Yay!

Always glad to see mommy Fluttershy.

As cute as this is, there's a lot of odd bolded text that sticks out honestly. It's kinda distracting.

8157125 Probably a Google Doc glitch.

8157130 Might be best if you go back and re-edit to fix these errors. Less distracting for the readers.

8157132 I fixed it, I guess I can't import it and need to do it Manually.

8157144 Yeah, or you can do what I do, type up the fic here on the site, Then when it's done, transfer it to a G-Doc.

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8157151 I just copy and paste by hand and do whatever text changes I need to do on here.

8157195 What?

She’d read that diapers were a big part of it, which the brash speedster found odd. The only diapers she knew about were the kind foals wore

This makes me think she's read about adult foals, and is interested in giving it a try

I don’t have as many as I’d like

If she's ordered a case, she's not going to use them all in one evening. So presumably she's only got one or two left out of the order.

they were completely out of the diapers she’d gotten before

I thought she had them delivered before; noticing that the Emporium is out of that brand would imply she usually buys them here.

she knew Dash didn't like diapers

That's an odd thing to know about your friend. I'd expect most people to think "My friend's wearing diapers? Does she have some kind of medical problem I don't know about?" rather than jumping straight to assuming she likes them. Or is this a hint that Fluttershy is into them too?

It's a little confusing; mixed signals about how often Dash wears diapers, and how long she's been into this for.

Apart from that, looks like an interesting start to a story.

“I don't see why you couldn't have asked Starlight for help instead of me.”

My thoughts exactly.

foalification

Foalification: the process of turning a pony, usually a fully grown one, back into a foal.

Why is this not a word?

I don't understand why this has so many dislikes. This is off to a very good, very cute start! Mommy Fluttershy is best Fluttershy!

8157151 That seems rather pointless. Why transfer it to Google Docs if you write it on here?

8157164 Yep. I do that too!

8161370 It helps with proofreading purposes, it's easier to access google docs than it is to access an unpublished fic or chapter.

I hope Scootaloo joins in, but I also hope this won't turn into a patty cake like story..

8163872 I don't think it will. As for Scootaloo joining in, that's probably something worth saving for the sequel.

It's so beautiful I'm crying....

been a while since, I've read this story, trying to get some more details for my story, which is still in a work in progress... eheh