• Member Since 24th Jan, 2016
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ForgottenDreams


I bid you welcome traveler let this ancient storyteller do what he does best. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCcsS60n04i48UCZJ0lYPGsQ

Comments ( 14 )

:pinkiecrazy:And for the third time!:heart:

So why the semicolon before 'and' in every instance? I had thought it was just an upload glitch with the first story, but by now it looks like you think that's the right way to do it.

Damn soarin, you sure can keep goin, how are you not dead from all that XD

7274827 I only use commas for lists, the end of quotations, lyrics. And; or; but gets semicolons

7275187 it is Maud's drug. It increases production, recovery rate; and aggressive nature. you kind of need to read the second one to get that.

7275767 Oh, sorry, it was a great story tho!

7276116 its alright:pinkiesmile: I wrote it like that so there would be enough of him to share:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

7275758 so do you not understandthe language well? They shouldn't be there at all. Or is it just a way to make people not want to read the story?

You forgot the EQ Tag.

7276149 you can use a semicolon anywhere you would a comma; along with its other use of sentence splicing. Did you not know that? eighth grade English 101

7276140 yeah, he seems fully capable of "satisfying" everyone:raritywink:

Comment posted by SilverHoof deleted Jun 8th, 2016

Use a damn thesaurus sometime. It gets a bit tiring seeing you refer to their breasts as just "boobs" all the time. Breasts. Tits. Chesticles. Dirty pillows. Chest mounds. There's like 50 words for the things on a woman's chest. Use them sometime!

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