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yeah wonder when she realise that she have to ask her friends for help ... maybe Pinkie sense that she's needed once more?
i guess i'm addicted ?!
Just had an idea! Command trixie to stop being her maid! if she wants to be a good maid, she cant refuse.
Great story I can't wait for the next chapter I hope it is as good as the others have been
As always, great chapters!
And it all came tumbling down...
I'm sure she hadn't checked the book of 'Role Reversal 101'.
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Or, given how deep the original message is ingrained in her, this would just quite literally break her. It would seem like the ultimate failure since her services are no longer requested, regardless of the phrasing.
It's almost up there along with telling a robot "This statement is false."
Was that a little Harry Potter reference at the end there?
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But wait, if Trixie stops being the maid, then she doesn't have to listen to Twilight's order to not be her maid, but if she continues to be the maid, then she can't refuse Twilight's or- unrealitymag.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/02/exploding_head_3.jpg
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Nope see Trixie ISS the maid if Trixie is ORDERED To not be the maid it is BECAUSE she FAILED at being the maid...
Trixie IS the maid they are One and the same
Great story so far! This is great! I sure hope she finds out she needs her friends.
hey this is featured
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That comment and picture gets five out of 5 mustaches
SEXY MAID OUTFIT!
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You've basically got the gist of it. Here's how I'd word it:
Twilight can order Trixie to stop being the maid, but she can't order Trixie to stop -thinking- like the maid. A person (or pony) just can't change their thought patterns on command like that. Therefore, Trixie would oblige Twilight if Twilight told her to stop acting like her maid, but as her thought patterns are rigged to believe that her only purpose is pleasing Twilight by being her maid, that would be her undoing.
That's more or less what Twilight figures out during this chapter, too.
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Not knowingly :p
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It's mini-featured, which means it goes up in the feature box every time I post an update for it for as long as it is in the update list. Unless something more popular from the update list bumps it off before that. It's been doing that for a while now ^^
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Because that would totally work
It would probably kill Trixie on the inside to know that she is no longer needed by Twilight
At first I read it for the plot, but now I read it for the PLOT
If you know what i mean
"The Great and Powerful Trixie" was dispelled when Twilight recast her as "Trixie, the naughty maid." Perhaps "Trixie, the naughty maid" could then be replaced with the role of, "Trixie, the orphaned unicorn with the gift of magic," and, "Trixie, Twilight's magically gifted marefriend." Then, in that state of mind, she could decide for herself what role she wishes to play.
Alternatively, she could join Rainbow Dash, Spike, and the CMC in their weekly Daring Do RPG session and become, "Trixie, the greatest elf lady/ potionmaster/ dragonslayer in FakeLandia!"
Poor Twilight...
Nothing's ever easy...
Advice mode Active.
Advice for Twilight:
Revise the maid outfit to be more conservative. Part of Trixie's issues stem from what her role is, and ordinary maid is less subservient than naughty maid.
Begin having Trixie take a more independant role in the relationship, using something along the lines of "I want you to begin planning your own activities and schedule for the day" to make it an order, which will help Trixie need direct control less.
Ask for help from her friends, especially Fluttershy and Rarity, both of whom has experience in either learning to be assertive or being independant. Rarity made her own business herself, while Fluttershy has learned how to act without coaching, in spite of a timid nature, a nature similar to Trixie's new personality.
ok... let's see...
yeah... these emoticons are what I'm feeling right now.
Great story and I hope you write more soon...
I dare say that this is one of the greatest Twilight x Trixie ship I ever read.
The song Apologize comes to mind (preferably the cover by Silverstein, rather than One Republics original). im just not sure whos point of view the song would be from, i guess in some ways, it could be both. Thoughts on that anyone?
Maybe Twilight should pull a psychonaught and dive into Trixies mind to see if she can help her out.
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Apart from the costume (there's a lot of designs for maid costumes, but there's only one "Twilight's Maid" costume in Trixie's mind) it could work, to some degree. No doubt Trixie would attempt to make a schedule, but I'm not entirely convinced that would end well. She could make her entire schedule "hang around Twilight", which would either accomplish nothing or (if Twi remarked upon it) give her the feeling she did it wrong. She could also be in a state of mind that she just doesn't know anything to do with her time if it's not listening to Twilight. And then, even if the previous two cases are averted, there's still the possibility she'll make the perfect schedule... and then not learn anything from it, as she still only followed an order, no matter how complex it was.
Asking Rarity and Fluttershy for help could work, depending on what they try, but while both of them have some applicable skills, they've never quite had to deal with something like this.
I actually wrote a -ton- more about certain traps and problems that would pop up, but then I realised I was basically spoilering upcoming chapters, so I deleted it again. You'll just need to wait for Twilight's analysis. ^^
I wonder what's gonna happen...I know that Trixie's brain isn't going to break, so how is this problem going to be fixed?
Perhaps through a risky plan devised by Twilight? Or maybe the saying 'the clothes make the man (or mare in this case)' has quite some truth to it?
Ahhhhh.. So Trixie has a psychological problem where she gets so ingrained into a certain personality she begins to think it's really hers.. hmmm. So couldn't Twilight just order her to act as a normal marefriend would??.. No that'd defeat the whole purpose of this story... What she needs is a trained psychologist.
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No, as stated a few comments ago, that would have adverse effects ^^ It'll be clarified in the next chapter.
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What if Twilight Tells Trixie to put back on her G&P outfit and orders her to...dominate her?
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Mah Brain is full of Fucks and I don't like it!!
Imagine my surprise and glee to see this story updated on the same Day I started to read it.
Still see the same as before. You rock.
And the most useless command would be to ask "Tell me: What do YOU want to do?" The Answer would be "What Mistress wishes."
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Indeed. Everything based on what Trixie wants is pointless, everything that could be interpreted as "You're being fired from being my maid" makes Trixie 'splode.
Dem be the rules!
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Ohhhhh shit.. I can already see the shit storm that comes whenever Twilight just tries to fire Trixie. HELLFIRE AND BRIMSTONE PEOPLE!! Its gonna be the Smarty Pants incident all over again, except this time I'm expecting more emotional trauma and lots of Pinkie. It's not like it could get any worse.. Oh damn i just jinxed this shit..
My God. I just favourited a clopfic. Truly this is the end of days.
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I admit, my passion for the story has, from the start, been in the part of it past the initial build-up of the love relation (which, admittedly, only excludes 3 or so chapters). It can be hard at times to write stuff that doesn't motivate you, and it's even harder to draw it out, which is why the start is a bit... fast.
Though I maintain that there's real-life people who've taken those steps just as fast, sometimes even without booze :p
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I prefer the term "fic with clop" in this case
978241 pfft, Clop fics are fine as long as they have good stories. Unless you aren't grown up enought to be reading them, but I don't believe in age restrictions so yea...
It's all about the story, and this one is good.
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Yeah, I can identify with that. Like I said, the depth of everything else so far pretty much excuses it.
>Though I maintain that there's real-life people who've taken those steps just as fast, sometimes even without booze :p
I, er, wouldn't know anything about that.
>I prefer the term "fic with clop" in this case
Terribly sorry, I'm not good with this 'politically correct' stuff
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>Clop fics are fine as long as they have good stories.
>as long as they have good stories.
>good stories
Rare. As. Hen's. Teeth.
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Well, it was advice from me to Twilight, not to you as a writer. At the least, there's a chance they'd work, at least partially.
But, you're the writer, and I know that the vision in your head will only be shared with us if we read enough, and you write enough.
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thanks i try.
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Considering the Subject matter and the Advanced State of this, I'm still surprised that this isn't the story with the most Shrinkcases is.
THAT honor still belongs to the original Evangelion series.
Eagerly waiting and hoping this Will continue to be this good.
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I agree with this.
I have to say, I ALMOST stopped reading a couple of times. Back when Twilight was starting to show signs of changing, when she assaulted (Because that was DEFINITELY assault!) Rainbow Dash, and when those two stallions almost got Trixie to name a few.
I am GLAD I kept reading. Carry on author person. You've earned my like/fave, late in the game though it may be. :)
978405 yes, but aren't the rarest gems the most beautiful?
979084 Absolutely. This fic is like a rare, fine wine ... with awesome sexy bits
“It’s... it’s nothing like that!” Twilight quickly said as she made frantic gestures with her fore hooves to support her words. “You do your job so well, you are so good in everything you do for me, but... but Trixie, you don’t need to continue being my maid, you’re my marefriend... you shouldn’t have to serve me. I can see that now, and... for what it’s worth, I apologise.” She paused for a moment, and suddenly remembered the flood of apologies the night before. “Again, I mean. I apologise again.”
Never thought i would hear that from Twilight im glad I did!
But then i read on and i litterally yell NOO!
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You have absolutely no concept of what that would do to someone in Trixie's position, let alone Twilight's. Having experience there, it's akin to you sitting there and telling someone they no longer have a reason to be who they are. You are stealing their identity and very existence from them. And for Twilight, she would have to live with being the one who permanently destroyed her greatest love. That's not an order any dominant worth their salt or the love and dedication paid them can ever get over, trust me.
But back to the story, Twilight's only just now realized. Any position of leadership is also meant to be a position of servitude, even that of the dominant. You have responsibilities, one of which is to never break your role in the relationship. Doing so betrays yourself, and the trust placed in you by your submissive(s).
979220 Wow... It was a joke...