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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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Comment posted by SuperPinkBrony12 deleted Jul 28th, 2017

Always glad to see mommy Fluttershy.

As cute as this is, there's a lot of odd bolded text that sticks out honestly. It's kinda distracting.

8157125 Probably a Google Doc glitch.

8157130 Might be best if you go back and re-edit to fix these errors. Less distracting for the readers.

8157132 I fixed it, I guess I can't import it and need to do it Manually.

8157144 Yeah, or you can do what I do, type up the fic here on the site, Then when it's done, transfer it to a G-Doc.

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8157151 I just copy and paste by hand and do whatever text changes I need to do on here.

She’d read that diapers were a big part of it, which the brash speedster found odd. The only diapers she knew about were the kind foals wore

This makes me think she's read about adult foals, and is interested in giving it a try

I don’t have as many as I’d like

If she's ordered a case, she's not going to use them all in one evening. So presumably she's only got one or two left out of the order.

they were completely out of the diapers she’d gotten before

I thought she had them delivered before; noticing that the Emporium is out of that brand would imply she usually buys them here.

she knew Dash didn't like diapers

That's an odd thing to know about your friend. I'd expect most people to think "My friend's wearing diapers? Does she have some kind of medical problem I don't know about?" rather than jumping straight to assuming she likes them. Or is this a hint that Fluttershy is into them too?


It's a little confusing; mixed signals about how often Dash wears diapers, and how long she's been into this for.

Apart from that, looks like an interesting start to a story.

“I don't see why you couldn't have asked Starlight for help instead of me.”

My thoughts exactly.

foalification

Foalification: the process of turning a pony, usually a fully grown one, back into a foal.

Why is this not a word? :rainbowhuh:

I don't understand why this has so many dislikes. This is off to a very good, very cute start! Mommy Fluttershy is best Fluttershy!

8157151 That seems rather pointless. Why transfer it to Google Docs if you write it on here?

8157164 Yep. I do that too!

8161370 It helps with proofreading purposes, it's easier to access google docs than it is to access an unpublished fic or chapter.

I hope Scootaloo joins in, but I also hope this won't turn into a patty cake like story..

8163872 I don't think it will. As for Scootaloo joining in, that's probably something worth saving for the sequel.

Given what we've seen of Rainbow Dash's parents, I think I can see why she wouldn't be as hesitant to be treated like a baby by Fluttershy. Fluttershy would be willing to listen to Dashie if she said she wanted to stop. :twilightsmile:

I really like this story. I'm planning on doing a story featuring Dashie being diapered and babied by her parents.

8182047 Considering the way they acted in "Parental Glideance" I could actually see them doing that in canon. I mean, they even kept the diaper she was in from when she spoke her first words.

8183690 And Dashie loves it! Every minute of it! :twilightsmile:

MY only minor gripe is the constant use of () <-- theses.

Well the stories yours now, I wonder how many chapters it'll have. I'm suer your gonna make some changes to the chapters.

8288379 I'll probably only do two more chapters, possibly three. I know the next chapter will have Fluttershy change Dashie's diaper and feed her breakfast, then leave Dashie for a bit to provide a cover story for Dashie's obligations, while Dashie has a bit of lone time to act like a foal. And then a chapter where Rainbow confesses to Fluttershy about why she diapers up and acts like a foal, and they come to an agreement to do it every once in a while. A possible third chapter could involve splitting the ideas for the next chapter in two (one from Fluttershy's perspective while she's out in town, and one from Rainbow's perspective while she's at Fluttershy's cottage).

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I wonder if you will do a Sequel, I originally planned on doing one were Twilight would get involved along with Scootaloo, and Fluttershy kinda would want to give the baby thing a try, so Twilight would of been the mother to the three.

I still have part of chapter 3 written would you like to have it? or are ya gonna start a new one on your own? it only has 110 words.

8289448 Since it's only 110 words and wasn't part of the fic when it was transferred, no thank you. Maybe I could do a sequel to this eventually, though for me the sequel would involve Dashie accidentally being discovered by one of the Wonderbolts (probably Soarin or Fleetfoot) and after some teasing they opt to join her for a bit of pampering as a way to relieve stress.

would be cool if Scootaloo ended up checking on Dashie and catches her in a diaper at first but gets worried that the feather flu has made her sicker than she should be and tries taking her to the hospital.

but good chapter.

8340928 Scootaloo won't find out what's happened to Rainbow Dash.

Next to her was a small, wooden step stool, and above her was an opened cupboard containing a jar of cookies

I gave this a re read and I think I know what happened, Dash thought she could get the cookies down herself but ended up falling down and possibly hurting herself. I must admit this is something I probably wouldn't of done in my story.

This story is enjoyable keep up the good work

8349682 Adult Baby/Diaper Lover.

Diaper Lovers just like to wear (and sometimes use) diapers for various reasons, but don't necessarily want to act like a baby.

Adult Babies not only like to wear (and sometimes use) diapers for various reasons, but also want to act like and be treated like a baby to varying degrees.

I do believe this had a rather sweet and cute ending to it.

"Should I flush Angel? I think he could fit, and that bunny deserves punishment for being so mean to Fluttershy all the time,"

:rainbowlaugh: My thoughts exactly!

"He might drown if you flush him, Fluttershy wouldn't like that. And even if he survives the trip down, don't alligators live in the sewers? He might get eaten, or sick."

Wiggles McSunbask does! :twilightsmile:

Please make a sequel, I really liked the story!

8424519 I might like to, but this isn't high on my list of padded pony works to follow up on. Still, if you want to make an unofficial sequel or continuation, you're more than welcome to.

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Maybe I will once I get some experience writing. Its been a couple years since I've wrote any fics.

It's so beautiful I'm crying.... :heart:

THIS IS GLORIOUS. The world needs more baby Dashie in it and you gave us just that. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us. It's just wonderful. PM me when that sequel comes around! I just can't wait to see it!

You rock! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

been a while since, I've read this story, trying to get some more details for my story, which is still in a work in progress... eheh

Quite adorable! I do say so myself! makes me giddy and smile

beautiful ending, bravo I say Bravo!

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