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The Busy Farmer and the Playful Pegasus

Applejack wants to go racing with Rainbow Dash, but she's stuck on the farm. Maybe there's still a way for them to have fun?

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AJtheRaven #1 · May 17th, 2017 · 1 · ·

D'awwwww.

Emerald Harp #2 · May 18th, 2017 · · ·

Good stuff.

Inspector Brown

Inspector Brown #3 · May 18th, 2017 · · ·

Not sure whether to reference Tom Sawyer or Karate Kid...either way, good job.

PonyDragon #4 · Jun 1st, 2017 · · ·

: "I've been feeling really...zippy."
: "Zippy?"
: "Yeah, zippy. Which is totally a word."
: "Well, I ain't Twilight, so I don't know."

: "As the fandom-declared dictionary I know that it isn't a word."

: "You want to take a nap?"
: "Nope. You?"
: "Nope. What's next?"

That Rainbow Dash is a Changeling!

Nice story.
I enjoyed reading it.

Note:
You should add the cover-source. I'm sure the artist would approve.

Found two small errors:

Pegasii

Should be "Pegasi".

"Sure am! I bench press one-hundred and fifty!"
[...] "Wow, Dash! One-hundred and twenty...that sure is a lot."

Is it 150 or 120? Better decide. And what unit are you using? Gram?

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