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A Warning to Others

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:rainbowlaugh:
All that dirty talk was funny...
Cock of the night... hahahaa!!

Comment posted by WyngsTriumphant deleted Sep 13th, 2017

And then the castle is over flooded with cum.

8421511
What if Spike and Gabby are in a relationship?

This was cheesy in all the right ways. Just, at once so damn funny, while being rather hot. Plus, d'awwwww they are just so sweet together.

Though Celestia tricking and tempting, and trying to get Luna to impregnate her against Luna's will is a bit... unsettling... not that Luna seems to be putting up TO large a fight. Still kind of wrong on you there Tia! But, the reasoning, the follow up to her feelings, wanting that again, it fits well.

Still a cheesy in the best way, fun, and sexy little story all around.

8423033

Oh, good point about the consent there. Ugh, writing fully consensual porn is so much harder than just making sure nopony gets ambushed in an alley. :facehoof:

Added a bit of internal monologue for Luna that I hope helps?

Luna sighed internally. She supposed she knew what she was getting into when she developed a penis potion that fired live ammunition, so to speak. She into rose up onto the bed again, her cock bobbing over Celestia’s face. She tipped the jar out over it, covering it in clear and glistening goo. Excess dripped out onto Celestia’s face and neck. “You are playing a dangerous game, sister, tempting me so. Please cast the spell.”

Otherwise: Thank you! I am pleased to write happy, cheesy clop! :pinkiehappy:

8423212

She into rose up onto the bed again,

Typo there, but, yeah it does overall come off like, Luna isn't WHOLLY unwilling just, more "Is this really a good idea?" But not really going to put up a huge fight about it.

8423255

It was good feedback! Thank you!

Next time I write a breeding fic, I promise everyone involved will be like, "YEAH! Let's make us a FOAL!" :rainbowlaugh:

Okay, not promise. But probably!

Downvote or upvote....hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...upvote!

8421519
Either you actually spend your time and energy spreading your salty tears on things you don't like, or you have a genuine literary concern that makes you press the red button, instead of just agreeing to disagree and moving on. I also guesstimate a 5% chance of you being a troll.

8423868
Just a troll. Shit posting. You are one of the few that get that. Have a follow!!!

Please keep going. This is so good.

Good research project, because I note that there's a relative shortage of stallions in Equestria, even a thousand years after the War of the Two Sisters.

Hmm, Tenebris or Tenebra as names for the foal.

Ahh, you work well and consistently. Love it when you post up anything new.

It was this commonality that lead them to another discovery: the Westermarck effect had a sell-by date, and theirs was long past.

Best opening ever :rainbowlaugh:

8655286

Are you suggesting Equestria's apparent gender imbalance is because of war casualties? Because that is a fucking sick headcanon. :rainbowderp:


9979668

Hehe thank you. :raritywink:

9980571
Maybe partly that, maybe partly a genetic predisposition to have only female foals.

Or (if you want to go really dark) some communities have a tradition of infant exposure, eliminating colts that fail to meet a physical or mental standard.

9980587

Interesting!

My core headcanon is that ponies are morally better than people, so that last wouldn't work for me, but... IDK, there's a story somewhere in the war casualties thing.

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