you would disslike her but not why you would hate.
another great chapter
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That seems about right :p
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"We uh... tried to make cotton candy!"
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Of course she's a good showmare, she's the Great and Powerful Trixie, after all!
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And on top of that, it's a -Canterlot- maid, so, the places where she could've gotten the experience from are limited...
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Hey, thanks for showing me this, I appreciate the effort, but I think the current picture is still slightly more appropriate ^^
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No need to trouble yourself on my account ^^
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Oh god, you better hope I can get that mental image out of my head while writing.
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That's the question, alright.
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I'm sure you'll find out soon enough ^^
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I'm glad you feel that way! I used to really dislike her too, but these days, the reasoning Trixie used in her meeting with Twi in chapter 1 is basically what I think.
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You have Unatitis. It's permanent, but don't worry, you can still lead a long, happy life with it.
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Unsuccessful cock-block, though!
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Yay~ Incidentally, one of my future fics will be psychological horror starring Fluttershy.
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I update daily, so you have some complete afternoons in front of you still :p
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Well, at least he feels a bit better about her now. Most people dont really think about it when they say "hate", I wouldn't look too deeply into it.
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Tryin' ta' keep it up, yes sir.
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I did say hate, but because of this story, I just very, very, very much still dislike her now
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I'm a girl... *cricket cricket* but it's ok, you can't see me so I don't judge you if you called me a he instead of a she
Oh this is just delicious.
Honestly I think her talent is performing roles. Acting & Magic is her talents but, the sad part is they combine oddly and she becomes whatever role she's placed in. Tell her to be a rabbit and she'll start hopping and eating carrots. Well that's just my opinion but, I believe it's how it works with her.
Are there apples on that shopping list?
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923541 Oh god, I can't wait for more. I've been laughing so hard the entire time I've been reading.
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This is one of those moments where I wish the he/she distinction didn't exist in the English. I've heard it's like that in Finland, for example.
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Reliable sources told me Heavy finds this more delicious than sandwich.
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But which one is which?
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Yes, I meant asexual. I won't claim bookworms or nerds are asexual at all, but in this story Twilight--who just happens to be a nerdy bookworm--was perceived to be asexual by at least one of her friends. That perception was obviously false ^^
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[Disclaimer: Could be seen as a spoiler, although the attentive reader already has all the pieces of the puzzle to reach this conclusion by themselves.]
Perhaps not as extreme as the rabbit example, but in essence it does work like that. Talent isn't everything, channelling your talent into some endeavour is the important part. There are positive and negative ways in which to channel your talents, which correspond to positive and negative forms of growth and development. For instance, someone with a talent for handling money and finances could either become a banker, a financial consultant, treasury holder, etc (all positive ways of development) or they could abuse their talents in order to become scammers and swindlers (negative development). Those are examples on the society/occupation level, but this conflict exists on a personal and emotional level as well.
Trixie, in this story, is an example of that. She has a talent for putting up shows and for learning a wide variety of magic (as all magic, in essence, can be used in a show in some form or the other). A positive growth for her would have included a wide variety of entertainment skills and roles she played without losing her core self in the process. A negative development is as displayed: the same level of skill and the same mastery over different roles, but the role(s) in question have usurped her core personality.
It's important to realise, however, that this is a description of symptoms, not root causes. There is always a driving force behind both positive and negative developments. I will touch upon Trixie's in great depth in a future chapter.
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I would imagine so. It's not of vital importance to the plot, though ^^
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I didn't set out to write comedy, but I don't mind that I did :p
he, maybe Twi should get a whip/ riding crop. hehehe
Lovely development, its good that ponyville is like it is, if I was Twilight and in our world I would be too afraid for Trixie with that kind of outfit.
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Me too, I use words like it or their if I don't know a person's gender
922400 Let's see, AJ and Dash already hate the fact that she is around, mostly Dash and AJ doesn't know how to process the situation. Rarity seems to be fairly neutral about Trixie. Fluttershy has never met her, so she might like her, being the element of kindness this will make them become friends even more. Then Pinkie Pie... it's just Pinkie Pie, there is no explanation needed to tell anyone whether they will be friends or not.
926480 Good job again! I laughed when Twilight told her to go get groceries for her in her maid outfit. Keep up the good work!
From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha
I'm sure if the princess found out she would have mixed feelings
This won't end well...
This is getting better and better
I didn't read many ships involving Twilight an Trixie, but this one seems to flow up really natural
Though I don't have much time for reading, I'll be sure to stop by and read more of this nice piece of work!
congratulations for this awesome story
Good story and all, but, the maid thing is a it silly
Twilight really seems to be crossing the lines to being just plain mean. There are ways to treat a maid well or poorly, and she looks like she's slipping into the poor category. I understand the intent, but teaching Trixie humility is one thing, and being rude is another.
Came because friend nagged me to read
Stayed for the amazing psychological difficulties of changing your persona for the person you love.
voices?
trixie is bucked
equestria is doomed
the readers are amused
well played sir, well played
Absolutely delightful.
So happy that not everypony hates Trixie.
The story keeps on getting better and better. Keep it up!
This is person should write and publish real life books!
This couldn't end badly at all.
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Thats like a cop who only has 1 day left before retireing saying
"I think we lost them"
You will never be an emotionally conflicted, azure unicorn mare with a subconcious penchant for submission, eagerly pleasing the mulberry love of your life after heartbreaking realisation of the consequences of your previous mindset
Fear not little pony Trixie has failed you but Mistress Twilight will guide you now.
Aww I was waiting for her to hit AJs stall.
What are Spurs? You never mention it, and the show only uses bits.
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twilight you are a bitch.
..............Oh you got to be bucking me.
Verdant Green? Verdant?!
Really? Really? What are the odds that within two days of making up my own Pony OC named Verdant, I find a story using that name?!
Don't take that the wrong way, I am enjoying the fic- this is right up my alley to be honest. The sheer coincidence of this just boggld my mind for a few moments. Still, I'm liking what I'm seeing so far. Trixie and Twilight are finding themselves slipping into these roles far easier than they expected, which actually makes the "rudeness" of Twilight make sense. They're still figuring out some boundaries, and with Twilight doing this firstly to improve Trixie's behavior, there is going to be a bit more of that. Twilight probably will go too far at somepoint, but that's good because they'll know the line then.