What Are Friends For?

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Dusk Melody

Dusk Melody #1 · Jan 17th, 2017 · 19 · ·

“It's fine with me,” said Shining. “It's not the evening I had planned, but it should be a hell of a lot of fun. Wanna help me fuck my wife, Big Mac?”
Big Mac's body relaxed. “Yeah,” he said. “I really do.”

Cue 70's porn music

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #2 · Jan 18th, 2017 · 2 · ·

I like the concept of the story idea. But reading through it, I was expecting a better pacing for all the action. Of course, I get that this was a commission based story and thus you had only so much to work with, but all the same, it could have been executed better if the action was more descriptive, gave us more of a chance to enjoy it than kinda rushing from one act to the next. That's my two cents anyway. You did good

Crescent Minor

Crescent Minor #3 · Jan 21st, 2017 · · ·

derpibooru 954154, drawn by audarius

Searching either than number or that artist name gets me nothing. Could you please post the link?

MassDriver

MassDriver #4 · Jan 22nd, 2017 · · ·

7886611

The number works fine for me. But I did misspell the artist's name. It's "audrarius". I'd post the link, but I think there's rules against nsfw image links.

Zyrian

Zyrian #5 · Jan 23rd, 2017 · · ·

Was hoping for a bit more bisexuality, but oh well. Maybe next time!

From your description of Shining and his thoughts on the matter, he seemed to be skirting the line anyway.

Good job.

MassDriver

MassDriver #6 · Jan 23rd, 2017 · · ·

7889325 Thanks! I try not to go too far outside what the commissioner asked for, so I didn't want to include any explicitly bisexual stuff. But I did intend Shining Armor to come off pretty open-minded, at least... It definitely didn't take a lot to convince him to bring Big Mac into the bedroom!

Zyrian