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concordion
an amazing balance between feelings and emotions and incredibly hot M-scenes
concordion
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Killing it as always. Damn.
Love the way you characterize our poor overly stressed purple princess.
Always love to see new fics from you. Looking forward to reading this.
yes
YES
YEEEES!!!!!
all the yeses :D
That blurb reminds me of Bendy's trollfic stories.
>foal batter
wow congratulations, you have achieved the least sexy phrase on this entire site
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That's not at all a unique term for it.
Plenty of other stories use it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Wow that was hot. I'm really looking forward to the rest!
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I don't know foal batter has a pregnancy fetish angle to it. Fuck muck on the other hand...
... so when are we going to see Fluttershy stuff the cannoli.... and will Twilight be the only one getting stuffed...
I will comment to hold up the trade offer
Love all of this.
The setting, the way you write the three, the descriptions of the cum and musk and of course the oral stuff.
You are an awsome clop writer and i look forward to the next one greatly.
Ahh, yes. Obscene, musky cocks with obscene cum volumes on obscenely horny mares. AND it's wonderfully written, with very entertaining and engaging subtext. This goes the whole nine yards. I can't wait for more!
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Thanks, everyone! I'm having a blast writing it. Not my usual style, so it's been a real challenge. But I like to aim high!
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And especially thanks, devoted readers!
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Heh. You know, it's been so long since I've watched any actual, official content from MLP, I sometimes wonder if I'm even writing Twilight at all anymore. TV Twilight would totally agree to getting gangbanged and free-used just to please her friends, right?
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Fuck muck? Woof, that's--wow. I've never heard that before. I don't think I'm brave enough to use that one. Fuck muck, he says. One liter of fuck muck, please. How would you like your fuck muck, today, madam? Fuck muck--get your fuck muck!
Certainly gets the point across.
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I mean, TV Twilight never explicitly refused to be used as a cum rag and gang-banged by her friends, so technically this can fit perfectly in canon for her.
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Canon Twilight is so wound up, honestly she's one breakdown and a grope away from a friendly gang bang.
I don't know, She seemed pretty all in on friendship. I could see her being convinced to the merits of friends with benefits. And the way the she always did things 'by the book' in the early seasons, like the sleepover episode for instance. If someone had snuck in an addition that stated sleepovers involved orgies and/or gangbangs... I mean, I don't think she would need all that much convincing. Or maybe I'm just a weirdo. 🤔
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Reminded me of this:
(I'm not supposed to post links to nsfw material, so follow this at your own peril) https:// e-hentai.org/s/f146f4f922/505518-40
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Man, I remember when this came out, good times. You have excellent taste.
Too much "telling not showing", but otherwise warrents a sequel
I have no idea why this story isn't getting more attention. It's so wonderfully written, smut wise and story wise. I've always loved mature fics that can combine porn with story, especially when they're THIS good! Loved this! Hit all the right spots! Astounding! Plenty of sap that opens roads, MORE than enough spunk but not nearly enough at the same time, hehe, and it was absolutely worth the read.
As for that ending: It opens a possibly to see this Twilight actually FINDING love sometime in the future and I love that. She needs it just as much as everyone else needs it, and she's surrounded by love she doesn't believe she can have. I don't know who the lucky stallion or mare would be but they can turn those sad tears into happy tears it doesn't matter who! Make her feel loved!
That or Dash n' Shy actually convince Twilight that they actually DO love her more than she can believe. Development on the horizon?...
All in all, can't wait to see more from you!
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A sequel would definitely tie the ribbon on this nice present here.
"Happy" ending hm...
It was certainly different.
I am surprised you actually had Rainbowdash and Fluttershy caring about Twilight and her feelings.
Especially because they still seemed to care about her after they got what they wanted from her. (Potions and orgasms)
I was expecting this chapter to be about Fluttershys brutal conquest, and Twilight coming to some kind of "hurts so good" realization that left her hating herself, but resigned to doing this forever because she couldnt live without penis.
You write feelings extraordinarily well, they just usually arent pleasent feelings.
Which for me means most of your stories leave me feeling rather hollow, which I imagine is the point.
A recurring theme of ponies letting their lust drive them to hurt each other and themselves. Likely isnt supposed to leave one feeling well disposed towards them.
Which is sort of still what happened here? Except upon realizing that Twilight was hurt they responded by trying to make her feel better. Instead of twisting the knife or with apathy.
Which is throwing me for enough of a loop that I felt the need to write out this whole spiel.
Awesome
I came here to fap, not feel.
But really, the worst thing about this story is the 'Completed' tag. I hope we get another story in this universe some day, because that was great. I loved the ending too.
Damn that was hot. It got a smidge over the top for me at various times (mostly in the second half), but I'm willing to look past that because a) that's more than compensated by the other (majority) parts and b) it's anthro, so I'm willing to accept more over-the-topness compared to if this was humanized.
And the anthro works here. My #1 biggest issue with anthro is when a fic only actually 'requires' it for only a very small part of the story -- ie the buildup contains very little reference to things like clothes, and maybe it focuses on boobs for like one paragraph before it moves on -- so why not write it as pony instead. This is not one of those fics.
Ok, that’s new, never heard that before lol
Oh my god, how many flipping hilarious quotes from dash are in this fic
I love when clop has this much character to it!
I'm not sure if this is my favorite or second-favorite of your stories. Either way it's amazing!
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If it were your second favorite, what would be your favorite? Which is the other contender?
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How to Serve Your Kingdom
great job on story
SQUEEE!
Good lord, this is giving me some dark, dark story ideas.
I wish AJ joined sooner... Twi needs help
All in all good... but, since you asked:
I think part 3 was a bit 'too much of good thing'.
Having chapters 1 2 4 is plenty of smut and balances out nicely with the sweet stuff.
I usually avoid anthro, but you certainly make a compelling case for it here
This was a really sweet absolutely HOT amazing story that both turned me on more then I've ever been and made me tear up at the very sweet ending. What a roller coaster ride of a story, absolutely wonderful amd one I'll definitely be coming back to read again!
This definitely has way more heartfelt discussions and melancholy than one would expect from a story titled Rocket-fueled Futa Gangbang. But I guess I should've anticipated that given that concordion is the author. Do you get off on making your readers cry while they clop perchance?
Loved when Fluttershy gave Twilight that first taste of cum, pushing fingers inside her mouth, playing with her tongue, making her suckle on them. Super hot. And when she grabbed Twilight's hair and hooked her by her cheek.
The moment when Twilight burped the jizz-stench into Rainbow's face was awesome too. Serves her right. Kinda wish there was even more focus on that, and that Twilight felt a pang of justice instead of being so sorry for it. She's just too nice!
I honestly expected Rainbow to last a bit longer, Seemed like they were gonna seriously double team Twilight to the point of total exhaustion, just covering her completely with their thick magical spunk. But the story did end with a very pleasant picture of their future antics which I enjoyed a lot too.
Really hope to see more kinky futa content from you!
Not really sure I'd classify this as a happy ending. I mean they're just using her as a fuck toy and they don't really "love" her. But good story.