Captain_Hairball
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I will have to read to see how Pinkie fits into this. I know what I would like to see but will have to see if it goes my way (always a fan of PinkieDash so you never know).
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I am totally unable to answer this in any way, affirmative or negative, without spoilers, but I can tell you that Pinkie's first appearance is in the next chapter, so there's that?
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No worries I did not expect a direct answer but I am glad to hear Pinkie is coming into the story so soon.
FIFTY BITS?! That's skyway robbery!
I'm quite enjoying this:
But I find myself wondering why Tree Hugger instead of Applejack?
Mike
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Thank you!
Because Tree Hugger and AJ are very different characters and it'd be a completely different story?
OH SHIT THIS IS INTERESTING YOU GOT MY BRAIN GOING. WALL OF TEXT INCOMING.
Taking my character interpretations for granted, I think AJ is, at least initially, a tough ship for Flutters. Aj is nearly as boisterous and extroverted as Pinkie Pie, and might scare Flutters off initially. One of the reasons I ship Flutterdash so much is that I think Rainbow's pretty close to the center of the extrovert/introvert line. She seems perfectly comfortable in social situations, but also spends a lot of time alone flying or napping. So she can drag Flutters out of her shell, but will understand her need for alone time.
Anyway, assuming they could get past the meet cute, and Flutters could make AJ understand that she doesn't want to spend every waking moment with AJ's family, they'd make pretty good lovers. They have the traditional butch/fem dichotomy thing going on, and like Flutterdash, Appleshy is about AJ lending FLutters her strength, while Flutters helps bring out AJ's tender side. In fact as a romance plot, an AJ/Dash/Flutters triangle is a bit too symmetrical. I tend to write polyamory at the slightest excuse, and AJ and Dashie might hit it off and just fall into a happy little triad of endurance contests and sexy consensual Flutter-abuse.
Which would make a good pure clop, but a less good romance.
(Omits paragraph about FlutterMac, but if Flutters were dating his sister, and around that big gentle stud all the time, I bet she'd be tempted.)
Annnnyyyyyway, I'm not saying too much about Flutterhugger, because spoilers, but I'm writing Tree Hugger as a quiet gentle mystic with a tough side, so more of a contrast with Rainbow than AJ is.
Now I want to write a FlutterAppleDash clop, though.
So thanks for asking!
Hey. Thats story is very cool. I hope than more come soon. I really enjoy your interpretation of these characters, specially Tree Hugger. She has more personality than in the show. Keep good work ;)
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Thanks!
Taking a minor character from a not so great episode and fleshing her out is one of the great pleasures of fanfiction.
Rainbow Dash grinned. “I have certain skills. So. Are you ready to come home, though?”
"I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for ransom I can tell you I don't have money, but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you let my daughter go now that'll be the end of it. I will not look for you, I will not pursue you, but if you don't, I will look for you, I will find you and I will kill you."
Okay. I'm done
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Exactly. One of my 'weaknesses' as a writer is that I can't resist these little meme-y wise cracks.
If that really is a weakness.
Very nice!
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Thank you!
I can say this story is a vary good read.
it has some cannon in it from the comics just to make it vary interesting.
exultant righting Captain_Hairball
Yes
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'Came for a clop, stayed for the plot'
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*Stares at the golden currency, puzzled*
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Heheeeey! Some one doesn't use those cheep 'how-do-you-call-it'.
I was getting sick seeing them everywhere. Just look at it:
How unoriginal. I bet it was some Chinese who tiped it in... No offense.
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And picture on the end? Wow! Some author is taking to the heart to not leave the end blank!
Stayed for the plot, but misses the clop
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It's a hard balance to maintain.
Well, this story convinced me to follow you. I'm really impressed by your skills and can't wait to read more of your work~
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome :3
It's funny because rockville is an actual place in Maryland! Lol
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I know! One of the best REM songs is about it. And how you shouldn't go there.
I mean, seriously the town where most of the Pies live isn't named in canon AFIK but I think Rockville is a great name for it.
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True dat!
I know I hate Zephyr but damn son
Something tells me that I would adopt this reasoning from Fluttershy's dad when I become a dad in the future
Great story! Ending felt a bit rushed, and I'm probably one of the few who prefers Tree Hugger being shipped with Fluttershy over Rainbow, but ah well!
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Thanks!
I'm still learning, as a writer. And Flutterhugger's a good ship! They're all good ponies are wonderful.
Well... that was some dialog. Between "do you like coffee?", "you have a big butt", and "probably gay, because you were staring at my plot earlier", poor Fluttershy must have been mortified!
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For a writer, that probably goes for a lot of things. I certainly find that's the case as a reader: many fanfics read as if they had a lot more thought put in than the actual show.
Because what kind of repulsive freak doesn't like to listen to Nightwish? They make the most incredible music ever!
(PS: I was just kidding about the "repulsive freak" part. If you're reading this comment, you're an awesome person no matter what music you listen to.)
As for that ending, I only have one word: hawt.
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Thanks for the nice comments!
You're welcome.
IIRC, Fluttershy didn't really "crash", so much as "panic, flail, fall, and run away".
Any spanking in this?
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I don't remember! D: I mean there's a good chance there is because I wrote it, but I mostly remember a lot of grinding and hoofing in the sex scenes.
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This is probably a legit continuity error. I'll address it if the stars align and I can remember it when I have time.
Oh no
Great story! Really creative and fun read
Ehh, just couldn't get into this fic. Super cliché 'mucks up both sides of the triangle at once' broke the camel's back, I guess.
Characters feel kind of off, your 'verse feels too adult, especially with Pinkie, and the smut isn't anything special, either. Sorry I can't really be more specific, but hopefully this is still worth more than just a dislike.